Move Creation Workshop

[Clownpiece]

[spoiler]Okay got some stuff for an NPC

Scattering Scales (Area Attack, Ranged, Debuff) (1200): A simple application of her power. With a flap of her wings, Eternity releases a cloud of insect scales, covering an area about 10 meters in diameter around her, which lasts for about 5 seconds before they settle or wind blows them away. These scales don’t do any damage, however they can bring a surprising amount of pain. Those caught within range experience irritation in their eyes as scales get caught in them. While they don’t cause blindness, this can make it very hard to see for about 10 seconds until they’re cleared out. It’s a very easy move, taking merely the flap of her wings in order to use it. Though due to having a limited amount of scales on her wings, it must be used sparingly; three times and she’s out of uses.

Eternity also has a second version of this attack, which scatters scales in a more metaphorical sense. She concentrates for 2 seconds before unleashing a barrage of small, green, scale-like magical bullets, each measuring about 3 inches in diameter. The area 10 meters around her is completely engulfed in the cloud for about 5 seconds. It’s a rather weak attack, with each bullet only hurting about as much as being punched, but due to the wide area effect, it is somewhat draining, keeping her from using it excessively.

And for an alternate version to the alternate version allows Eternity to directly launch these magical scales at a foe. She concentrates for up to 10 seconds seconds and unleashes one stream of 10 bullets for every 2 seconds she charged vaguely towards a foe within 40 meters of her. This barrage isn’t accurate by any means, and each individual bullet stream can miss by up to 2 meters, but it makes up for it through sheer numbers.  The bullets travel at about 40 m/s, and fade away once they’ve traveled 40 meters. Very light magic drain when compared to the other bullet version. This is her main attack.

T1 Super Attack: Butterfly Sign “Minute Scales” (Area Attack, Ranged) (600):  A bullet pattern modelled after the scales she’s capable of scattering. Eternity concentrates for 3 seconds, before flapping her wings and releasing a massive barrage of green, scale-like magical bullets directly in front of her. These spread into a cone covering about 20 meters away from her, measuring 20 meters in width at the widest portion.

T1 Super Utility: Butterfly Sign “Fluttering Summer” (Area Attack, Ranged, Debuff) (600): A summer-themed attack. Eternity concentrates for 3 seconds, before fluttering her wings furiously, conjuring up a powerful summer wind that bowls over anyone within 20 meters of her and pushes them out of that range.[/spoiler]

@Clown. I am a noob but I shall try. Amaterasu or someone else who hangs out here will probably tell me I'm giving bad advice or feedback. But I'm trying, I swear. Pls be gentle.

Scattering Scales
>Looks good, although 20m/s is fairly slow for a bullet spam. Considering someone at the end of its range has 2 seconds to dodge.

Butterfly Sign
>Great, although note that, to my knowledge, the charge time of a super attack doesn't really have an impact as it plays out like a cutscene. Good for descriptive purposes though.

Butterfly Sign
>Technically, since being knocked over is an instant, and not lingering, effect, it probably doesn't actually need debuff.
>Also, are you sure you don't want to knock people backwards as well or disorient them? Making everyone fall over seems a bit weak for a super move. But then, I'm new to the balancing game so I could be wrong.
>You said it knocks over people in front of her. Is that directly or is it in a cone shape?

Scattering Scales: Upped to 40 m/s. Still have time to dodge at max range but isn't as painfully slow.

Fluttering Summer: changed so that it knocks people over and back, and affects everyone around her so that it serves its purpose better, which is keeping people away from her because she's a fairy and can't punch worth shit.

Changes made in bold to that little spoilered section in this post.