09-11-2017, 10:53 PM
Physical Description - Could you list some of the superficial details (like height and eye colour etc.)? You don't really get that info from a black and white manga panel of the character sitting down 
Stepping Stones - Honestly, this just seems like a fodder explanation of how he uses super jumping/ flying. I'm not gonna make it cost you anything, but it's basically just an explanation of how he utilises super jumping. So it'll be limited to what super jumping can do. Just to be clear though, you won't be able to jump to super jumping's max height off of something small like a leaf or a pebble or something. You'll need to land on a tree or a boulder or something of the sort (not just going to let you infinite jump without Flying).
Variable Weighted Strikes - If it's near instant, it's not going to do too much in terms of how it effects your attacks even if it has a substantial energy cost, which seems to be on an "if used continuously" clause. That being said, you can keep the move how it is if you want.
P.S - I would suggest giving, at least, a 1 second change time, it'll make it a little bit more effective.
Now, obviously, if you make yourself lighter, you'd be attacking faster but hitting lighter? but if that's something you can do, it's good to mention in the move.
This seems more like a 'I can make my physical attacks heavier or lighter' kind of deal, so I would say it'll cost you 600 for the variableness. Unless there's a third that I missed?
Hiriji's Katana - Using this in conjunction with another move doesn't increase the cost, the other move already covers your physical attacks. it's fine as a basic, 300 OM, Move.
Stepping Stones - Honestly, this just seems like a fodder explanation of how he uses super jumping/ flying. I'm not gonna make it cost you anything, but it's basically just an explanation of how he utilises super jumping. So it'll be limited to what super jumping can do. Just to be clear though, you won't be able to jump to super jumping's max height off of something small like a leaf or a pebble or something. You'll need to land on a tree or a boulder or something of the sort (not just going to let you infinite jump without Flying).
Variable Weighted Strikes - If it's near instant, it's not going to do too much in terms of how it effects your attacks even if it has a substantial energy cost, which seems to be on an "if used continuously" clause. That being said, you can keep the move how it is if you want.
P.S - I would suggest giving, at least, a 1 second change time, it'll make it a little bit more effective.
Now, obviously, if you make yourself lighter, you'd be attacking faster but hitting lighter? but if that's something you can do, it's good to mention in the move.
This seems more like a 'I can make my physical attacks heavier or lighter' kind of deal, so I would say it'll cost you 600 for the variableness. Unless there's a third that I missed?
Hiriji's Katana - Using this in conjunction with another move doesn't increase the cost, the other move already covers your physical attacks. it's fine as a basic, 300 OM, Move.