07-22-2017, 08:33 AM
(07-20-2017, 10:52 PM)Luci Wrote: Graffiti Jaunt (300 OM, Phasing, Shapeshifting)This seems okay, approved.
Luci phases into a wall, but instead of exiting on the other side, she appears on the wall as a graffiti picture, entering ‘the Graffiti Plane’.
While in the Graffiti Plane, Luci can move but cannot affect the world around her, she can only affect things in the two dimensional graffiti plane. She appears to run from wall to wall, and if she wants to move between buildings she has to jump through empty space to do it. Luci is exactly as vulnerable in the Graffiti Realm as she is normally; for example if Luci is on a brick wall and is stabbed, she will bleed even if the wall is undamaged. It’s takes basically no time to enter or exit the Graffiti Plane. It does not drain Luci’s energy to enter or exit the Graffiti Plane, or to stay in it.
While in the Graffiti Plane, Luci cannot use Superspeed or Burst Movement, but she can run at her normal top speed without becoming tired.
Quote:Graffiti Blink (600 OM, Phasing, Burst Movement, Buff Proficiency)
VERSION 1: Luci spends two seconds to paint a door on a wall in a building, creating a portal. When she opens the door, it will lead out of any other door in that building. Only Luci can walk through this door, which seals behind her when it closes. This move is not very draining to Luci, but can exhaust her if she uses it multiple times quickly.
VERSION 2. Luci spends five seconds to paint a door on a wall in a building, creating a portal. When she opens the door, it will lead out of any other door in that building. She can hold the door open up to five seconds, allowing up to five other people through the door. When she closes the door, it seals behind her, leaving only a crude painting of a door. This move is extremely draining to Luci, and can only be used once per day.
Sorry but that's teleportation, and would require that.
My staff notes for those curious:
Quote:I think the first one is okay, it sidesteps the EXCLUSIVE use of integration, which is the self-buff using nearby objects. It does include some phasing functionality overlap, but I think what she's doing is fine with just phasing.
The second move, though, is teleportation. I know she's trying to justify it with Burst Movement, but ... that would limit her to how far she can actually move with Burst Movement, not real teleportation (as the Burst Movement description itself states).
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