Official Move Approval III

[Simon]

Can you give this a little bit more downside? Maybe it's tricky to aim because you're only using one hand? Something? Right now it just seems epicly awesome all the time. Also, can it hit more than one enemy per shot, or is the "tight cone" part meant to imply that it'll only hit what you're aiming at?

Alright, true, just a full second of reload time per shot won't cut it. Lemme just...

Terminator - 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
Previously a vintage lever-action shotgun Dante obtained, he later modified this firearm for combat against demonic foes. Dante wields the weapon with one hand, firing the shotgun and then throwing it into a one-handed, 'terminator-style' reload that takes a second - otherwise, Dante doesn't need to load more shells into the weapon.
The shotgun is equipped to interchangeably fire two different kinds of shells: a modified buckshot shell effective at 12 meters, built with a tighter spread to maximize power delivery (but can only hit one or two targets at full range, and won't ever do full damage except at close range); and a slug round effective at 20 meters that doesn't sacrifice power falloff, but instead suffers from Dante's lack of accuracy when wielding the weapon one-handed, giving him a 50/50 shot at best at anything but close range.

Give it a few more seconds on the summoning of the weapon. Right now it sounds instantaneous.

True, that sort of stuff should be depending on SPD.

Gilgamesh - 600 OM (Requires Physical Strength)
A set of gauntlets and greaves made from a living, demonic metal. This Devil Arm functions less like armor, though, and more like a bolster to his punches and kicks. These attacks are solid and heavy, but can be stiff and slow at times, easy to counter with grappling skills. The weapon is imbued with the Fire element, burning with red heat in normal attacks. A set of thrusters on each armor piece can be used to charge Dante's attacks for up to 3 seconds each, capable of delivering almighty flaming blows if he doesn't get himself knocked back in the process. Dante can summon/despawn this weapon with a moment's concentration and a flick of his arms (a transition of about 3 seconds where he can't attack), but cannot wield it in tandem with any other weapons.

[Mickey Mouse]

The Maximum amount of time Raal can maintain it is 10 seconds. he can stop at any time(or be forced to stop if something strikes him or breaks his concentration in any way) before that, however. If he keeps it on for the full 10 seconds, it will leave him pretty tired. Not enough to prevent him from doing anything else, but enough that he would be unlikely to be able to do it more than twice in a single battle. If he only uses it for small bursts it's much less draining, however.
And yes, it summons directly in front of him. The wind tunnel itself is only able to issue straight forward from his facing.

Edit that into the description and it's approved at 600 OM.

Terminator - 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
Previously a vintage lever-action shotgun Dante obtained, he later modified this firearm for combat against demonic foes. Dante wields the weapon with one hand, firing the shotgun and then throwing it into a one-handed, 'terminator-style' reload that takes a second - otherwise, Dante doesn't need to load more shells into the weapon.
The shotgun is equipped to interchangeably fire two different kinds of shells: a modified buckshot shell effective at 12 meters, built with a tighter spread to maximize power delivery (but can only hit one or two targets at full range, and won't ever do full damage except at close range); and a slug round effective at 20 meters that doesn't sacrifice power falloff, but instead suffers from Dante's lack of accuracy when wielding the weapon one-handed, giving him a 50/50 shot at best at anything but close range.

Approved at 600 OM.

True, that sort of stuff should be depending on SPD.

Gilgamesh - 600 OM (Requires Physical Strength)
A set of gauntlets and greaves made from a living, demonic metal. This Devil Arm functions less like armor, though, and more like a bolster to his punches and kicks. These attacks are solid and heavy, but can be stiff and slow at times, easy to counter with grappling skills. The weapon is imbued with the Fire element, burning with red heat in normal attacks. A set of thrusters on each armor piece can be used to charge Dante's attacks for up to 3 seconds each, capable of delivering almighty flaming blows if he doesn't get himself knocked back in the process. Dante can summon/despawn this weapon with a moment's concentration and a flick of his arms (a transition of about 3 seconds where he can't attack), but cannot wield it in tandem with any other weapons.

Approved at 600 OM.

