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Rin Takao - Joining
#21
Ah, I might have closed the tab before I pressed submit. :derp:
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#22
I have gotten rid of the bat.
I AM THE IMPENDING DOOM, BEWARE MY POWER!
Quote:
PvP FLAG: GREEN
I won't mind if you attack my character or base with little to no warning!
#23
Quote:He opened his eyes while laying on the ground and all he saw was whiteness, followed by a shadowy figure telling him what this place is!

Everyone starts out in a pitch black area, with Omni telling them where they are. After this, the darkness fades and turns to white and then they are in the nexus.

As for your physical description, I'm going to need you to expand upon it. I know it can be a little hard, but this is a role playing website and It'll help anyone that decides to write with you in the future.

Some of the other Joining applications that are for Original characters will be especially helpful because they will allow you to see how other people have described their characters Smile
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#24
I honestly cant think of anything else to describe him.
I AM THE IMPENDING DOOM, BEWARE MY POWER!
Quote:
PvP FLAG: GREEN
I won't mind if you attack my character or base with little to no warning!
#25
Okay, before we proceed, I have to ask, you've only spent around 2500 of your starting 5000 OM is there anything else that you want? I would suggest physical Strength proficiency because you said your character was a martial artist, and without the physical strength proficiency your punches and kicks aren't going to be very effective.

Also, something I missed in your history, but you have the introduction scene wrong. This is the introduction that every prime goes through
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#26
I have added Physical Strength proficiency and tweaked the "Omni" part of the history a bit.
I AM THE IMPENDING DOOM, BEWARE MY POWER!
Quote:
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I won't mind if you attack my character or base with little to no warning!
#27
Have I done enough or would I need to add more.
I AM THE IMPENDING DOOM, BEWARE MY POWER!
Quote:
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I won't mind if you attack my character or base with little to no warning!
#28
Name: Rin Takao
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3800
Proficiencies: (2000); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (1500); Hive mind (400 OM), Super Jumping - Basic (300 OM), Disassemble (800 OM)
Moves: (300); Magnum Revolver (300),
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 2

Make a new thread in the Roster section and copy and paste the above into the first post. It is also highly recommended that you make more posts within your own roster that details any extra information about your character that you wish to include. Any future purchases can be made Here.

You should also visit This, as it will help you with proceeding after getting your character approved.

Once all that is done, go here to get your account approved for chat box use if Omni hasn’t already done so.

If you need a name change, then you should go Here.

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