I realize that it's a little cold to be posting this thread on the same day that Ezrihel announces that she'll be leaving the Omniverse for a while. Ezzy, if you happen to read this I'm sorry - and again, I wish you all the best with what's going on in your life, and I sincerely hope that things work out for you! It's just that I am a little impatient and want to get the rewritten void quest underway.
To get those unaware updated on this subject: Ezrihel has read my original Void Quest for Amaterasu (read here), and determined that it's not sufficient to pass as it is. I decided to rewrite the entire quest from the ground up as opposed to tacking on more words to the end. She gave me some feedback and suggestions for improvement for that second go. Once the new rewritten Void Quest is ready for posting the old posts I linked to above will be wiped.
I want to ask if there is any staffer (preferably someone who grades quests :o) who could poke through my current plans for my rewritten Void Quest to point out if they see any glaring errors? Just to be clear: I don't need you to read any part of what I've written or re-written, but rather go through the summary (refer to the post below). I moreso want a second opinion to make it less likely that I fail a second time. Can't guarantee that I won't fail of course, but an unbiased opinion from the outside would be greatly appreciated!
To get those unaware updated on this subject: Ezrihel has read my original Void Quest for Amaterasu (read here), and determined that it's not sufficient to pass as it is. I decided to rewrite the entire quest from the ground up as opposed to tacking on more words to the end. She gave me some feedback and suggestions for improvement for that second go. Once the new rewritten Void Quest is ready for posting the old posts I linked to above will be wiped.
I want to ask if there is any staffer (preferably someone who grades quests :o) who could poke through my current plans for my rewritten Void Quest to point out if they see any glaring errors? Just to be clear: I don't need you to read any part of what I've written or re-written, but rather go through the summary (refer to the post below). I moreso want a second opinion to make it less likely that I fail a second time. Can't guarantee that I won't fail of course, but an unbiased opinion from the outside would be greatly appreciated!
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