[Omni]

Sorry, I'm dumb...I'm not exactly sure what you mean by turning arc. Visually I was thinking something like this for how it homes, not like this.

Turning arc as in, can it turn on a dime, or is it like a truck? <!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turning_radius">https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Turning_radius</a><!-- m -->

Ahh, gotcha. If the target were to superspeed or teleport next to Vincent after the shot was fired, it would need about 1/2 meter turn radius to reverse direction and follow. Sorry if that sounds weird, trying my best to explain it.

I added a other few bits to make things a bit more clear. The full version would be this, pending your approval:

Moira (Homing Shot; requires Ranged Proficiency and Homing Proficiency [300 OM]): Through manipulation of his inner mana reserves, Vincent is capable of firing a blast of sapphire hued Mako-eqsue energy using Cerberus as a conduit. As the energy comes from the wielder, he is capable of making these energy blasts lock-on and home-in on a target. Shots fired in this way are a good deal less powerful and travel with a slower velocity (around the speed of an arrow) as Vincent does not need to reload nor aim his shots so long as he can keep sight of his foe. This, coupled with the brilliant blue color characteristic of Mako energy, makes the shots easier to dodge than standard bullets. Though the bolts home in on his foe, the effect is imperfect. Shots require a 1/2 meter radius to reverse direction and they do not home indefinitely, following a normal trajectory inside a distance of 3 meters. As this style of firing does not require actual ammunition and has less destructive capability than the normal firing pattern, it can be fired in a fashion similar to a semi-automatic pistol.

Approved! Sorry to be so finicky about this.

[Omni]

Claws: After being injected with dragon DNA, Daenerys' body has morphed into a sort of half-woman/half-dragon hybrid. Her hands have transformed into claws reminiscent of dragon claws, with long, sharp nails -- about an inch long -- and scales covering them from the tips of her fingers to just above the elbow. The princess can use these claws as a makeshift melee weapon; they are sharp enough to cut through most weak fabrics and make dents in wood or weak steel. If used against armor that is too hard, the nails may break, causing some pain to Daenerys. (300 OM)

Approved. Given the risks to herself and the close range, you can expect these to be pretty strong.

[Omni]

Carpet Shield: One of Mickey's pals, a secondary from the Aladdin world named Magic Carpet, flies in to block an oncoming attack. Carpet can be summoned to defend either Mickey or any of his allies and usually appears rather quickly, but he is a very flimsy shield and can only block certain projectiles. Specifically, any projectiles of great magnitude or anything involving sharp edges or flames can probably easily break through Carpet. Either way, once Carpet has blocked a projectile, he must be resummoned by Mickey, which takes about five minutes of focused concentration, so it is only really rational to use this move once per fight. Also, once Carpet has been decommissioned, Mickey will not be able to use Flight until the secondary is resummoned.

How soon is rather quickly? A second?

[Mickey Mouse]

Carpet Shield: One of Mickey's pals, a secondary from the Aladdin world named Magic Carpet, flies in to block an oncoming attack. Carpet can be summoned to defend either Mickey or any of his allies and usually appears rather quickly, but he is a very flimsy shield and can only block certain projectiles. Specifically, any projectiles of great magnitude or anything involving sharp edges or flames can probably easily break through Carpet. Either way, once Carpet has blocked a projectile, he must be resummoned by Mickey, which takes about five minutes of focused concentration, so it is only really rational to use this move once per fight. Also, once Carpet has been decommissioned, Mickey will not be able to use Flight until the secondary is resummoned.

How soon is rather quickly? A second?

Let's go with two. I imagine Carpet materializes in the air above Mickey and then swoops down, hopefully getting there in time.

EDIT: Another way of thinking of it is Carpet is off doing something else, already summoned, and is called into action by Mickey. Either way, still takes him two seconds to get into place, leaving a window of time for Mickey to get hit.

