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Cyburn
#1
Character name: Cyburn

Character source: Original

Character history: Cyburn was born under a different name, for that was a different time. A different life. That was who he was before the Canadians attacked. Cyburn first awoke when he heard the moose calls, and outside he saw what should have never been. Thousands of mounties riding in on moose, and they were all charging, heading south. They had begun their world conquest.

The others had shrugged off his warnings, for in his old life, he had known that the Canadians would one day be the evil empire that they were always destined to be. The old him knew who they were, for whenever he had met someone as nice as a Canadian, they had some horrible secrets. But Canada? That was a country filled with people that nice. They had to be hiding something, and now the rest of the world knew.

Cursing the Canadians, he reached for his Tim Horton's coffee, they had crippled the economy by raising the prices of their coffee, which they had a monopoly on. Finishing his drink, he grabbed his crossbow, and he began his long one man guerrilla strike team against their tyrannical rule. He will forever remember what they did, and his hatred for them runs deep.

Physical Description: Cyburn wears a snow white trench coat, to better hide himself in the Canadian wilderness. The coat is actually quite warm, something that he is thankful for. The rest of his attire is, similarly, white. He has various other outfits, all look exactly the same, but with differing color schemes to allow him camouflage himself in the various parts of the world where the Canadians have taken over.

His face is hard, and his eyes piercing. If one watches, then they can see him constantly scanning the area, trying to see if he can find a Canadian hiding in the midst. His hair is long, unkempt, and brown. It's constantly greasy due to him not being able to bathe thanks to him always being on the run from the Canadian war machine.

Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency 1000 OM Area Attack Proficiency 600 OM

Starting Powers: Enhanced Senses (Advanced [Smelling]) 1700 OM Stealth 1200 OM

Starting Moves: Crossbow 300 OM His crossbow is something that he has been modifying since the war began, and it is able to perform many tricks with it.Such as being able to hold six bolts before needing to be reloaded. It appears to be a simple crossbow if one looks at it, and it comes in various color schemes to help hide in the various terrains that he fights in. It can fire up to 300 yards without much of a problem.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
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Yllä harmaan korven korpit laulaa,
Hurme tämän kansan roudan sulattaa,
Katso kuinka hohkaa kansi taivaan,
Kutsuu se meitä tumman virran taa,
Heikot vaipuu kuohuun sysimustaan,
Sankarit kun astuu joen rantaan,
Halki iäisyyden laulu raikaa,
Kutsuu se veljiä tumman virran taa
#2
First of all, thank you for a good laugh. :lol:

As for your application, most of it seems to be in order. However, you need to provide a description of the Crossbow. It doesn't have to be highly detailed, since it is quite self-explanatory, but information regarding its appearance, range, rate of fire etc. would be helpful.
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"To confront a person with his shadow is to show him his own light. "
- Carl Gustav Jung

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#3
Bump.

Didn't know where to put the description of the crossbow, so it is in the character description.
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Yllä harmaan korven korpit laulaa,
Hurme tämän kansan roudan sulattaa,
Katso kuinka hohkaa kansi taivaan,
Kutsuu se meitä tumman virran taa,
Heikot vaipuu kuohuun sysimustaan,
Sankarit kun astuu joen rantaan,
Halki iäisyyden laulu raikaa,
Kutsuu se veljiä tumman virran taa
#4
You put the description in the same place as the move itself. Also, can you give me an approximate range?
[Image: LsiSHXa.png]
"To confront a person with his shadow is to show him his own light. "
- Carl Gustav Jung

Ezrihel Wrote:I'm so glad DL linked it
#5
Bump
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Yllä harmaan korven korpit laulaa,
Hurme tämän kansan roudan sulattaa,
Katso kuinka hohkaa kansi taivaan,
Kutsuu se meitä tumman virran taa,
Heikot vaipuu kuohuun sysimustaan,
Sankarit kun astuu joen rantaan,
Halki iäisyyden laulu raikaa,
Kutsuu se veljiä tumman virran taa
#6
Hmmm...does the Crossbow always fire multiple bolts or can it also fire off bolts individually? If the latter, then this move would cost 600 rather than 300 OM due to having two different modes of fire.

I'm also wondering this because you picked up the Area Attack Proficiency, so I'm curious if what you were (no pun intended) aiming to do is use multiple bolts to hit a wider area.
[Image: LsiSHXa.png]
"To confront a person with his shadow is to show him his own light. "
- Carl Gustav Jung

Ezrihel Wrote:I'm so glad DL linked it
#7
Bump

That's something that I'll be using later down the road once I can afford some other attacks.
[Image: 23wp02.png]
Yllä harmaan korven korpit laulaa,
Hurme tämän kansan roudan sulattaa,
Katso kuinka hohkaa kansi taivaan,
Kutsuu se meitä tumman virran taa,
Heikot vaipuu kuohuun sysimustaan,
Sankarit kun astuu joen rantaan,
Halki iäisyyden laulu raikaa,
Kutsuu se veljiä tumman virran taa
#8
Alright, that seems good enough for me. You are hereby approved!

Name: Cyburn
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4800
Proficiencies: (1600); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers: (2900); Advanced Enhanced Senses (1700), Stealth (1200)
Moves: (300); Crossbow (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

Make a new thread in the Roster forum and copy paste the form I made for you above into its first post. I highly recommend making additional posts in that thread providing more detailed information about your character.

I would also advise giving this a read to help you get started. You can do any future purchases here.

Thank you for your patience and I hope you will enjoy your time here! Smile
[Image: LsiSHXa.png]
"To confront a person with his shadow is to show him his own light. "
- Carl Gustav Jung

Ezrihel Wrote:I'm so glad DL linked it


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