MOCK BATTLE: We need a Judge. [OOC]

[Ash]

Ash and Ian wanna fight! Dx
But like.. not for realsies.
But we need a judge.

Ash vs Ian


I think the standard is up to 800 words, 3 'rounds', 48 hour time limit between posts? Unless Ian wants to change this, I'm good with that.

[Amaterasu]

:frog: *slowly raises hand*

I'd be available if you like.

[Ian Sylvester]

okay, I'm ready *pulls up rules page* I'll start writing my intro post

[Ash]

Ammy Judge!?! The floofiest of the judges? :pink:


=3 No, im good with Ammy~!


Dx Let this mock battle begin!!





(im first)

[Ash]

POSTED

Ian has 48 hours to post. =3

Take your time dude, no rush. (i have work today)

[Ian Sylvester]

posted, and you didn't think I was gonna not use a thematic attack nor did you?

and I'm not entirely sure pushing you on a cube does damage since I don't have physical prof....but what the hell I'm doing it anyway (or at least trying)

I left you a lot of room to dodge some of my stuff given you have the tech (which you do), but their is no way in hell you're dodging EVERYTHING (I think)

[Ash]

IF I DO IT IN A SUPER TECHY WAY I CAN!! Dx


(maybe)


You're go.

[Ian Sylvester]

I'm too tired to post right this minute, but I am gonna say that you're not gonna dodge everything I throw at you, I out tech you. YOU CAN'T OUT DANCE ME FOREVER!!!

also I can't go as fast while I have swing blades/cubes up, so you out speed me right now

[Dust]

Dear Ammy,

I DEMAND A DANCE OFF SCORE!! ...Please..?


With Love,
Comfy Head Ash

[Amaterasu]

If either of you find a way to work breakdancing and/or tectonic into your post I may consider giving you an extra point

Otherwise I'll be using the Blarghman's judging template, just so you know!

[Ian Sylvester]

posted

[Ash]

Aw.. Ian.
D=

I'm sorry. I'm not cheating you out of hits, I swear. Fighting is more like an Art here. I can tell you aren't used to this kind battle.

You are expected to do as much as you can within the word count and fairly. Since I keep missing you to ask about temporarly using your character I can't even give you a good example. But I don't want to upset you by controlling Ian either. So I am doing my best to fight you on your terms.

While were both Speed+Technique heavy, I have Burst Movement so if I have to I can go twice as fast as you. Also, in your Move it says the blades max speed is comparable to someone with a SPD of 1. So I've been going off that. I'm sorry if its been frustrating, but at the same time that's how Ash fights. Burst Movement and Master Acrobatics gives me excellent movement and dodging abilities. Or that's how I interperated it based off how I read the rules.
Ammy correct me if I am wrong.

If you respond to this before I am done with my post for Dust and I have permission to, I'll show you what a normal post would look like in a fight.

[Ian Sylvester]

I'll let you control Ian for a post (and you're right, I mostly play strategy games, with the occasional action game like monster hunter)

I reserve the right to retcon the song you us though (it is about time to swap it)

[Ash]

That's fair, 100% But this IS a mock battle.

If you have one in mind, send it to me through PM or here. ^ ^

[Ian Sylvester]

meh, I'm curious on what you'll try to make my character play (no I do not have a planned one)

[Ash]

Okay Ian.

If you have anything you want me to change, just tell me before you post. we have 48 hours.

I'll happily adjust the Ian parts to your liking. =3

[Amaterasu]

Don't worry too much, you two. As Ash pointed out, it's a mock battle, it's pretty much the definition of training your writing, without taking any actual ingame risks!

I'll be sure to provide you with detailed feedback once you're finished (on that note, can one of you post in here when you're done?) so you both can improve your skills and work out flaws.

[Ian Sylvester]

......I feel like I could write better with a more developed character.....I'mma be honest I just took the first think that poped into my head and rolled with it when making Ian and didn't stop to think about how I was gonna write for him...I've been thinking about it for the day, and I think I should switch and come back to Ian later.

[Ash]

D=

Aww!!
But he has so much potential..

That is entirely up to you, though. It makes me sad though. Did you still want to finish this up?

Also, did you want someone to bounce ideas off of? (You are free to PM me)

[Ian Sylvester]

I'll come back to Ian later when I know what I'm doing.

we can finish up here.

also https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=55q5EuklA_s or you can use this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eco4z98nIQY
either way I'm retconing the song