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12-07-2017, 09:40 AM
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(12-04-2017, 09:08 PM)13-Jzall Wrote: Mine and asriel's fight thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8899
Participants: asriel and 13-jzall
13-jzall: 1352 words and 7397 characters
Asriel: 1253 words and 7042 characters
Participation bonuses ahoy!
13-Jzall: 73.85 OM
Asriel: 70.42 OM
(12-04-2017, 10:46 PM)Dust Wrote: Dust in the Tower
Personal Story Line: Group
Participating characters (please list):
Dust
Blair (Marcus's NPC)
Frenchie (Moon Knight's NPC)
Jarvis (Vision's NPC)
Total character count including spaces
Dust - 32,241
Blair - 2,608
Frenchie - 11,988
Jarvis - 10,140
Total word count
Dust - 5,990
Blair - 468
Frenchie - 2,171
Jarvis - 1,771
Dust: 644.82 OM (Participation and Great Writing Bonus!)
Marcus Wright (Blair): 26.08 OM (Partic.)
Moon Knight (Frenchie): 119.88 OM (Partic.)
Vision (Jarvis): 101.4 OM (Partic.)
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ABOUT TIME, HUH?
Link to topic [A Sweet Escape]
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Essent Rose Allison & (NPC) Ethan, (The Late) Chakravartin Wu Kong & (NPC) Cirrus Neon
Total character count including spaces:
ESSENT: 22707
CHAKRA: 7263
Total word count:
ESSENT: 4153
CHAKRA: 1319
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(12-12-2017, 12:41 AM)Essent Rose Allison Wrote: ABOUT TIME, HUH?
Link to topic [A Sweet Escape]
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Essent Rose Allison & (NPC) Ethan, (The Late) Chakravartin Wu Kong & (NPC) Cirrus Neon
Total character count including spaces:
ESSENT: 22707
CHAKRA: 7263
Total word count:
ESSENT: 4153
CHAKRA: 1319
Participation and writing bonuses granted!
Chakravartin: Switched characters, N/A.
Essent Rose Allison: 454.28 OM (Great writing bonus!)
LOGS ARE UPDATED!
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12-21-2017, 05:37 AM
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Link to topic - That Night...?
Quest or Personal Storyline
Participating characters (Log Link Intered): Pyrrha Nikos, Okor Paleblood, Alex Mercer, Sister Evangeline
Total character count including spaces:
Pyrrha Nikos: 26,445
Okor Paleblood: 25,226
Alex Mercer: 28,682
Sister Evangeline: 46,708
Total word count:
Pyrrha Nikos: 4,782
Okor Paleblood: 5,324
Alex Mercer: 5,233
Sister Evangeline: 10,132
Comment: I want to nominate all the writers here for a bonus respective to their word counts. While I feel I was lacking myself, Okor, Alex, and Eva did a great job putting this story together with me. It was fun to write with them. Okor's cultists helped me develop Pyrrha more here in the Omniverse, helping her realize she was no longer in Kansas. Eva plays their character amazingly, too, it's always a good read.
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12-24-2017, 06:06 AM
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(12-21-2017, 05:37 AM)Pyrrha Nikos Wrote: Link to topic - That Night...?
Quest or Personal Storyline
Participating characters (Log Link Intered): Pyrrha Nikos, Okor Paleblood, Alex Mercer, Sister Evangeline
Total character count including spaces:
Pyrrha Nikos: 26,445
Okor Paleblood: 25,226
Alex Mercer: 28,682
Sister Evangeline: 46,708
Total word count:
Pyrrha Nikos: 4,782
Okor Paleblood: 5,324
Alex Mercer: 5,233
Sister Evangeline: 10,132
Comment: I want to nominate all the writers here for a bonus respective to their word counts. While I feel I was lacking myself, Okor, Alex, and Eva did a great job putting this story together with me. It was fun to write with them. Okor's cultists helped me develop Pyrrha more here in the Omniverse, helping her realize she was no longer in Kansas. Eva plays their character amazingly, too, it's always a good read.
Yea, pretty much agree. Quality.
Participation bonus for everyone, Great bonus for everyone except Sister E, who gets Exceptional.
