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Move Creation Workshop
@Cirno:
Quote:Ice cubes "great crusher" (300) (requires melee proficiency, Master acrobat)
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Cirno spends ten seconds to create a ten pound two handed hammer. She can weld it with ease though to swing it requires both hands so she can use most of her moves; and its her strongest normal melee weapon. It is strong enough to break a red wood in the red wood forest in two. Its greatest down side is the unnatural energy useage required for it. It can take a beating though she usually drops it after a attack melting quite quickly, (as fodder it lasts out of combat a hour before it will crack and shatter into many small icicles dealing no damage). The energy usage is roughly that of a person pushing a modern tank around. Any person can see the magic being put into this relatively normal hammer to increase its destructive attacks clearly. She calls her hammer Hyōki or ice age
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Firstly, how big is the hammer?

Secondly:
Quote:It is strong enough to break a red wood in the red wood forest in two. 
Which would depend on your stats. In your new 4 ATK form, yeah. In your 2 ATK one, probably no? At least not in one hit.

Thirdly: I think you should just make it a tad clearer that the hammer melts after one attack. At the moment it's phrased as a "she usually makes it melt" which implies she could stop it melting if she wanted to.

Lastly: Can you make it clearer why you need master acrobat.

Also, pushing a tank? Damn. You sure about that?




Quote:Cocytus (300) (requires melee proficiency)
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A western long sword from a time when men were knights and the round table was a reality. Cirno creates a five foot long blade in two seconds. It is made of a steel that is freezing to the touch. Her weaker weapon by a large margen. It is used mostly to cut and maim but not destroy. She can move at her top speed and its energy consumption is minor (like doing a fairly easy training exercise). She can move at top speed with it though its accuracy is quite lower. She takes up a aggressive stance willing to lose the sword.[/spoiler]

Can she move while she summons the sword?

Besides that, it looks good. All most weapon moves really need is a size and shape description (and summoning info if needed).


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Move Creation Workshop - by Omni - 07-25-2015, 03:25 AM
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