[Omni]

The Black Spark (Requires Debuff Proficiency, Mimic) - 300 OM
Tapping into herself and a target's shadow, Shade can swap strength with the opponent.
Shade and her target 'swap' moves. Shade can now freely use the target's moves, and the target can use hers, but both are now unable to use their own. Shade and her target are as skilled in these new moves as if they had Mimicked them. This lasts for 3 minutes, or until Shade or her target are knocked unconscious.

The Black Spark is cast like this: Shade's host grabs both of the target's hands in hers. Black lightning chargers up in each persons right forearm for half a second, then shoots down their arm, spiraling around it, and then down the opponent's left forearm, stopping at each one's shoulder. This takes 3 seconds in total to complete. Shade must maintain a grip on the target's hands until completion or this has no effect.

How does 3 minutes sounds?

Let's say this, one second to perform the move for each minute of swap time. You can have it as fixed like this (3 seconds for 3 minutes) or make variable and go nuts.

Shadow Jumper (Requires Basic Fusion, Symbiosis, Telepathy) - Tier One Super Utility - 600 OM
Shade preys on the mind of a weakened foe, convincing them to let her 'shadow' them. They let her temporarily take their body and use it as her own. She can convince them to fuse with her, allowing her access to their strength and remaining SP. All effects are applied as normal, except that Shade accumulates all damage taken by the combined form, and the fusion takes twice the SP to maintain.

How's this?

I just removed one bit. Shade always takes all damage taken when fused with someone, because that's how fusion always works. As per what I said in your join form. That might have gotten a little confused somewhere along the way, because you stopped posting there to make the new join forms as Ultron.

[Omni]

Carpet Shield: One of Mickey's pals, a secondary from the Aladdin world named Magic Carpet, flies in to block an oncoming attack. Carpet can be summoned to defend either Mickey or any of his allies and usually appears rather quickly, but he is a very flimsy shield and can only block certain projectiles. Specifically, any projectiles of great magnitude or anything involving sharp edges or flames can probably easily break through Carpet. Either way, once Carpet has blocked a projectile, he must be resummoned by Mickey, which takes about five minutes of focused concentration, so it is only really rational to use this move once per fight. Also, once Carpet has been decommissioned, Mickey will not be able to use Flight until the secondary is resummoned.

How soon is rather quickly? A second?

Let's go with two. I imagine Carpet materializes in the air above Mickey and then swoops down, hopefully getting there in time.

EDIT: Another way of thinking of it is Carpet is off doing something else, already summoned, and is called into action by Mickey. Either way, still takes him two seconds to get into place, leaving a window of time for Mickey to get hit.

Put it in the description hh:

[Omni]

Terminator - 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency)
Previously a vintage lever-action shotgun Dante obtained, he later modified this firearm for combat against demonic foes. Dante wields the weapon with one hand, firing the shotgun and then throwing it into a one-handed, 'terminator-style' reload that takes about a second in all - otherwise, Dante doesn't need to load more shells into the weapon. The shotgun is equipped to interchangeably fire either a 12-meter buckshot in a tight cone, or a 20-meter heavy slug.

Overruled, this is totally fine.

Gilgamesh - 600 OM (Requires Physical Strength)
A set of gauntlets and greaves made from a living, demonic metal. This Devil Arm functions less like armor, though, and more like a bolster to his punches and kicks. These attacks are solid and heavy, but can be stiff and slow at times. The weapon is imbued with the Fire element, burning with red heat in normal attacks. A set of thrusters on each armor piece can be used to charge Dante's attacks for up to 3 seconds each, capable of delivering almighty flaming blows. Dante can summon/despawn this weapon at will with a moment's concentration, but cannot wield it in tandem with any other weapons.

Ditto.

[Mickey Mouse]

Carpet Shield: One of Mickey's pals, a secondary from the Aladdin world named Magic Carpet, flies in to block an oncoming attack. This move can only be activated if Carpet has already been summoned by Mickey, a process which takes about five minutes. He's usually off avoiding the fight, however, so it takes him about two seconds to fly in and either Mickey or any of his allies; unfortunately, he is a very flimsy shield and can only block certain projectiles. Specifically, any projectiles of great magnitude or anything involving sharp edges or flames can probably easily break through Carpet. Either way, once Carpet has blocked a projectile, he must be resummoned by Mickey, which takes again about five minutes of focused concentration, so it is only really rational to use this move once per fight. Also, once Carpet has been decommissioned, Mickey will not be able to use Flight until the secondary is resummoned.

