07-27-2017, 03:47 PM
@Queen Glory:
>Low damage is enough to compensate for the fire rate. Also, the visibility of a bullet doesn't really matter. It's still going stupid fast.
>The bullets need a maximum range.
>For the laser, 4ft is a huge diameter. You sure you don't mean 4 inches?
>How far can the laser travel at most? What's the max range?
>You said it ends if he gets to tired, but never said how he would get tired. How tiring is the laser to fire?
>For the magic shurikens, I just realised it's plural. How many does he fire? What's the rate of fire? How long does it last? How does he fire them (e.g. a line, a 45° cone spray)? How big are they?
>10ft is a stupid small range, so small that it technically would need physical proficiency instead (12ft+ would push it to ranged).
>How far away can the weapon be moved from him?
>Where is it summoned? Next to him? Anywhere within the range?
>You contradicted yourself. You said it takes a minute to summon but also that it's summoned instantly (also, a minute is a long time in a fight, 2 to 5 seconds would be adequate for a summoning time).
>While you may not need to physically describe it, you should. Especially since that's a 2D pixelated stylised image. Just basic stuff like its size. Makes it easier for other writers.
>Low damage is enough to compensate for the fire rate. Also, the visibility of a bullet doesn't really matter. It's still going stupid fast.
>The bullets need a maximum range.
>For the laser, 4ft is a huge diameter. You sure you don't mean 4 inches?
>How far can the laser travel at most? What's the max range?
>You said it ends if he gets to tired, but never said how he would get tired. How tiring is the laser to fire?
>For the magic shurikens, I just realised it's plural. How many does he fire? What's the rate of fire? How long does it last? How does he fire them (e.g. a line, a 45° cone spray)? How big are they?
>10ft is a stupid small range, so small that it technically would need physical proficiency instead (12ft+ would push it to ranged).
>How far away can the weapon be moved from him?
>Where is it summoned? Next to him? Anywhere within the range?
>You contradicted yourself. You said it takes a minute to summon but also that it's summoned instantly (also, a minute is a long time in a fight, 2 to 5 seconds would be adequate for a summoning time).
>While you may not need to physically describe it, you should. Especially since that's a 2D pixelated stylised image. Just basic stuff like its size. Makes it easier for other writers.