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Creatia Weatherly
#1
Character name: Creatia Weatherly

Character source: Original

Character history: Prior to arriving into the depths of the Omniverse, Creatia was a potion mage from the planet of Denicatos. Denicatos is a planet that combines magic, technology, and nature into a harmonious meld. Creatia is part of a race called the Denicata (Singular is Denica), which is a race of brown-haired, magically inclined satyrs.

She was the third out of four children that was born into a large mining empire. The Weatherly estate was the third largest Soul mining establishment on their planet. Soul are powerful mana crystals that the planet naturally formed; it was the main power source for the entirety of Denicatos and boasted more potency off planet, thus making it a valuable sell in the multiversal black markets. The oldest brother, Daniel, was the heir to the estate.

Each major family in Denicatos had its own magic focus and history of how Soul could best be implemented in their field; Creatia's family specialized in potions and herbology, and she picked up her family’s focus at the age of 10. She was taught the basics of her craft and quickly picked up a passionate love for what she and her family did. Her older sister Miracle Bell taught her how to use and fight with the naginata at the age of 13. In time and with her family’s patience and care, Creatia grew to be a proper lady; however being spoiled and coddled by her father made her very childish in the process.

Creatia's brother Daniel died when she was 20 during a usual Soul mining operation; the mine he died in was sabotaged by the same race who would later rampage her home planet. Indiscriminately killing man, woman, and child alike, the vampiric humanoid race called the Korsen plundered Creatia's home world for their main livelihood: the Soul crystals. Creatia managed to escape with the youngest of their kin while Miracle Bell defended the manor. During the chaos, she was ambushed. Her younger brother Andrew was kidnapped by Korsen soldiers. Creatia gave chase to them, only to see them kill her brother before her eyes. She was then spotted and attacked, suffering fatal injuries as she was left alone in the carnage. In those final moments of living as a normal Denica, she was faced with the fading visage of a woman approaching her. She mistook the woman for one of her Denican gods before closing her eyes. The last thing she felt was lips locking with hers…

And then she woke up. Her wounds were somehow healed, and yet she was still on the battlefield. The only difference was there was another living soul: the same woman she glimpsed before who (accidentally) saved her via her own gifts. The woman held out her hand to Creatia, introducing herself as Lexi. Like before, Creatia mistook her for a Denican God and refused to leave her side.

Lexi protected Creatia as she escorted the girl to a nearby refugee camp. By then, the Korsen were already pulling back, a majority of their troops already down; however, they had already made off with a massive amount of Soul, enough to cripple the planet and its people for eons to come. Despite being the last blood heir to the Weatherly empire, there was almost no worth to it now that the mass of Soul was gone. Leaving the remains of the estate to her still living uncle and aunt, Creatia decided to go with Lexi on her travels as thanks for saving her life. (Much to Lexi’s chagrin, as she still saw Lexi as a goddess.) Creatia began her journeys alongside the woman, eventually coming across the Multiversal Federation Alliance, a regulatory group that aided in the maintenance of the realms of reality.

Many years later and long realizing her savior is no god, Creatia is an A-rank Mercenary and Clerical Agent for the MFA, and second in command of Lexi’s three man crew.

And then she fell into the realms of the Omniverse...


Physical Description: (originals only)
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Standing at a good 5’9”, Creatia is a thin, flat-chested, and pear-shaped woman underneath her dress. A good amount of her 136 pounds lies in her curvy hips; if she overeats, it's bound to end up there before going anywhere else. Her skin is a pale Caucasian like color that’s easy to flush due to weather or embarrassment.

Her extremely long hair is a soft chestnut brown like the rest of her race. Her eyes are a pale, yet brilliant green, almost like the color of fresh grass or clouded emeralds.

Not shown are her ears, which are clearly not human. Upon first look, they remind one of a furry zebratail butterfly. Her ears have the shape akin to one of their wings, that's for sure. They’re folded over like a deer’s ears (or maybe a goat’s) and are brown like her hair, but the fur is also speckled. However, the rest is large folds taking the shape of a butterfly, the “tails” being her earlobes. The folded upper skin looks very resilient, but the lower skin is very thin and folds into itself and flutter easily. Inside her winglike ears lie tufts of fluffy white fur. To match these ears is a long and brown speckled deer's tail on her rump, with a white underside.

Her only unseen accessory is a pair of over the ear headphones that lie under the sunhat and hide her ears. The headphones are light blue; the ear coverings are trimmed with teal and a simple yellow line halfway crossing the middle of each one. It kind of gives the impression of a power symbol when looked at from the side. A small yellow inline microphone extends from the headphones as well, the speaker tipped with blue foam.

Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength - 1000 OM
Ranged Proficiency - 1000 OM

Starting Powers:
Burst Movement Power - 800 OM

Starting Moves:
Coriana (Physical Strength): A three and a half foot naginata with a long and curved blade, decored with two silver-white wings, fur trim, and a large blue mana crystal called Soul in the center. A small Soul gem tips the very bottom of the staff as well. It’s very cumbersome and hard to maneuver because of its top heavy design, and requires the user to stand still for five to ten seconds in order to summon it. Coriana is used for mid and long-range melee attacks, which tires out the user if used for an extended period of time. It is also a powerful catalyst for potion spellcasting because of the two Soul gems.

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#2
Hello and welcome to the Omniverse!

This is all looking good, I'm just a bit confused about your move. How long does it take to summon this? What are the potion effects that it refers to?

Also, who is the friend who recommended you? They get a little bonus for doing so.
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#3
Thank you! Uh, let's see...

The time it takes to summon the naginata is around 3 minutes. The potions that it refers to are elemental and status spell potion vials that contain Wind, Earth, Water, Fire, and Poison respectively in accordance to what she uses first. If Creatia sticks her fingers in a vial and brushes it against a surface or in the air, they can be used alone for a weak burst of their corresponding element that covers a short distance and has very small splash coverage. The spells improve with effect, distance and power with a catalyst such as Coriana or even something as simple as a paintbrush.

However, the potions themselves are a Move that I plan to buy later down the line; the naginata as it is now will mainly be used for melee. I just had to state it there for future reference.

Does that explain everything or do I need to elaborate further on a few details?

Oh! And the friend that recommended me goes by Judy Hopps and Jupiter here.
#4
You don't need to make the summoning time for the naginata so long. Since you're buying it as a move you can summon it on-the-fly in battle if you'd like, maybe a few seconds to summon if you don't want to carry it around all the time. Also, if it's purely a melee weapon in its current form, the move would only have Physical Strength as its requirement. The rest of the proficiencies you've listed I'm assuming are for the potions you mentioned, but since you don't have them yet I'd take out the extra profs until you buy the new moves. Similarly, I'd remove the second half of the description after the description of the Soul Gems, as it's kinda confusing to have that described when you don't have a move for it.

As a side note for later, you wouldn't need the spell time to have an hour channeling time if it's something you'll be using in battle as fights usually last nowhere near that long. The charge up time would be much shorter, probably less than a minute unless the effect is very strong. Specifics will be worked out later, but I thought I'd mention that now.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights

#5
All right, consider that part edited out. I'll re-add that information later as an upgrade when it comes down to it.

Also, thanks for the heads up! As I was reading over the rules, I'll admit to being lost on time frames, so I put longer ones to be safe.
#6
No problem! You're approved!

Name: Creatia Weatherly
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3700
Proficiencies: (2600); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers: (800/8000); Burst Movement (800)
Moves: (300); Coriana (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

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Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights



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