Blue Kingdom Hearts (Tier 2 Defensive Super Move): In addition to the Yellow Kingdom Hearts created by Organization XIII, Mickey and his master, Yen Sid, also attempted to create a replica of the original Kingdom Hearts, which the mouse has also learned to harness the energy of. In order to activate this move, Mickey draws a heart in the air with the tip of his Keyblade; any projectile that passes through the heart is absorbed by the Keyblade, and then, after being charged to its maximum potential -- a process which takes about three average-damage projectiles -- Mickey slams the Keyblade into the ground. The ground on either side of the Keyblade's tip begins to crack, and out of that crack a huge wall of blue energy erupts forth, defending Mickey and anyone else behind it. The wall is approximately ten meters long, five meters on either side of Mickey, and about five meters high. It is completely opaque, so Mickey and his allies cannot see what the enemy is doing on the other side, but with enough concentration, Mickey can move the shield. Mickey can keep the shield up until he either chooses to dissolve it or until he runs out of SP, but the longer it stays active, the more exhausted the mouse is when the move is finished.

[Kenpachi Zaraki]

Approved! Sorry to be so finicky about this.

Thank you kindly! And don't worry about it; thank YOU for tolerating my lapses in understanding. :tiphat:

[Omni]

Carpet Shield: One of Mickey's pals, a secondary from the Aladdin world named Magic Carpet, flies in to block an oncoming attack. This move can only be activated if Carpet has already been summoned by Mickey, a process which takes about five minutes. He's usually off avoiding the fight, however, so it takes him about two seconds to fly in and either Mickey or any of his allies; unfortunately, he is a very flimsy shield and can only block certain projectiles. Specifically, any projectiles of great magnitude or anything involving sharp edges or flames can probably easily break through Carpet. Either way, once Carpet has blocked a projectile, he must be resummoned by Mickey, which takes again about five minutes of focused concentration, so it is only really rational to use this move once per fight. Also, once Carpet has been decommissioned, Mickey will not be able to use Flight until the secondary is resummoned.

Approved!

Blue Kingdom Hearts (Tier 2 Defensive Super Move): In addition to the Yellow Kingdom Hearts created by Organization XIII, Mickey and his master, Yen Sid, also attempted to create a replica of the original Kingdom Hearts, which the mouse has also learned to harness the energy of. In order to activate this move, Mickey draws a heart in the air with the tip of his Keyblade; any projectile that passes through the heart is absorbed by the Keyblade, and then, after being charged to its maximum potential -- a process which takes about three average-damage projectiles -- Mickey slams the Keyblade into the ground. The ground on either side of the Keyblade's tip begins to crack, and out of that crack a huge wall of blue energy erupts forth, defending Mickey and anyone else behind it. The wall is approximately ten meters long, five meters on either side of Mickey, and about five meters high. It is completely opaque, so Mickey and his allies cannot see what the enemy is doing on the other side, but with enough concentration, Mickey can move the shield. Mickey can keep the shield up until he either chooses to dissolve it or until he runs out of SP, but the longer it stays active, the more exhausted the mouse is when the move is finished.

With Super Defenses, they basically block a single attack and then vanish. So it's just 2 SP per use.

Thanks much for these approvals, perfect so far (as I say, I'd rather go back and say something is fine than the reverse and have to tell someone that something approved is actually not fine, so this is perfect). Really appreciate the backup.

[Mickey Mouse]

With Super Defenses, they basically block a single attack and then vanish. So it's just 2 SP per use.

Thanks much for these approvals, perfect so far (as I say, I'd rather go back and say something is fine than the reverse and have to tell someone that something approved is actually not fine, so this is perfect). Really appreciate the backup.

