Join request: Red Hood

[Red-Hood]

Character name: Red Hood (Jason Todd)

Character description: Red hood stands exactly 6 feet tall. Red's mask his compeltly red with no facial features other than the white eye holes. Red also is wearing kevlar armour which gives him great flexibility and moderate protection against ballistic weapons and blades.Red also had a utility belt where he keeps all of his gadgets. Also for a stylish option he wears a light brown leather jacket(most likely just to add to his bad assery).

Character sourceC comics(batman)

Character history:Jason Todd was formally an ally to Batman as the 2nd robin but he was kidnapped and murdered by the Joker. Thanks to the Lazarus pit- a strange type of pool in the control of Ras' Al Gul the leader of the leaguge of assassins, how Jason's body was brought to one of these pits is unclear since Jason has no memory of this event just the knowledge of what happebed after he was revived- Jason was reborn and he took up the mantle Red hood. His goal to seek revenge on the sick monster that tourtred and killed him and on the man he admired the most, his teacher, his friend. The Batman. Red hood was in the middle of confrontation with Batman when he was suddenly transportated to the omniverse.

Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:2
SPD:2
TEC:4

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength(1000)
Ranged proficiency (1000)
Debuff proficiency(1000)


Starting Powers:
Master Acrobat-400 OM

Starting Moves:

Combat knife:
(requirement: physical attack) 300 OM- A 12 inch serrated blade with a leather grip.

Dual pistols
(requirement: Ranged proficiency) 600 OM- Red hood can hold and fire 2 pistols for a lot of damage however the accracy is lowered. Red hood can also only hold one instead for an accuracy boost but with out the extra damage of having 2 pistols. Each pistol has a mag size of 15 rounds and the effective range of the pistols is up to 25 yards. Reload time takes about 10 seconds since Red had extra clips.

Batarang
(Requirement: Ranged proficiency) 300 OM- a small thrown weapon that does moderate damage. The range of this weapon is when thrown is about 30 yards. Red can throw 3 at a time in rapid succession. It takes Red a few seconds to grab another few Batrangs to throw.

Flash bangs
(Requirement: Debuff Proficiency) 300 OM- a grenade that can be thrown 10 yards that detonates and leaves targets blinded for 3-5 seconds depending on how close the target is standing next to the grenade( if standing right next or on top of the effect lasts longer then if the target is stand a little ways away) Red can hold 5 of these on his utility belt. The explosion of the grenade is a 3 foot radius.



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Where did you find us?: Refferal from friend(member name Thor)

[Strazio Rockwell]

Hi there welcome to the Omniverse!

Just a few things before we can get you set up.

This is mostly a personal recommendation, but I would recommend that you expand your history a bit. It gives other writers a better sense of your character and helps us understand what you're talking about when you reference things in your past such as the "Lazarus Pit". Not required, but highly recommended.

What I do need you to add to your history is at what point your character was taken to the Omniverse.

Also I know this isn't an OC but can you link a picture of them or write a physical description so other writers can describe them easily without having to use google?

Also formatting your moves like this helps with readability and clarification, espcially for stranger moves.
Buster Sword (requires Physical Strength) – 300 OM

Combat Knife - I would remove the punchy portion and just describe the knife itself, it is assumed your character can throw standard punches without needing a specific move.

Dual Pistols - How many shots can each pistol fire before needing to reload? How long does it take to reload each pistol? What is the average rate of fire? What is the effective range?

Batarang - How far can you throw this? How many can you throw, and how quickly can you throw them?

Flashbang - This needs Debuff proficiency and how far can you throw the grenade? How long are enemies blinded for? How many times can you use this ability before needing to restock?

[Red-Hood]

Hey thanks for the tips I'll probably get rid of the flash bangs for now I don't think I have enough pints to get the extra proffiency. If i rewrite it on here so it looks better could you look it over again so I know its perfect?

[Strazio Rockwell]

Hey thanks for the tips I'll probably get rid of the flash bangs for now I don't think I have enough pints to get the extra proffiency. If i rewrite it on here so it looks better could you look it over again so I know its perfect?

Can do captain, I eagerly await your edits

[Red-Hood]

Alrighty I think I edited everything you asked for if not let me know

[Red-Hood]

Dual Pistols - How many shots can each pistol fire before needing to reload? How long does it take to reload each pistol? What is the average rate of fire? What is the effective range?

Also I have a question About this, how does ammo work do I have to spend OM to get more?

[Red-Hood]

Bumping so hopefully an admin sees

[Red-Hood]

The above question had been answered im just waiting on an admin to okay this so i can start Rping.

[Strazio Rockwell]

Sorry bud, it has been a long weekend for me.

Your description is fine so long as you know that your kevlar is pure roleplay fluff and doesn't add any actual protection to you.

Dual Pistols I would tone down the range, 75 yards is quite a distance, especially if you're able to plug 15 shots that far.

Batarang I would remove the part about standing still to increase accuracy because that would technically count as a variability. Other than that it looks good to me.

Flash bangs What is the area of effect around the grenade? This move is a little bit overloaded so I would find some way to nerf it. a 10-15 second blind in an area from 30 yards away is pretty damn powerful. I would lower the time debuffed and perhaps add in a charge time or some sort of drawback.

[Red-Hood]

Alrigty sorry for the OPness of some of it I was just guessing on some of the range of the guns, and duration of the blast on the grenade. How does it look now

[Red-Hood]

And obviously I'll type the descriptions out a bit better when I can make a roster. The sentence structure seems to be all over the place in my mind lol

[Strazio Rockwell]

Aight looks good to me. Welcome aboard

APPROVED

Name: Red Hood
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies (3000): Ranged Proficiency (1000), Physical Proficiency (1000), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Moves (1500): Combat knife (300), Dual Pistols (600), Batarangs (300), Flash Bangs (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Base Stats:
ATK - 2
DEF - 2
SPD - 2
TEC - 4

Make a roster in the Roster Forum, copy and paste the above and make that the first post of your roster. The second reply should contain all the core information of your character(Look at the profile of an active member to see what I'm talking about)

Here's a topic to help you along: What to Do Once You've Been Approved

Remember that your first post should be in the Nexus after you've been taken by Omni, and all future purchases should go in a log that I shall set up shorty.

You're good to go! Enjoy the Omniverse!

[Red-Hood]

Woooot! Thanks soooo much!