Dawnika's Alternative character: Autumn Ellise Rose

[Amber Veritz]

Character name:
Autumn Ellise Rose

Character source:
Human from Earth/Original

Character history:
A human from Earth who has never fought in her life. Autumn, or Rose to her friends, is a musician who can play many various instruments like, but not limited to, the guitar, drums, violin and piano. Not only that but she is an avid gamer. She grew up in a small town full of idiot people that drove her insane. Since it was hard for her to make money with her parents having died when she turned 17, she has been unable to attend college. Short, spunky and full of joy she is ready to take a new journey in life: the Omniverse.

Physical Description:
Age: 21 Height: 5'2" Weight: 102lb Physique: Lean/Small and thin

Stats:
ATK:4
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:3

Starting Proficiencies: Range (1000), Area Attack (600), Homing (600), Debuff (1000)

Starting Powers: Master Acrobat (400)

Starting Moves:

The Guitar (600) - requires ranged, Area attack, homing and debuff(?)

Autumn summons her guitar to use as her primary weapon. The soundwaves emitted from the instrument can send enemies flying back to give herself space and possiblly slam them into a wall forcefully. To acquire such effect, Autumn must play a series of chords that take about 3 seconds to play. The sound wave is projected in a semi-circle in front of Autumn, where it is more powerful if used when the target directly ahead of her, and less effective if the enemy happens to be beside her. It can also be used by pointing the head stock at an enemy and projecting elemental attacks(such as flames and lightning) with her strums. Miraculously, the guitar doesn't need an amplifier to function with electric sound like in the human world. The range of the guitars sound waves and attacks are both 150 feet, and the sound waves travel, of course, at the speed of sound. However, the sound wave can only send an enemy back 10-30feet depending on the characters weight. Summons within a second.

The High C (300) - requires ranged, Area attack, homing and debuff.

Autumn has finally gained the ability to hit a high C! She summons a microphone to amplify her voice. This, unfortunately for her opponent, creates a noise strong enough to shatter glass. The effect cause the enemy to go deaf for a few seconds, depending on their resilience. Like her guitar, the microphone requires no speaker to amplify the sound. This attack can reach up to 75 feet in diameter. The microphone takes only a second to summon but replaces the guitar. Autumn must hold still while preforming her high C, and it takes 2 seconds for her voice to reach a deafening effect.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Roger Smith]

For The Guitar: Sending enemies flying with the soundwaves would be fine if there was some degree of charge for it or preparation. As it is, it sounds pretty much instant, and the level of force required to send someone flying and slam them into a wall is not insignificant, making the technique seem fairly powerful, on top of that, and it doesn't seem like it would be very tiring, either. S'not a good combination. You're fine to be able to blast people with soundwaves, but they won't be too powerful on their own. Adding in a charge or preparation time, or making it much more fatiguing to use would add in some of the power you seem to be going for. The elemental attacks should be fine, also with the listed changes for the soundwaves. One more good thing to mention, since you list Area Attack as a requirement, is what the range of the attack is -- both how far it goes, and how much area it covers. How fast the actual attacks are once you DO use them would also be good to mention.

For The High C: This seems fine for the most part. Add in some mention of how long it takes to prepare or how long it takes for the deafening sound levels to be reached and take effect. How far away it effects, and what the overall area is will also be needed to know.

And for both techniques, how long it actually takes to summon the guitar and microphone. Shouldn't need more than a second or two for either one, I'd say.

[Amber Veritz]

All additions edited are Italicized.

[Roger Smith]

Very good. I see no further glaring issues at present. I'll get your roster and all that up shortly.

[Amber Veritz]

Thanks Adam, you're doing great as a Staff member Mr. Blarghman.

[Roger Smith]

Name: Autumn Ellise Rose
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4500
Proficiencies: (3200); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600), Homing Proficiency (600), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Powers: (400); Master Acrobat (400)
Moves: (900); The Guitar (600), The High C (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
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Items:
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Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 1
SPD: 2
TEC: 3


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