Blue Kingdom Hearts (Tier 2 Defensive Super Move): In addition to the Yellow Kingdom Hearts created by Organization XIII, Mickey and his master, Yen Sid, also attempted to create a replica of the original Kingdom Hearts, which the mouse has also learned to harness the energy of. In order to activate this move, Mickey draws a heart in the air with the tip of his Keyblade; any projectile that passes through the heart is absorbed by the Keyblade, and then, after being charged to its maximum potential -- a process which takes about three average-damage projectiles -- Mickey slams the Keyblade into the ground. The ground on either side of the Keyblade's tip begins to crack, and out of that crack a huge wall of blue energy erupts forth, defending Mickey and anyone else behind it. The wall is approximately ten meters long, five meters on either side of Mickey, and about five meters high. It is completely opaque, so Mickey and his allies cannot see what the enemy is doing on the other side; the barrier appears, blocks an attack of with equal or lower strength than the shield itself (so a Tier 2 Super Attack or lower) and then shatters.

And <3

[The Dreamer]

So, as they stand, those moves for Shade are approved now?

[Makoto Yuki]

Resist Damage

[spoiler]

An innate ability of some personas to decrease the amount of damage an attack on their human self does. In the Omniverse, this ability manifests as a thin, invisible barrier, surrounding the user's body, clothes, and any items they're holding. This protection greatly reduces, though it can't completely cancel, any damage it receives from any attack. This makes it entirely useless against any attack that can bypass it entirely, and attacks of the mental variety.

The barrier is finite and will dissolve if it accumulates a significant amount of damage, with heavier, more concentrated attacks using up more of its power. The effect is more pronounced when the user is completely still, as it is inversely proportional to the user's degree of movement. The barrier can be thrown up in a pinch with a couple of seconds of concentration, but is much more powerful and longer lasting if it's charged before an encounter, with the limit being reached within 30 seconds of charging it.

[/spoiler]
Thanks, Vincent!

[Enzo Matrix]

Assist: Tier 1 - 1000 OM
AndrAIa
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ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 1
TEC: 2

Trident - 300 OM
Requires Physical Strength

A three pronged spear that measures about six feet long. It is lightweight and easy to maneuver around, but at the same time is sturdy enough to withstand constant direct blows. When not in use, it collapses to a small stick that is about the size of a fist for easy storage on a belt or somewhere similar. With the press of a small button it can be extended or retracted between sizes, with a locking mechanism to prevent accidental deployment both in and out of battle. Deploying the weapon as well as sheathing it takes only one second. This is AndrAIa's weapon of choice, but Matrix is skilled with it as well and she will sometimes loan it to him.

[Joseph Joestar]

Taokaka - Tier 1 Assist - 1000 OM
As seen in http://omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f...644#p15222
ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 2
TEC: 1
Ragna calls his fellow displaced catgirl, Taokaka, to aid him in battle. Her short attention span is something of a liability when it comes to actually staying in battle, but her adept speed ensures she can at least keep up with a fight, even if she's not so powerful as Ragna overall.

Kaka Claws - 300 OM (Requires Physcial Proficiency)
Taokaka unsheathes wicked 7-inch claws from the slots on her paw-coat and leggings, using them to attack. While being undeniably sharp (enough to cut through most cloths and break skin), they aren't able to cut really deep and her movement agility is reduced with them out.

Claw Stick - 300 OM (Requires Kaka Claws, Super Jumping)
With her unsheathed claws, Taokaka can latch herself onto most any surface she can reach and hold herself there. She cannot move freely, however, and must devote all of her claws to holding herself steady. How long she can stay gripped depends on the surface, but it typically range to around 10 seconds. Taokaka can perform a wall-based 'Double Jump' in this manner.

Dancing Edge - 300 OM (Requires Burst Movement, Kaka Claws)
Taokaka's own Drive technique is a special dashing ability: she throws herself forward at any angle in a single 5-meter direction with a damaging claw outstretched. Tao is not affected by gravity or other forces (except some solid object) until she extends past 5 meters and the move ends; as a result, she can attack from unlikely or sudden angles. The only direction Taokaka cannot dash in is straight up.

