Jacob, Son of Sora

[Jacob: The Dual Keyblader]

Character name: Jacob, The duel keyblader

Character source: Kingdom hearts, Naruto, Dragon ball Z, etc, and Original

Character history: Born to Sora and Kairi on Destiny islands as their first child ten years after the defeat of Xanhort. Strong from an early age and inherited his mother's pure heart, he began to train under his father at the age of eight. Quickly showing an affinity for his parents keyblades, he went through the inheritance ceremony with both parents which allowed him to summon both Sora and Kairi's keyblades. At the age of twelve, Sora passed down the keychains for both Oath keeper and Oblivion which became Jacob's preferred keyblades. At thirteen, Jacob, began to train under his "uncle" Riku, who taught him to use the darkness and in his heart and how to control it. At fifteen, King Mickey trained him to utilize the light and darkness in tandem then the darkness invaded once again. Jacob was immediately called upon as the strongest keyblader alive, in the first fight against the prince of darkness, the origin of the heartless, he was pushed through a portal into a different realm of his own universe. This is when he realized the multiverse he lived in. He ended up traversing through the multiverse in the chase for the prince of darkness. In this he ends up meeting people such as Goku and Naruto who taught him various techniques. Finally he catches the prince of darkness, cornering him in the realm of darkness (Jacob's version of Underworld) and the final clash. At the darkest moment, just as the prince of darkness is about to strike down Epoch, The Almighty intervenes (Epoch's version of God). The Almighty takes Epoch to the realm of light (Jacob's version of Heaven) to reward him for his diligence to destroy the evil in the multiverse. This is where the Almighty grants him total mastery over dark and light along with Jacob's angel wings. The Almighty then sends him back to his home to rest. A year later, Jacob is at the end of his training and the respite granted to him, he was out laying around the beach when suddenly hundreds of hands begin to grab and take Jacob in pieces and all goes black...

Physical Description: A 5' 7", lanky young man with medium-short blonde, layered hair and large, light grey angelic wings. Toned but slim muscles (kinda like Natsu from fairytail) make up his battle hardened body. He inherited his dad's face shape and his mothers soft features along with her deep blue eyes. Jacob generally wears the Organization XIII coat he got from Riku but also wears black shorts and a red short-sleeved with red and black low top converse style shoes.



Oath keeper

Oblivion

Stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies: Physical strength (1000 OM)

Starting Powers: Flying (1800 OM), Foresight (1500 OM)

Starting Moves: Dual keyblades (600 OM), Oathkeeper and Oblivion keyblades, about 4' from tip to the end of the hilt. The blades are about 6" in width except at the key protrusion which is about 1' across. The width of the hilt is 1' foot and its about 1' long. They have similar functionality to katanas with how they are used to fight but can also be used like hook swords with the key protrusion on both. The blades are summoned instead of drawn but it takes the same amount of time as if you were drawing a sword. (These dimensions and attributes apply for both blades)



I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Reece]

I'm not a mod, so I don't have any official say in the matter, but in the interests of saving their time, I'll post this so that Minato or Proto won't have to:

Your move is going to need a description.

Luckily, you already have one. All you've done is put it in the wrong section. If you just move the keyblades' description from "weapons and clothing" (which isn't actually part of the joining form anyway) and put it under your move instead then you should be more-or-less good to go, like this:

Dual keyblades (600 OM)
Oathkeeper and Oblivion keyblades, about 4' from tip to the end of the hilt. The blades are about 6" in width except at the key protrusion which is about 1' across. The width of the hilt is 1' foot and its about 1' long. They have similar functionality to katanas with how they are used to fight but can also be used like hook swords with the key protrusion on both. The blades are summoned instead of drawn but it takes the same amount of time as if you were drawing a sword. (These dimensions and attributes apply for both blades)

And the bit you wrote about his clothing can just be included in Physical Description; there's no need for a separate heading to describe fashion choices.

Also, you might be allowed to keep it as it is (I'm not certain), but generally we don't mention the Gate of Truth; I know that Omni looks just like that guy, but he's not actually supposed to be him (at best, he's some sort of alternate universe doppelgänger version)... so you might want to remove the "hundreds of hands begin to grab and take Epoch in pieces" bit from your Character History.

Other than those minor details, it looks to me like you've done a good job reading the Rules and writing up your application. Good luck getting approved and I hope you enjoy your time here after getting through.

[Roger Smith]

Much of what Yajima has said is true. The bit about being pulled apart by pieces in your history by hundreds of hands doesn't really need to be mentioned anyway. No one really remembers the exact moments of being summoned.

Aside from that, a few minor bits of recordkeeping and clarity:

Dual Keyblades is fine with the description you provided, but keep in mind you'll only be able to use them both at once. If you did want to be able to use only one of them at a time, picking and choosing which one, that would be another 300 OM, making it a 900 OM move.

And one last minor thing, Flight is actually 1800 OM as opposed to 1500 OM. You have enough for it regardless, so that's not a problem.

EDIT: A complete dumb-dumb move on my end, but I missed this entirely my first time through. Just for clarification's sake: who is this Epoch you mention in Jacob's history? Is that Jacob himself, as can be assumed from context? It's minor, but do clear that up, if you could. Regardless, I think you're good to go. Roster will be up shortly.

[Roger Smith]

Name: Jacob
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies: (1000); Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (3300); Flight (1800), Foresight (1500)
Moves: (600); Dual Keyblades (600)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 2


Make a new thread in the Roster forum, and copy the roster template above into the first post. Subsequent posts in your Roster can include any other details about your character you might wish to include.

Any future purchases you make can be done right here.

Giving this a read over should give you some ideas of what to do next.

Once you get your Roster set up, head over here to get approved for access to the mini chat.

Welcome to the Omniverse, and enjoy your stay!

[Jacob: The Dual Keyblader]

Thanks! I cleared up the last bits about Epoch, that was a mistake...

[Minato Namikaze]

you'll need to post in the help desk and ask to get your name changed to your characters name