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Odin - Joining
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Character Name: Odin

Character Source: Norse Mythology

Character History: Odin taken from Norse mythology. As Odin was about to be killed by Fenris during Ragnarok, Omni transported him to the Omniverse. Now a weakened Odin must discover a new purpose to existence without an ever-approaching Ragnarok to shape him.

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies: 1400
Physical Strength - 1000
Buff Proficiency - 400

Starting Powers: 3000
Shapeshifting - 1400
Insight - 1600

Starting Moves: 600
Gungnir - 300 - Physical Strength - Odin's Spear is about 6 feet long. The main shaft is 5' long, made of the wood of Yggdrasil, and covered in runes. The blade is a foot long and flairs out at the sides slightly, giving it a diamond shape. It is made of dwarven steel and appears almost silvery.  It takes as long to summon as it would to draw it from his back. While it is a balanced weapon with no explicit strengths or weaknesses, it is not made for throwing, so serves  only as a melee weapon.
Berserker's Blessing - 300 - Buff Proficiency - By using his knowledge of runes, Odin can increase the ferocity of his allies. Odin Chants for 5 seconds, bolstering his allies and sending them into a frenzy that lasts for 25 seconds. While in this frenzy, allies will fight harder and ignore most of the damage that they sustain from enemies. However, after this effect has worn off, they will instantly feel the effects of any damage that they sustained while in the frenzy.

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#2
Gungnir - Tracks with his base stats? All moves are (mostly) dependent on your stats. Also, when writing moves, we need you to provide a description of the spear. How large it is, what it's made of, what it looks like, etc.

Berserker's Blessing - To actually increase the stats of an ally, you must use a super move in conjunction with the buff proficiency, and even then, you can only increase the stat by the amount of SP that you use. This is to prevent people from buffing an ally's stats significantly for low costs.

If I may make a suggestion, I would say something like;

"Odin Chants for 5 seconds, bolstering his allies and sending them into a frenzy that lasts for 10 - 20 seconds. While in this frenzy, allies will fight harder and ignore most of the damage that they sustain from enemies. However, after this effect has worn off, they will instantly feel the effects of any damage that they sustained while in the frenzy."

that's just a rough suggestion though.
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#3
Gungnir - I was trying to say that the weapon is neither slow and powerful nor fast and weak. I think maybe it saws that better know. Also added the weapon description.

Berserker's Blessing - Your suggestion is thematically appropriate, so I will  go with it.

Thanks for your help! Let me know if there is anything else I need to clarify or adjust.
#4
Gungnir - What does the blade look like? Will you only be using this spear for melee combat, or do you plan on being able to throw it?

Berserker's Blessing - pick a time between 10 and 20 seconds, although, I guess you could make it 30 seconds even. But 30 would have to be the absolute max
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#5
Expanded the description of the blade on Gungnir and added a line about it not being suitable f or throwing. That will  probably change when I get ranged proficiency at some point. I specified that Berserker's Blessing lasts for 25 seconds.

Let me know if I need to do anything else!

Thanks!
#6
Edit: Just for clarification sake, You can't self buff, so your berserker's rage move will only effect your allies. Other than that clarification, you are approved.

Name: Odin
Level: 1
Spent OM: 5000
Proficiencies: (1400); Physical Strength (1000), Buff Proficiency (400)
Powers: (3000/8000), Shapeshifting (1400), Insight (1600)
Moves: (600); Gungnir (300), Berserker's Blessing (300)
Super Moves:  
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
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Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

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