07-28-2017, 11:22 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-28-2017, 11:23 AM by Xana Tanoshimu.
Edit Reason: Size, sorry there
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I think I feel better redoing the thing as a whole, rather than just editing it, so here goes.
Light Screen - 300 OM
Xana builds up energy on her arms for a second, making them glow with a faint gold light. Then, she raises her arms, with the palms of her hands pointing towards the incoming attack or attacker. An screen will be projected from her hands at about 3ft away from her. The screen is made of a glass-like material and similar in form to a window. It is approximately 3ft tall and 3 ft wide. Most attacks that hit the barrier will bounce off of its surface, except those that have been charged for more than 3 seconds. If an strong enough attacks hits the shield, it'll shatter in very smalls pieces, like a glass, leaving Xana very exhausted for several seconds. Xana can't move the shield from its original position, and given its flat shape, it leaves her exposed to side and/or back attacks. The shield can be maintained for a total of 5 seconds, growing considerably weaker each second it passes.
Better?
Light Screen - 300 OM
Xana builds up energy on her arms for a second, making them glow with a faint gold light. Then, she raises her arms, with the palms of her hands pointing towards the incoming attack or attacker. An screen will be projected from her hands at about 3ft away from her. The screen is made of a glass-like material and similar in form to a window. It is approximately 3ft tall and 3 ft wide. Most attacks that hit the barrier will bounce off of its surface, except those that have been charged for more than 3 seconds. If an strong enough attacks hits the shield, it'll shatter in very smalls pieces, like a glass, leaving Xana very exhausted for several seconds. Xana can't move the shield from its original position, and given its flat shape, it leaves her exposed to side and/or back attacks. The shield can be maintained for a total of 5 seconds, growing considerably weaker each second it passes.
Better?
Xana talks in #FFB7C5 and thinks in that same color plus Italics.