Pyrrha: 528.90
Okor: 504.52
Alex: 573.64
Sister: 1401.24
Will be updated by someone with the correct permissions!
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United We Stand
Group Storyline
Participating Characters: Moon Knight, Dust, Marcus Wright, Dick Howland, homin Ratione, The Vision (NPC, Edwin Jarvis)
Total Word Count:
Dust- 1,350
Moon Knight- 801
Dick Howland- 661
The Vision- 350
Marcus Wright- 306
homin Ratione- 358
Total Character Count:
Dust- 7,274
Moon Knight- 4351
Dick Howland- 3678
The Vision- 2142
Marcus Wright- 1739
homin Ratione- 1940
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12-24-2017, 07:49 PM
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(12-24-2017, 07:40 PM)Moon Knight Wrote: United We Stand
Group Storyline
Participating Characters: Moon Knight, Dust, Marcus Wright, Dick Howland, homin Ratione, The Vision (NPC, Edwin Jarvis)
Total Word Count:
Dust- 1,350
Moon Knight- 801
Dick Howland- 661
The Vision- 350
Marcus Wright- 306
homin Ratione- 358
Total Character Count:
Dust- 7,274
Moon Knight- 4351
Dick Howland- 3678
The Vision- 2142
Marcus Wright- 1739
homin Ratione- 1940
Participation bonus for all! One sec while I update logs!
Dick Howland: 36.58 OM
The Vision: 20.95 OM
Moon Knight: 43.1 OM
Dust: 72.74 OM
Marcus Wright: 17.2 OM
homin-Ratione: 19.1 OM
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Turning in Quest: Hand of the Empire
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid122480
This is kind of a unique circumstance; while the exact word count of this thread may not satisfy the standards, Kopaka has joined a few events on behalf of the Empire and has pursued joining their ranks almost the entire time he's been in the Omniverse. Just mentioning for awareness of context.
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(12-27-2017, 12:13 AM)Kopaka Wrote: Turning in Quest: Hand of the Empire
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid122480
This is kind of a unique circumstance; while the exact word count of this thread may not satisfy the standards, Kopaka has joined a few events on behalf of the Empire and has pursued joining their ranks almost the entire time he's been in the Omniverse. Just mentioning for awareness of context.
Can you give us the quest requirements, and also your word and character count (with spaces)?
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12-27-2017, 11:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-30-2017, 12:17 PM by King Ghidorah.
Edit Reason: editing for punctuation increased the character count by 2.
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Crossroads
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: King Ghidorah
Total Character Count: 46,986
Total Word Count: 8,112
Turning this monster in for grading. Pun intended.
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Giving a Helping Hand
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest – Hand of the Empire
Participating Characters: Kopaka (Technically Casey Jones but he got switched.)
Total Character Count: 42,902
Total Word Count: 7,462
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(12-28-2017, 08:48 AM)Kopaka Wrote: Giving a Helping Hand
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest – Hand of the Empire
Participating Characters: Kopaka (Technically Casey Jones but he got switched.)
Total Character Count: 42,902
Total Word Count: 7,462
Alrighty. Here's the deal. Your prose is, of course, superior, and in light of that you've more than satisfied the word-count. However, combining the on-again off-again nature of how you got there with the fact that you eliminated Michael during a scene-transition (well-executed though it was), and we can't quite give this the go-ahead yet. Fill in that blank spot where Kopaka actually does the thing the EPD asked him so long ago to do, and quest-approval will be yours.
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White isn't a Color
Quest: Hand of the Empire (5,000-10,000)
Participating characters: Boba Fett (Odin)* and Jaixe Furiael
Total character count including spaces
Boba Fett: 11,711
Jaixe Furiael: 57,743
Total word count
Boba Fett: 2,102 Words
Jaixe Furiael: 9,924 Words
*Dropped out of existence and written out later on. Not sure what the rules are on that, to be honest...
I used Microsoft Word to acquire these numbers.
I didn't really enjoy writing this a whole lot, so I'm basically submitting and forgetting, and it's not really Boba's fault. Him disappearing didn't help, but I'm not begrudging him for it. I'm off to, hopefully, do better.
