Vash Log

[Dane Regan]

Purchases and Deductions for Vash the Stampede go here!

Current post count: (your current post count, viewable below your avatar)
Current Earned OM: (your current Earned OM, viewable next to your posts)
Current Spent OM: (total, viewable on your roster)
Buying: (whatever it is you want to buy. If purchasing a move you MUST link to the approval). Cost: (the cost) OM
New Spent OM in category: (your new total spent on Moves, Powers or whatever it was you bought)
New Overall Spent OM: (your total Spent OM after the purchase)

All moves must be approved here before purchase.

[Vash]

Current post count: 5
Current Earned OM: 5353
Current Spent OM: 4200
Buying:
Projectile Deflection -300 OM (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash, using his sharp senses and wit, can predict where many projectiles will end up. By throwing rocks or other hard objects in his vicinity Vash can deflect individual physical projectiles such as bullets, arrows, bolts, or other forms of small ballistic munitions one at a time. This will only work if Vash can see the source of the projectile and focuses on performing this action (unless it moves at an exorbitantly slow pace), it isn't excessively large, his TEC determines how effective and the amount of focus required to perform this.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid131482
New Spent OM in Category: 900
New Overall Spent OM: 2500

[Vash]

new overall spent om 4500*
I really need to carefully proofread things

[Dane Regan]

This purchase is currently invalid.

You need to post your rewrite of Projectile Deflection (responding to the feedback) in the move approval thread, where it will then be approved (assuming no further changes are required). Then you can purchase it. Sorry if that wasn't made completely clear. (So just repost the move you posted above in the move approval thread and I'll get you sorted.)

[Vash]

alright, sorry!

[Vash]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid131565
Projectile Deflection -300 OM (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash, using his sharp senses and wit, can predict where many projectiles will end up. By throwing rocks or other hard objects in his vicinity at an intecepting velocity, Vash can deflect individual projectiles such as bullets, arrows, bolts, or other forms of small ballistic munitions one at a time, including small spells or laser bolts. This will only work if Vash can see the source of the projectile and is focusing on the shooter the moment they fire (unless the projectile moves at an exorbitantly slow pace). His TEC determines effectiveness and the amount of focus required to perform this, with faster projectiles being harder to deflect. Throwing rocks quickly enough to deflect bullets and other fast projectiles can put a strain on his arm, especially if done repetitively.