01-02-2018, 09:58 PM
@Marisa: How fast do the stars go? Saying "they travel 100ft in 30 seconds is fine.
Do the stars travel up, or just out in a ring sideways?
Also:
I think you should reword some things her. Or cut something out. At the moment there's two distances for how far the ribbons go from Marisa - unless the 15 ft one was for how far they travel (but then, they'd finish long before 30 seconds are up).
Lastly, you don't need area defense. There's no shield here, and the defensive lasers are just attacks. Unless you want them to be durable and deflect attacks or something.
So, maybe something like:
Non-directional laser (300) (requires ranged, area attack)
Marisa will charge up for 2.5 seconds before a set of four lasers will circle around her like the earth around the sun. (the lasers are 3 feet wide and spin around at a speed of 25 mph. And are 5 feet away from her.) Also while the attack in in progress; five pronged stars (1 inch wide, long, and thick.) Will fly sideways in a random pattern from her body in all direction for 100 feet spreading out farther from one another as the distance increases (there is 100 of them). The attack lasts for 30 seconds - the stars reach the 100ft distance once this time; she can’t attack with another move until this move finishes, and she can't cancel this move. She can only use this once per battle and must go 10 mph slower while charging or using it; the energy and concentration is fair (like doing some basic warm ups). The move is to deter the opponents from getting in close and to keep them on their feet, and as such won't do a lot of damage.
Do the stars travel up, or just out in a ring sideways?
Also:
Quote:the lasers go to a max distance of 15 feet, are 3 feet wide and spin around at a speed of 25 mph. And are 5 feet away from herAnd:
Quote:The attack lasts for 30 seconds
I think you should reword some things her. Or cut something out. At the moment there's two distances for how far the ribbons go from Marisa - unless the 15 ft one was for how far they travel (but then, they'd finish long before 30 seconds are up).
Lastly, you don't need area defense. There's no shield here, and the defensive lasers are just attacks. Unless you want them to be durable and deflect attacks or something.
So, maybe something like:
Non-directional laser (300) (requires ranged, area attack)
Marisa will charge up for 2.5 seconds before a set of four lasers will circle around her like the earth around the sun. (the lasers are 3 feet wide and spin around at a speed of 25 mph. And are 5 feet away from her.) Also while the attack in in progress; five pronged stars (1 inch wide, long, and thick.) Will fly sideways in a random pattern from her body in all direction for 100 feet spreading out farther from one another as the distance increases (there is 100 of them). The attack lasts for 30 seconds - the stars reach the 100ft distance once this time; she can’t attack with another move until this move finishes, and she can't cancel this move. She can only use this once per battle and must go 10 mph slower while charging or using it; the energy and concentration is fair (like doing some basic warm ups). The move is to deter the opponents from getting in close and to keep them on their feet, and as such won't do a lot of damage.