Joining as Awoor

[PANDATRON]

Character name: Awoor

Character source: Original.

Character history:

It (but Awoor identifies as a "she", despite lacking gender in the proper sense) is a diety-like being. She travels in between verses contained within a "Multiverse" themed verse, helping some in need, and hindering others under various aliases. "Awoor", as a name, is only one of the many she has among the different worlds she visits, and the one she as adopted as her own "name".

Despite being extremely powerful within her verse, she doesn't know what her own purpose is, and is often in a constant internal philosophical debate about why she is here and why things matter, among other concerns, such as being skeptical of her own perceptions - what if she actually isn't a god, and she's just being tricked by an overelaborate illusion?

Ultimately, she looks for answers and the truth behind these big questions. Motivated by that, she conjures forth "avatars" of humanoids (or whatever race is most convenient) into different worlds, looking for clues as different personas.

However, in one of her travels, she has reached a new kind of verse, somehow. Somewhere she hasn't been before - somewhere new.

Physical Description: (originals only)
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She walks on her four legs, but the tips of each of her horns can split into very humanlike "hands", and the horns themselves can move like arms.

Stats:
ATK: 0
DEF: 2
SPD: 4
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies:
(1000 OM) Ranged Proficiency
(1000 OM) Debuff Proficiency

Starting Powers:

Starting Moves:

Mana Arrow (300 OM). Ranged Prof, Debuff Prof
Awoor has a special item which she can summon forth - a bow of energy which she wields with her horns "hands", which can fire arrows of energy. These arrows cause no physical harm, instead, upon impact, they cause fatigue, by draining the victim's stamina. The drain typically causes a sudden loss of fatigue as if they had just made a short sprint. The victim recovers from the loss of fatigue as he/she normally would (resting or just waiting). The arrow can travel up to 100m away if aimed diagonally upwards for distance.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Dark Link]

Just as a note, this is Do-Domori's alternate character.

Also, you're going to need a Move that utilises the Ranged Proficiency. The Proficiency by itself isn't enough in this case.

[PANDATRON]

Done

[PANDATRON]

Re-editted.

[PANDATRON]

It's been nearly a week so... Bumping.

[Mickey Mouse]

Just really quick, we're clear that Awoor didn't just stumble on the Omniverse in her travels, right? That she was brought here by Omni?

Just a semantic thing. Everything else looks good to me. So sorry about the long wait!

[Dark Link]

I'm really sorry about the wait. As you can guess, I got caught up in other things.

The move is fine for the most part, but the dependency on specific stats makes it needlessly 'gamey'. Since stats pretty much apply to anything a character does in general, there is really no need to specifically mention that something depends on X and that the opponent is more or less susceptible to it based on Y. Honestly, if you just remove the sections that refer to specific stats, the move will be good to go as is.

[PANDATRON]

Just really quick, we're clear that Awoor didn't just stumble on the Omniverse in her travels, right? That she was brought here by Omni?

Just a semantic thing. Everything else looks good to me. So sorry about the long wait!

Yes, correct.

I'm really sorry about the wait. As you can guess, I got caught up in other things.

The move is fine for the most part, but the dependency on specific stats makes it needlessly 'gamey'. Since stats pretty much apply to anything a character does in general, there is really no need to specifically mention that something depends on X and that the opponent is more or less susceptible to it based on Y. Honestly, if you just remove the sections that refer to specific stats, the move will be good to go as is.

Removed stat-related stuff.

[Dark Link]

Alright, that works for me. You are hereby approved!

Name: Awoor
Level: 1
Spent OM: 2300
Proficiencies: (2000); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Powers:
Moves: (300); Mana Arrow (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 0
DEF: 2
SPD: 4
TEC: 4

You should know what to do from here. Read this in case you need to refresh your memory. Your Purchase Log is here.

Enjoy!