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Move Approval V
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@ Cirno:

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(09-11-2017, 05:33 PM)Cirno Wrote: Ice cubes "great crusher" (300) (requires melee proficiency)

Cirno spends ten seconds at the exhaustion of something akin to stretching (she can not move while making the ice weapon), to create a ten pound, two handed hammer. Hammer head is five inches in diameter and the staff holding the head is 3.5 feet tall and a inch in diameter. She can weld it with ease though to swing it requires both hands so she can't use most of her moves. It is strong enough to shatter a red wood in the red wood forest in two. It can take a beating though she usually drops it after a few attacks (five at the max.), melts after a minute. The energy usage is roughly that of a person pushing a 100 pound boulder (this is for all five swings). She calls her hammer Hyōki or ice age. The hammer is unwieldy due to how the hammer is made and how its build, its not unusable but it is something that requires a commitment to any attack in full

Approved!

Quote:Cocytus (300) (requires melee proficiency)

A western long sword from a time when men were knights and the round table was a reality. Cirno creates a five foot long blade in two seconds this is fairly easy on her like stretching though, she can move while making this weapon. It is made of a steel that is freezing to the touch. Her weaker weapon by a large margin. It is used mostly to cut and maim but not destroy. She can move at her top speed and its energy consumption is minor (like doing a fairly easy training exercise) but the accuracy is lower. The damage is like that of a actual medieval sword.

Approved!

(09-12-2017, 03:27 PM)Cirno Wrote: Yuki-onna "Cirno" (2000) (alternate form)
Cirno becomes five foot tall even her hair grows past her shoulders retaining its ice blue color. Her dress becomes longer with a scarf accompanying it. She loses her ice wings and her "immortality" that she normally has. She ages slowly and is what someone who kept fairly fit in there 20's and thirty's would look like. Her mental state is of one in there twenty's and thirty's. (she is a mix of the two photo's)
[Image: Cirno-nee.full.131800.jpg][Image: adult-cirno.png]
Her personality becomes less cheerful and kind, she is aggressive to a point of protecting herself against heat due to becoming a "Yuki-onna". In all actuality she becomes the Youkai of ice age's its just that she is close enough to being a yuki-onna to be placed in there species.
Atk: 4
Def: 4
Spd: 0
Tec: 2

Approved![/spoiler]

@ Aquamarine:

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(09-11-2017, 06:17 PM)Aquamarine Wrote: Blue Aura: Tears (T1 Super Utility, 600 OM, requires Ranged, Debuff, Area)
Using her memories of Blue Diamond and her powers, Aquamarine recreates the sad aura that Blue Diamond can create in order to make everyone around her cry and lose focus. It takes half a second for the aura to be created, and once it is created, everyone within a 50 foot radius around Aquamarine will start to cry, though Aquamarine will be immune to the aura since she is the one creating the aura. Not only will the crying cause anyone to lose focus due to having tears in their eyes, but the crying also lowers her opponent's TEC and SPD by 1 each for one round, split between the opponents in radius. The aura will not be able to affect those using a T1 Super Defense, and will not be able to lower someone's SPD to be lower than 0.

(Don't worry, once I get the reward from the Faction Quest I turned in, I will be able to purchase it.)

Approved![/spoiler]

@ Mega Man X:

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(09-11-2017, 08:51 PM)Mega Man X Wrote: Silver Stinger - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Hornet Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a white body with yellow-gold armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a large silvery cone like a spearhead, traveling at the speed of an arrow up to 20 meters accurately before falling out of trajectory. The stinger injects an immobilizing venom into whatever it impacts with, stunning the damaged area for 10 seconds unless it is deflected or instantly removed. X can only fire one shot per second, and can only ever fire 20 stingers without recharging the weapon at a safe base.

This move needs a stronger drawback, like fatigue or a lack of accuracy or something. Also, do the stunning effects "stack" or multiply depending on how many stingers a foe is struck with?

Quote:Rose Splash - 300 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
A special weapon obtained from the data of Plant Man.EXE. X can equip this weapon in a flash, shifting his color scheme into a green body with pink armor, and he cannot use any other special weapon until he reverts to normal. When used, the X-Buster fires a shotgun blast of plant thorns, like deadly flechettes. The blast of thorns can only cover an area 10 meters out in a 1-meter-square area. Charged version fires a shotgun of seeds instead, which explode into a patch of lashing vines 1 second after they hit a surface. X can only fire one shot per 2 seconds, and can only ever fire 14 shots without recharging the weapon at a safe base.

This also needs a drawback! Fatigue or something will do it.[/spoiler]

@ Captain Cold:

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(09-11-2017, 09:11 PM)Captain Cold Wrote:
(09-11-2017, 08:20 PM)Jade Harley Wrote: @ Captain Cold: With that Area of Effect, I'm pretty sure you'll need the Area Attack proficiency!

Okay. I'll buy that too. I went to go purchase it but realized I don't have a log page anymore. Should I re-make it or wait for a higher-up to do it?

Is the move good to go aside from the addition of Area Attack Prof?

Yes, that's very good. Approved! I'll set up your log, I guess, unless someone else has already done it? I have no clue where it went. One moment, please.

Here you go! http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9033[/spoiler]

@ Renji:

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(09-11-2017, 10:22 PM)Renji Wrote: @Miss Harley, changes are in bold

Demon Chain (600) Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency

A slit opens up in Kuzuru’s palm and a cylindrical weight attached to a length of chain unspools out. It takes about three seconds for the chain to reach the usable length of five feet. From here it can freely extend and retract up to a maximum length of thirty feet. He can swing the weighted chain around to strike at foes up to thirty feet away, grapple exposed limbs or weapons, and defend against physical attacks by blocking with a length of the chain or smacking a projectile out of the air. Grappling and blocking tend to be more difficult to pull off, especially at farther ranges. While active Kuzuru cannot use his Demon Guillotine move and is only has access to two of his four Demon Blades. Additionally the chain itself, while durable, is not impervious to damage and a sufficiently strong attack can shatter it. It takes about three seconds to completely reel the chain back in, regardless of its current length.

Alternatively Kuzuru can focus for five seconds, during which he cannot attack easily. After the five seconds of charge up he can throw his hand out towards a target. Ten weighted chains erupt outwards in a net-like pattern towards a target up to 30 feet. These chains wrap around limbs and anything else they can snare. The chains reel themselves in, assisted by Kuzuru’s own strength. A target can wriggle free using any manner of powers or moves such as malleability or phasing. The chains, while durable, can be broken with a strong enough attack. A strong enough opponent can fight back against Kuzuru’s pull. These chains will last indefinitely, but they are quite tiring to maintain especially against a strong opponent. While active Kuzuru cannot use Demon Guillotine and only has access to one of his four Demon Blades. Once expended Kuzuru must spend five seconds reeling the chains in during which he can move freely, but cannot attack easily.

Okay, grapple, block and strike... that'll be 900 OM, I'd say![/spoiler]

@ Desman Black:

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(09-12-2017, 11:25 AM)Desman Black Wrote: Human Des [Alt Form]-(2000 om)
Atk: 2
Def: 1
Spd: 4
Tec: 3

I'm gonna need a physical description, similar to the one you had to write when joining as Des.[/spoiler]
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