Move Creation Workshop

[Ash]

Disclaimer: I am a noob.

@Ash
Thunder Clap
>I'd base the knockback about their DEF compared to your ATK (although I don't know if you'd need to) and change the wording so it says up to 10ft.
>You said the effects decrease at range. Is there a soft cap of sorts? Say at 30ft for example where the move basically does nothing? Or is this only for close range? You listed physical as a proficiency for this and not range.
>You might need to specify some times. How long does it take to do the largest clap? The smallest one?
>You may wish to add some description to what the sound wave looks like and any other visual effects.

Chain Lightning
>Area is for attacks with splash damage. Since this is one well controlled projectile, you'd need ranged control if you want to divert it mid flight. Although, since you said it's pre-planned, that would mean anyone that moves in range after the bolt has been fired wouldn't get hit? I think you might actually need homing (if not ranged control) for it to zig-zag across a group of people, as the targets will likely move after you've fired the spell so it can't all be pre-planned besides the general direction.
>How fast does it travel?
>If there any delay before if moves to the next person?
>You may have/want to specify a drop in damage for later targets.
>Can it hit the same person twice?
>Why is this 900OM? There's only one thing it can do, and the only variability is the number of targets. Reasonably you might get it for 300OM unless I misunderstood something.

Storm Demon
>Awesome sauce

Thunder Clap(600 OM)
Requires: Strength Prof and Debuff prof.
Used at close range, no further than 5ft away, Ash fuses her palms with magic before smacking them together in a clap. This creates a white sound wave that throws the target off their feet, and up to 10 feet back if they are particularly light. The power of this attack is gauged by how wide her hands are when she claps; the wider her hands and the more force she uses the more powerful the clap.
This leaves a harsh ringing in their ears and deafens a target for 5 seconds, leaving them confused and disorientated, as well as open to any sneak attacks. The closer the target and the more distance between her hands before she claps risks real damage to the eardrums, which can be healed by normal means after the fight.
Ash can do this as many times as she can endure the painful sting in her hands after each smack. (Usually, only 3-6 times in a row without rest, depending on how hard she claps. But if she is desperate she can continue to do so.)

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Chain Lightning(600 OM)
Requires Ranged Attack Prof, Debuff prof, Homing Prof.
Ash concentrates for five seconds to charge up a large amount of electrical energy which she then releases at a target within 20 feet of her. It strikes as fast as natural lightening at the intended target, and continued to course through the group of people with little to no slowing or lowering of power. Hitting up to seven people almost simultaneously, the electricity jumps randomly from the original target to the next within 10 feet but never back as it follows the direction its casted. While she can sorta direct the direction of the spell, she cannot control it enough to spare any friendlies. No one is safe from becoming a lightning rod except herself.
On top of a powerful shock, every successfully hit target suffers paralysis for 10 vulnerable seconds. In these spare moments, Ash and anyone who can still move, can attack the paralized target(s), bind said targets with whatever will work at the time, or steal what they deem valuable at the time.
Ash can only do this move twice a fight before she needs a rest, and really should only have to do it one.

>> 900 OM for: Attack, Paralyzing, and the ability to attack multiple targets. But if I can get this for only 300 OM I won't be upset.