07-26-2017, 11:36 PM
@Veritas:
Cybernetic Arm:
>If you're using the charge time, you don't need the fire rate mentioned at the top. If anything, mentioning it twice could potentially be confusing.
>How long does it take to change modes?
Cybernetic Foot:
>You don't need a move to kick someone. Unless you're adding drawbacks to the usual kick to this increase the damage it's pointless. Remove the part about kicking people for moderate damage because it's unnecessary and the damage of your kicks cannot be changed simply by buying a move for it (without drawbacks). Thus this move would then only cost 300 OM.
>How fast do the force spheres travel?
>What do they look like? Give us the descriptive details. In fights your opponents need to describe you and your moves as well.
>Diameter is a 1 dimensional measurement. So you only need to say "2 foot" (not "2 foot by 2 foot").
Cybernetic Arm:
>If you're using the charge time, you don't need the fire rate mentioned at the top. If anything, mentioning it twice could potentially be confusing.
>How long does it take to change modes?
Cybernetic Foot:
>You don't need a move to kick someone. Unless you're adding drawbacks to the usual kick to this increase the damage it's pointless. Remove the part about kicking people for moderate damage because it's unnecessary and the damage of your kicks cannot be changed simply by buying a move for it (without drawbacks). Thus this move would then only cost 300 OM.
>How fast do the force spheres travel?
>What do they look like? Give us the descriptive details. In fights your opponents need to describe you and your moves as well.
>Diameter is a 1 dimensional measurement. So you only need to say "2 foot" (not "2 foot by 2 foot").