Official Move Approval IV

[Mark]

When were you the one in control? (600) tier one super attack (requires teleportation, physical attack prof.)
Chara stops what ever move she is doing and just faces the person. she pulls out her Real Knife and asks one simple question. "Will you give your soul to me?" The person will give a simple yes or no answer, and depending on the answer the attack will be the same in all regards. The attack takes about five seconds for the distance to teleport and to attack. if no she will say "No? you must of miss heard; WHEN WERE YOU THE ONE IN CONTROL?" She will then change her face to her "melty-face" and run at the person before teleporting to right infront of them and quickly slashing from the collar bone all the way down to your hip usually. the time to enact the attack is five seconds and she will be quite winded from it.

(the no/yes answer's are just rp fodder technicaly, but eather way the no route is the one chara will go through either way yes is just that you don't see her attack rp fodder wise)

Approved.

Bone Staff - 300 OM(Physical Strength Proficiency)

A 6 foot long humerus bone Papyrus wields like a quarterstaff. It's fairly light, and easy to swing, however it doesn't deal much damage. It can be used alongside normal Bones, but not Bone Grid. I'm not sure I need to describe it any further.

Bone Grid - 300 OM(Ranged Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency)

Papyrus takes 5 seconds to summon a 3 feet by 3 feet area of bones, about 4 inches tall, in an area up to 10 feet away from him. These bones sit still - unlike Papyrus' other bone attacks, they do not move. This attack doesn't do much damage, and takes a moderate amount of energy to use. They require full concentration to summon, and Papyrus must hold completely still to summon them, however they can be used in conjunction with normal bones.

Both good to go.

Green Sun Streetsweeper (requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff proficiency) – 600 OM

This gun is based on the Korobov TKB-022PM assault rifle. It contains about 30 rounds and fires at a rate of one round per every 5 seconds. The gun fires miniature Green Suns at Jade’s adversary, which go supernovae upon contact and plume out with a painful amount of greenish yellow energy, leaving lasting burns for up to a minute afterwards. The rounds travel as fast as a bullet and are about the size of a softball. These beams of raw energy take 5 seconds to charge up for a smaller blow, but can be charged for up to 10 seconds for greater effectivness. After its store of energy is emptied, the Green Sun Streetsweeper takes 6 seconds to recharge. Jade must remain stationary when firing this gun whether on the ground or in the air, but can rotate in place to track her target's movements.
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How much stronger is the charged version, and does it change the debuff length? How debilitating is the debuff? Like just a mildly annoying burny effect that gives a slight TEC reduction or is it like a full fledged ‘OW MY ARM’ that is a significant distraction? Unless it’s pretty weak, I think a full minute is kinda long for something you can fire off so often. What’s the range that this can fire? Can it be used with other moves? How draining is it on her stamina to recharge the gun?