Joining Derek Thorn

[Derek Thorn]

CHARACTER NAME:Derek Thorn

CHARACTER SOURCE:Original

CHARACTER HISTORY: Derek Thorn is from a world of magitech. The balance of magic and technology led to some crazy abominations that plagued the societies. Derek was one of the few who decided to hunt the abominations. Derek uses his two main weapons, the red sword that symbolises the passion and fury of the beasts he hunts, and the blue sword that symbolises the cold calculating nature that puts humans above the beasts he hunts.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Derek is a human. He is twenty-six years old, or at least looks it. He has short, brown hair, usually unkempt under his hat. 5 foot 11 inches in height. His coat is made of a sheet of metal with larger metal plates in some places to provide more protection.

STATS:
ATK:3
DEF:2
SPD:2
TEC:3

STARTING PROFICIENCIES: Physical Strength (1000)

STARTING POWERS: Master Super Jump (800). Integration (1000).

STARTING MOVES:  
Quick blade. A 17 inch long sword that focuses on speed over cutting power. It is very fast, being much less dense then it appears, meaning it doesn't do much damage, but can hit much faster. Can be chained together to form combos with itself and Strong Blade. (300)
Strong blade. A 17 inch long sword that focuses on strength and hitting hard over speed. It is much denser than it appears, meaning it hits harder, but at a much slower rate. Can be chained together to form combos with itself and Quick Blade. (300)
Hammer fist, using his power of Integration, Derek turns his fist into tightly compacted steel and charges up a devastating punch. He does this by clutching a coin that is a relic of his old life. The relic is just an old steel coin that has no magical significance, only sentimental value to Derek.The punch is similar to the strong blade, only it takes two seconds to charge, does much more damage. Unlike the blades, this can only be used to end a combo. (300)

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[Daniel]

I would advise looking at some other joining threads to see how their moves are formatted. It'd also be of use if you look at the moves guide.

[Derek Thorn]

I would advise looking at some other joining threads to see how their moves are formatted. It'd also be of use if you look at the moves guide.

Edits made.

[Omni]

Some rough height for your character would be good, and rough length for the swords. See http://omniverse-rpg.com/moves.php#Basic_Move_Examples

[Derek Thorn]

Height and lengths added

[Omni]

Those are good! I forgot one more thing (I'm not sure if that punch was there before, but I missed it):

The punch, can he charge it up while moving or must he be stationary?

Either way it'd only be 300, not 600.

[Derek Thorn]

He can charge it while moving.

[Omni]

Chuck that in the description for the move, please. Post it in this topic and I'll give it the final approval so you can buy it, I'll leave it off your roster for now.

If you take this and copy and paste it to a new topic entitled "Derek Thorn" in the rosters forum, you'll be good to go. Please read this before IC posting - if you haven't already.

Name: Derek Thorn
Spent OM: 3400
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (1000): Physical Strength (1000)
Powers (1800/8000): Master Super Jump (800). Integration (1000).
Moves (600): Quick Blade (300), Strong Blade (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

[Derek Thorn]

Hammer fist, using his power of Integration, Derek turns his fist into tightly compacted steel and charges up a devastating punch. He does this by clutching a coin that is a relic of his old life. The relic is just an old steel coin that has no magical significance, only sentimental value to Derek.The punch is similar to the strong blade, only it takes two seconds to charge, does much more damage. Unlike the blades, this can only be used to end a combo. He can use it while moving, but not while using the other moves to attack.(300)

[Omni]

All good! Thanks.