07-20-2017, 06:57 AM
If I help you write the move, how will you learn? 
Honestly, my advice is swap it out for something else (like a sweet ass weapon or something, something to defend yourself with). Drop the move for a while and rewrite it after you've been around the site for a week or two.
But if you're absolutely set on this move, Then I'll have to deny it and ask you to rewrite it in a more cohesive and clear way. I've seen so many moves that I get the gist, but please rewrite it.
Honestly, my advice is swap it out for something else (like a sweet ass weapon or something, something to defend yourself with). Drop the move for a while and rewrite it after you've been around the site for a week or two.
But if you're absolutely set on this move, Then I'll have to deny it and ask you to rewrite it in a more cohesive and clear way. I've seen so many moves that I get the gist, but please rewrite it.