08-06-2017, 07:24 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-06-2017, 07:39 AM by Asriel Dreemurr.
Edit Reason: Grammar mistakes I made
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@Ebony I need this criticism. I've been writing fanfiction for around 2 years. However, they aren't popular at all. An average of 3 people comment on my stories. Mostly all I get is positive feedback except for like, one spam commenter and one bully. I know how to take criticism, but I'm unused to having any criticism directed at me that isn't part of a mean comment. So, thanks.
Also, I do have a physical attack proficiency. And about the difference between "made impact" and a series of impacts, that's really up to the writer's opinion about what they want to do. Neither is right or wrong.
Also, I do have a physical attack proficiency. And about the difference between "made impact" and a series of impacts, that's really up to the writer's opinion about what they want to do. Neither is right or wrong.
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