[Tartaros]

Not actually got all the abilities or OM for these moves, I'm just posting my ideas in advance for approval if I ever decide to use them.

Black Iron Blade - 300 OM - Requires Physical Strength and Area Attack Proficiency

An unadorned and simplistic longsword of approximately six feet in length, given its name from the dark grey patterns in the blade caused by the pattern-welding forging method and multiple alloys used in its creation. While a rather large, durable and somewhat intimidating weapon, its small guard can be broken through or slid past with sufficient force, and its size can make its use in cramped areas difficult.

Cluster Grenade - 300 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency and Area Attack Proficiency

A commonly used anti-personnel explosive, the Mark VI cluster bomb can be a brutally effective tool when used against large groups of infantry, or as a harassment tool against armoured vehicles. Simplistic in concept, the explosive functions in much the same way as a normal fragmentation grenade, though with shells of highly concentrated napam jelly dispersed throughout the explosive materials that make up much of the grenade's structure. The resulting ignition causes the small projectiles to catch alight and be launched in across the 10 meter effective range of the blast, easily passing through wood and hide, though blocked rather easily by steel or concrete. While such a weapon is potentially devastating in the right hands, the results of an early ignition or a poor throw are obviously punishing.

Combat Shotgun: - 600 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency



A pump shotgun, the weapon of choice for Imperial Guard drop troops, sappers and law enforcers. While not particularly adorned or specialized in any manner, the mechanism for the firearm is extremely simple and reliable, with malfunctions such as jams being an extreme rarity, even in the most hostile environments. While commonly loaded loaded with buckshot shells, the shotgun can also be loaded with large lead slugs, trading spread and loading speed for extra accuracy and damage.

Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of rough iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and only slightly longer than one's forearm. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.

Leaping Strike - 600 OM - Requires Physical Strength, Burst Movement and Super Jumping (Basic) or higher

Tartaros leaps into the air or charges across the ground, clasping whatever weapon which is at hand tightly, before crashing down onto his target. While a very damaging attack, any sort of regular use can be a strain on the users body, and in very tight corridors, use of the attack would be borderline-impossible.

[Minato Namikaze]

Black Iron Blade - 300 OM - Requires Physical Strength and Area Attack Proficiency

An unadorned and simplistic longsword of approximately six feet in length, given its name from the dark grey patterns in the blade caused by the pattern-welding forging method and multiple alloys used in its creation. While a rather large, durable and somewhat intimidating weapon, its small guard can be broken through or slid past with sufficient force, and its size can make its use in cramped areas difficult.

Just a basic sword? This seems fine to me. Approved at 300 OM

Hallowed Protection - 300 OM - Requires Area Shield Proficiency, Physical Strength

A rectangular shield of rough iron, engraved with an ancient prayer and only slightly longer than one's forearm. While otherwise unremarkable, with the utterance of a short invocation it can provide protection against simple magics for the user for a short while.

The shield you described doesn't really fit the area shield proficiency checklist, and what I mean by that you wouldn't actually need the mentioned proficiency to use the move, as it sounds like the shield is rather small. 'slightly longer than one's forearm'. Another thing to mention is that a move can't be specifically good or bad against specific things. So you'll need to remove the part about providing protection against magics, unless that part is purely an RP fodder term to describe all moves, in which case that would be fine.

Leaping Strike - 600 OM - Requires Physical Strength, Burst Movement and Super Jumping (Basic) or higher

Tartaros leaps into the air or charges across the ground, clasping whatever weapon which is at hand tightly, before crashing down onto his target. While a very damaging attack, any sort of regular use can be a strain on the users body, and in very tight corridors, use of the attack would be borderline-impossible.

This move doesn't need to be 600 OM as it is only doing one thing. You can execute a move in different ways, for example, I could have Minato teleport to his opponent with a Rasengan, or I could have him run at his opponent with his Rasengan, but the Rasengan itself is still costs 300. With that said, Approved at 300 OM

Note: I have left out Cluster Grenade and Combat Shotgun as I am not sure about those and will leave them for another staff member.

[Omni]

So, as they stand, those moves for Shade are approved now?

Yes.