Official Move Approval IV

[Ash]

Thunder Clap: Does this do any damage or just the toss and debuff? Does this have a cast time? Can this be used while moving? Can she use other moves or attack and defend while using this, or would it break her focus? How draining is this on her energy/stamina? When you say that it risks damage to eardrums, is that just a fodder thing or does repeated use of this ramp up the debuff?

Chain Lightning: You’ll need to either decrease the range on this or make the power dwindle or something similar. Right now this can cover a range of 90 feet
instantly without losing power, which is kinda excessive. How damaging is the shock? Can she use other moves or take hits while channeling this or would she lose concentration? I’d like it if you added in a “is very draining” or something along with what you already have there for stamina drain, just so no one sees that as just a cooldown on that one particular move. Also, I’d say you wouldn’t need Homing but you would need Area Attack for this since it hits a group of people.

Thunder Clap(300 OM)
Requires: Strength Prof and Debuff prof.
Used at close range, no further than 5ft away, Ash takes up a defensive stance and fuses her palms with magic just before smacking them together in a clap making the spell instantaneous. This creates a white sound wave that explodes from her hands to throw the target off their feet harmlessly, and up to 10 feet back if they are particularly light. The power of this attack is gauged by how wide her hands are when she claps; the wider her hands and the more force she uses the more powerful the clap. (At least 1ft[30cm] apart to activate, and up to 5ft[1.5m]. Power meaning bigger targets need more force to be pushed down.) This leaves a harsh ringing in their ears and deafens a target for 5 seconds, leaving them confused and disorientated, as well as open to any sneak attacks.
The closer the target and the more distance between her hands before she claps risks real damage to the eardrums, which can be healed by normal means after the fight. (This is fodder.)
Ash can do this as many times as she can endure the painful sting in her hands after each smack. (Usually, only 3-6 times in a row without rest, depending on how hard she claps. She can do it more than this, but risks damaging her hands.) While its not that strenuous on her energy, it hurts her hands which are important to her. This is used more for defense and crowd control, but cannot be performed while moving or in combination with other moves; however as soon as the sound wave leaves her hands she can act normally. 

(A hit and run/kick while they are down and run move.)

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Chain Lightning(300 OM)
Requires Ranged Attack Prof, Debuff prof, and Area Attack Prof.
Ash concentrates for 15 seconds - as long as she remains unharmed she can maintain this concentration while moving but cannot use any other action  - to charge up a large amount of destructive blue electrical energy which she then releases at a target within 20 feet of her. It strikes as fast as natural lightening at the intended target, and continued to course through the group of people with little to no slowing or lowering of power. Hitting up to seven people almost simultaneously, the electricity jumps randomly from the original target to the next within 3 feet but never back as it follows the direction its casted. She can only control the aim of the spell to the first person but cannot control it enough to spare any friendlies in the group if any. No one is safe from becoming a lightning rod except herself as it does not move backwards.
On top of a powerful shock that tears through the flesh (and flesh like substance) it touches and leaves multiple painful smoking rips in the body, every successfully hit target suffers paralysis for 10 vulnerable seconds. In these spare moments, Ash and anyone who can still move, can attack the paralyzed target(s), bind said targets with whatever will work at the time, or steal what they deem valuable at the time.
Ash can only do this move twice a fight before she needs a rest as it is very draining, and really should only have to do it once.


BOLD: Changes made.  
I'm pretty sure I addressed everything, hopefully its more clear.