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(12-28-2017, 08:48 AM)Kopaka Wrote: Giving a Helping Hand
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest – Hand of the Empire
Participating Characters: Kopaka (Technically Casey Jones but he got switched.)
Total Character Count: 42,902
Total Word Count: 7,462
Resubmitting for approval.
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01-01-2018, 08:51 PM
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(01-01-2018, 07:12 PM)Kopaka Wrote: (12-28-2017, 08:48 AM)Kopaka Wrote: Giving a Helping Hand
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest – Hand of the Empire
Participating Characters: Kopaka (Technically Casey Jones but he got switched.)
Total Character Count: 56,780
Total Word Count: 9,842
Resubmitting for approval.
Approval granted (and word/character count adjusted.) Welcome to the EPD.
For the section prior to the disappearance of Casey Jones, a Particpation bonus is in order. That would be posts 1 through 9, for which your word count and character count were 5,910 and 34,154 respectively. So, at 50%, that's an additional +341.54.
I waffled a bit on whether to give you an exceptional writing bonus as well, but as much as I love your prose, the false starts lacking clean segues broke the flow too much. You killed it on the ending - Kopaka's wholehearted descent into bloodthirsty madness is chilling (appropriately enough), and the contrast between his lust for violence and the cultists' welcoming pacifist resistance was stark and unsettling - but I've gotta be as objective as I can.
Kopaka: + 341.54 OM
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Link to topic: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9406
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest, specifically Enter the Halls
Participating characters (please list): Erik Vrell
Total character count including spaces: 57498
Total word count: 10,004
*The emperor of mankind yeets erik into a sun*
[Today 08:03 pm] Erik Vrell : Bruh
[Today 08:03 pm] The emperor of mankind : don't worship gods
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01-02-2018, 11:24 PM
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(12-29-2017, 12:13 AM)Jaixe Furiael Wrote: White isn't a Color
Quest: Hand of the Empire (5,000-10,000)
Participating characters: Boba Fett (Odin)* and Jaixe Furiael
Total character count including spaces
Boba Fett: 11,711
Jaixe Furiael: 57,743
Total word count
Boba Fett: 2,102 Words
Jaixe Furiael: 9,924 Words
*Dropped out of existence and written out later on. Not sure what the rules are on that, to be honest...
I used Microsoft Word to acquire these numbers.
I didn't really enjoy writing this a whole lot, so I'm basically submitting and forgetting, and it's not really Boba's fault. Him disappearing didn't help, but I'm not begrudging him for it. I'm off to, hopefully, do better.
Approved!
Participation bonus for Jaixe through post #6: 5506 words, 31695 characters.
Boba Fett: +117.11 OM
Jaixe Furiael: +316.95 OM
A senior staffer will process you both.
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(12-27-2017, 11:05 PM)King Ghidorah Wrote: Crossroads
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: King Ghidorah
Total Character Count: 46,986
Total Word Count: 8,112
Turning this monster in for grading. Pun intended.
Exemplary writing bonus granted!
King Ghidorah: 939.38 OM!
(Log updated!)
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01-07-2018, 06:25 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-08-2018, 10:37 AM by Mark.
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(01-01-2018, 11:23 PM)Erik Vrell Wrote: Link to topic: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9406
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest, specifically Enter the Halls
Participating characters (please list): Erik Vrell
Total character count including spaces: 57498
Total word count: 10,004
Word and character count came out slightly different when I double checked: 10405 and 57475. Not a terrifying discrepancy, but worth noting.
Quest approved, and bonus granted (Great)!
Erik Vrell: +574.75 OM
The thing that really kept this from Exemplary was how you formatted your dialogue. Whenever two characters are talking, its helpful if you break the paragraph when the speaker changes so that you don't end up with back-to-back quote-marked sentences spoken by different people. Not doing so makes it difficult for a reader to follow who's saying what, especially if the dialogue's content lacks immediate contextual clues.
A senior staffer will deposit your bonus in your underground treasure-vaults.
Mark Wrote:Updated.
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ring, ring
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Albert Wesker
Total character count including spaces: 46,796 (according to wordcounter.net)
Total word count: 8,283 (according to wordcounter.net)
"Hold on a second, I have a call..."
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"Yes, this is Wesker. Go ahead."
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