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[Saroth]

CHARACTER NAME: Saroth Lyze

CHARACTER SOURCE: Original

CHARACTER HISTORY: Saroth grew up in a very abusive household. His mother was beaten by each new guy she brought home. Around the 6th or 7th boyfriend they started turning their aggressions towards Saroth. His left leg was broke so severely he has since had a limp. Eventually he chose to take revenge on the losers who abused him and his mom. He somehow managed to get his hands on a grimoire imbuing him with dark magic. The first thing he did was take the lives of his mother's boyfriends but, did not know about the drawbacks magic and disappeared.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: 6"4', Black hair, Average build, left leg is slightly skewed to the right at the knee,Hazel eyes, Wears black glasses,
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STATS:
ATK:4
DEF:2
SPD:0 ( Cause: Saroth's malformed leg)
TEC:4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:
Physical Strength (1000)
STARTING POWERS:
Time Manipulation (800)
Stealth (1200)
STARTING MOVES:
Shadow blade: Requires a chant to summon the blade.("Shadow blade come to me, and give me your curse") The cursed blade is 5 feet long and causes medium damage. The blade drains stamina from the user over time, and if the blade is out for more than an hour the user blacks out. The damage of the blade decreases along with the user's stamina at first it puts out high damage then after 25 or so minutes medium damage and after 40 minutes low damage.(300)
Soul Scythe: A steel blade around 3 feet in length and a 4 foot handle. Despite the name the scythe has no special features except for the grooved handle for a better grip and, an extremely sharp steel blade.(300)
Brace blade: A metal brace with a 8 inch blade at the heel. The brace is has a joint at the knee that automatically locks when standing. The attack purposes for the brace are very limited. Its use in combat is ill advised at best. The blade's activation locks the brace on place making Saroth unable to move. The blade should only be used on an unaware opponent or if all other options are exhausted. (300)

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[Luci]

Hi Saroth, welcome to the Omniverse! There are some minor issues I'd like you to clean up before a senior mod looks over your app.

I see that you chose Advanced Telekenisis as a starting power. Telekinesis requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, and Ranged Materialize Proficiency before it can be purchased.

It would also be helpfull if you could list in parenthesis the cost of each power or move. So for example Physical Strength (1000).

Also, if you remember where you found us, or if a member referred you, please let us know!

[Saroth]

Ok, that should fix it I added a move and rearranged my stats, and changed my powers I spent 4500 omnillium.

[Civic]

Shadow Blade: this one should only be 300, it's a basic sword and doesn't change or have any variable attacks. Also you're welcome to keep the stamina drain for flavour but you don't need to have it if you don't want to.

Brace Blade: you mention this can't be used in battle but you have it as a move. Could you clarify please? Also if it's just a retractable blade, it would only cost 300.

[Saroth]

Ok, thank you I will change that.

[Dane Regan]

Shadow Blade: this one should only be 300, it's a basic sword and doesn't change or have any variable attacks. Also you're welcome to keep the stamina drain for flavour but you don't need to have it if you don't want to.

Jumping in here to clarify one thing. A stamina drain is considered to be a drawback, so if your sword is more tiring to use (or even just hold), it will be a stronger weapon (maybe it hits harder, maybe it's easier and quicker to swing than it "should" be, you could use it to justify one of these things in your move if you wanted). Thus, it's not just "flavour". It won't make the weapon all-powerful or anything, but it can give you an edge at the cost of fatigue.

That said, outside of mechanics, it does create the interesting narrative for fights of "this sword is draining my energy, I've got to get this over with quickly".

[Saroth]

Ok that should fix everything, probably. I was wondering if I could have a grimoire it wouldn't do anything as far as spell power or anything but would be an extra voice to keep Saroth in check like a parent. I was also planning on using it as a story device for new moves once I saved enough omnillium.

[Saroth]

Been about two days can some one check this?

[Civic]

Sorry for the wait. Everything looks good! Welcome to the Omniverse! We hope you have a great time here.
 
Please copy and paste the below into a new thread in the Rosters forum with your character’s name as the title:
 
Name: Saroth Lyze
Spent OM: 3900
Consumed OM:
Proficiencies (1000): Physical Strength (1000)
Powers (2000/8000): Time Manipulation (800), Stealth (1200)
Moves (900): Shadow Blade (300), Soul Scythe (300), Brace Blade (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base Stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 2
SPD: 0
TEC: 4
 
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Take a look at this thread to give you some pointers about what do do next.
 
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[Trixie]

Activated.