Eda the magical girl

[Eda]

Character name: Eda ( Last name unknown ) 

Level : 1 

Spent Om: 1600 / 5000 


Character source: Original 

Character history: On earth in 2015 there was a popular up and coming television show , a magical girl series known as
" love love Eda chan " would air on t.v the world over . As the first season ended with an explosion that left Eda presumed dead . In reality however seconds before the explosion consumed her , a voice called out . It was at this very moment that she was brought to the Omniverse . 

Physical Description: (originals only)



5'5 teenage girl with red hair , dressed in an overly cute attire 


Stats:
ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged proficiency ( 1000 om ) 

Starting Powers: None

Starting Equipment : None  

Starting Moves: 

Magic blast ( 300 om ) ~ A small pink blast of magical energy 

Size : Small - Roughly 10 cm in diameter 
Requires : A moment to focus
Can be used while moving
cannot be aimed while moving
can be used with other moves , chained together
does not pierce flesh 
can pierce clothing 
Cast speed : Fast - near instant
movement speed : Fast 
Damage : Weak - Mosquito bite or bee sting
Stam cost : Low
distance : short - 10 feet maximum


Fireball ( 300 om ) ~ A basic fire attack in a round projectile orb 

Size : Medium - Can be up to 1 foot in diameter 
[b]Speed : Fast traveling - Can be to the target in seconds [/b]
[b]Requires a short incantation ( concentration ) ~ " Now we're playing with fire <3 , Fireball! " [/b]
[b]Cannot be used while moving
[/b]
cannot be aimed while moving

can not be used with other moves
can leave burns on the body
[b]can pierce clothing [/b]
Cast speed : 30 seconds 
Damage : Medium
Stam cost : Medium
Distance : Short - 25 feet maximum 







( edit ) I have read and agreed to the terms of service 

( edit 2 : Stat fixes , story edit , added fireball at 300 om )

( edit 3 : am dumb and forgot to deduct points on score )

( edit 4 : Moveset fixes ) 

[Mark]

History: When exactly was your character taken from their realm?

Magic Blast: We'll need a description of this move before it can be approved. Please see the Moves section of the rules and try to hit all of the bullet points.

Also, as you posted in the Nexus before being approved, your post has been removed for the time being. When you have been approved I can reinstate the post.

Lastly, your IP matches that of another member currently in the joining process. We'll need photographic proof that the two of you are different people before we can approve your forms. You're free to obscure your face, but both of you should be holding a sign with your character's name so that it's obvious who is who.

Thanks!

[Eda]

History: When exactly was your character taken from their realm?

Magic Blast: We'll need a description of this move before it can be approved. Please see the Moves section of the rules and try to hit all of the bullet points.

Also, as you posted in the Nexus before being approved, your post has been removed for the time being. When you have been approved I can reinstate the post.

Lastly, your IP matches that of another member currently in the joining process. We'll need photographic proof that the two of you are different people before we can approve your forms. You're free to obscure your face, but both of you should be holding a sign with your character's name so that it's obvious who is who.

Thanks!

History : should be in the short bio , earth year 2015 around late summer 

Magic blast : will simply be a generic attack with low damage , faster cool down time then a stronger attack . Think along the lines of Magic missle from D&d . 

Move requirements : Ranged proficiency
Damage : Weak
Cooldown : Fast
Aim : Easy when stationairy , difficult when moving 
Looks like : A pink flash of light
Feels like : Getting stung by a bee 

As for my Ip matching Ebony we are real life friends and spend time together at the same house often 

Edit : right now we should be showing from two separate locations 

[Eda]

Bumping with my epic failure picture but it should be good enough 

[Eda]

Bumping with my epic failure picture but it should be good enough 

[Mark]

Alrighty, verification is good.

History: We just need a set point in your character's history for when they came here. Time is sorta meaningless here, something like "she was taken to the Omniverse shortly after her show was canceled" or something to that effect.

Magic Blast: Sorry to be such a pain, but we need to know stuff like size, travel time, stamina drain, etc. There is a good guide in the first post of this thread that can help. We just try to keep moves as clear as possible for people that might not be familiar with your canon.

[Eda]

Alrighty, verification is good.

History: We just need a set point in your character's history for when they came here. Time is sorta meaningless here, something like "she was taken to the Omniverse shortly after her show was canceled" or something to that effect.

Magic Blast: Sorry to be such a pain, but we need to know stuff like size, travel time, stamina drain, etc. There is a good guide in the first post of this thread that can help. We just try to keep moves as clear as possible for people that might not be familiar with your canon.

Ah sorry about that I am still getting used to the format and I suppose I need a lot of help with my detail in things sometimes 

Her show was never canceled but I can get a rough timeline of when she was brought to the Omniverse 

Eda was brought to the Omniverse during the set malfunction , an explosion that would have and should have killed her  . when she awoke she was certain the explosion had killed her ~ Hopefully this will fix that issue 


Magical blast :

Size : Small beam roughly 10 cm diameter
Travel time : Fast 
Stamina drain : Low  

To balance it is Eda being young and inexperienced , she could likely only use it 5 times in a day at her current level

I will eventually have to get her entire moveset written up and approved too 

[Mark]

History: Ahhh, gotcha. I was reading that to mean something else. That’s totally fine.

Magic Blast: How fast does this move? Can this be used while she is moving? Does it require any concentration? Can this be used with other moves? For a weak attack like this you can make the stamina drain and charge time much lower if you’d like.

Fireball: How fast does this move? Can it be used while moving? Does it require concentration to charge? Can this be used with other moves? You can also decrease the cast time by a good deal on this one as well if you’d like. Even a few seconds it pretty fair if its moderate drain and medium power.

[Eda]

History: Ahhh, gotcha. I was reading that to mean something else. That’s totally fine.

Magic Blast: How fast does this move? Can this be used while she is moving? Does it require any concentration? Can this be used with other moves? For a weak attack like this you can make the stamina drain and charge time much lower if you’d like.

Fireball: How fast does this move? Can it be used while moving? Does it require concentration to charge? Can this be used with other moves? You can also decrease the cast time by a good deal on this one as well if you’d like. Even a few seconds it pretty fair if its moderate drain and medium power.

My moves seem to be a rather frustrating and the one hold up , I will fix them now and let you get back to it . Editing main post 

[Mark]

It's fine, no worries. Moves are always a bit of trouble to sort out, especially the first ones.

[Eda]

It's fine, no worries. Moves are always a bit of trouble to sort out, especially the first ones.

If they need further editing let me know , I made the edits

[Mark]

Specifics of the moves look good. We like to have Moves written up as descriptions rather than fact lists, so you might consider doing that for your Roster. Anywho, approved!

Name: Eda
Level: 1
Spent OM: 1600
Proficiencies: (1000); Ranged proficiency (1000)
Powers: (/8000);
Moves: (600); Magic Blast (300), Fireball (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 4

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