07-23-2017, 02:38 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-23-2017, 02:44 AM by Ebonywood Hellscythe.)
@Abyss: as I said to Veritas. Read the first post of the move approval thread. I'm literally just repeating those questions half the time.
Heat Armour:
>Look at Enel's lightning body move. It's similar. Perhaps model your move off that.
>How long can it be used for before he gets too tired to continue? (possibly not needed, but worth adding)
>You do not need buff proficiency.
>This would do a small amount of damage at most, unless it prevents you from using other moves.
>People take damage even if they don't touch you? Or is it only people who punch you?
>Clarify how the version in your arms works. Do people take damage as well? I'd just change that version to a "Syn can hit people with his burning arms".
Iron Absorption Attack:
>This is literally the same as integration normally. You can absorb metal without a move, and punch people without a move.
>If this were a move, you'd need to clarify the knockback distance. And perhaps that's what you should focus on should you make it a move.
Negative Finger Beam:
>How long does the beam last? 1 second. Just clarify explicitly.
Please repost your moves with changes in bold.
Heat Armour:
>Look at Enel's lightning body move. It's similar. Perhaps model your move off that.
Quote:Enel's body is literally made of lightning. While the effects in the Omniverse are not as powerful as they once were, anyone who makes physical contact with his body will get an electric shock. This can range from a small, painful deterrent to anyone grabbing Enel, or he can actively channel electricity through the point of contact in order to cause immense pain, and internal damage. He can only maintain this electrical current for so long (at maximum current, around 15 seconds, which would leave him completely breathless), as it fatigues him to maintain. Enel has full control over his electrical current, allowing him to withhold it if need be (for example, if he needs to conserve energy, focus his current elsewhere, or carry an ally).>Any restrictions while charging the move?
>How long can it be used for before he gets too tired to continue? (possibly not needed, but worth adding)
>You do not need buff proficiency.
>This would do a small amount of damage at most, unless it prevents you from using other moves.
>People take damage even if they don't touch you? Or is it only people who punch you?
>Clarify how the version in your arms works. Do people take damage as well? I'd just change that version to a "Syn can hit people with his burning arms".
Iron Absorption Attack:
>This is literally the same as integration normally. You can absorb metal without a move, and punch people without a move.
>If this were a move, you'd need to clarify the knockback distance. And perhaps that's what you should focus on should you make it a move.
Negative Finger Beam:
>How long does the beam last? 1 second. Just clarify explicitly.
Please repost your moves with changes in bold.