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Ellie Cliche
#1
Character name: Kimiko

Character source: Tokyo Ghoul derived OC

Character history:
Not knowing exactly who her parents are and being a Ghoul, she was forced to live and thrive on her own as a young child. Going into hiding at all times and picking off any remains of possible suicide victims.

Soon after she reached her teen years, she seems to be discovered and reached out to by a fellow ghoul which introduces her to the delicious world of coffee. This would later on let her achieve a job at Anteiku after she turned sixteen. When in public situations, she is most often seen with a cup of coffee in one hand and possibly a comic book in the other.

Physical Description: (originals only)
She has a thin, tall build for her age. She stands around 5'9 without shoes. Her hair is around shoulder-blade length and is colored like a starting to rot rose with a side swept fringe for bangs that mostly covers the right side of her face. Her skin is a pale olive color with natural pinks joints and cheeks. Finally her eyes are a deep blue-gray like a thin cloudy night sky.

Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 4
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies: 2600
Physical Strength - 1000
Ranged Proficiency - 1000
Remote Control - 600

Starting Powers: 
Basic Regeneration - 1300

Starting Moves:
Rinkaku Kagune (600)
Prerequisits: Physical, Ranged, Remote Control
Forming from Kimiko's lower back are two tentacles. It takes five seconds to fully form these appendages. They appear to be narrow near the body, but grow thicker till the tip, which forms into a semi-solid mass resembling a very rudimentary hand.

These tentacles require time to form. They first form two large masses on either side of her spine at the lower arch of her back, if uninterrupted, the thin layer of mass will bust and fully formed hands will sprout from her back. The hands themselves could wrap around a pumped basketball and the arm length of around five to thirty feet.

However, if the process of forming these large hands is interrupted and the masses are prematurely ruptured, the ground is painted with a red, blood-like substance. In order to fully form the tentacle again, whatever is left inside the mass must come in contact with the splattered puddle and reform into a soft solid state, thus making the formation more time consuming. 
           
  1. Maneuver ability (Fodder)
    The ability to push herself off the ground and walk with much longer stride, however this will allow more area to be shown and easier to hit. She is also able to climb up steep areas that are normally difficult otherwise.
  2. Slam attack (300)
    This allows for a melee based attack, the large hands will attempt to punch and lunge at the foe in attempts to cause a very forceful, blunt attack. (HULK SMASH!!)
  3. Grappling (300)
    Finally this ability is the ability to grab her foe and squeeze at crushing points to a normal human. For a human, the bones would crack and several organs would possibly rupture with this force.On the more controlled and less inhumane note, if she is too badly injured, she will attempt to grab her target and throw them as far as possible (around 50 feet) just so she can make an escape so she may have time to feed and regenerate.
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#2
Welcome!

For your history, you'll need to include exactly when in her life she was taken by Omni. Something like "one day after work she mysteriously passes out and awakens in a dark void with a smiling face staring at her". It's of course up to you what the events preceding are since you're playing an OC, but yeah.

As for your move, you'll really only need to pay 300 OM if you're just going to be hitting people and grabbing them and such with the tentacles. Stuff like the option to produce a blade at the end or something would incur extra cost, but currently this is fine at 300.
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#3
Not knowing exactly who her parents are and being a Ghoul, she was forced to live and thrive on her own as a young child. Going into hiding at all times and picking off any remains of possible suicide victims.

Soon after she reached her teen years, she seems to be discovered and reached out to by a fellow ghoul which introduces her to the delicious world of coffee. This would later on let her achieve a job at Anteiku after she turned sixteen. When in public situations, she is most often seen with a cup of coffee in one hand and possibly a comic book in the other.

However, not long after she had entered the job, she was found out while she was eating down the back of an alleyway. There was no way to cover up what she was so naturally the pedestrian ran to the CCG to report Kimiko's whereabouts. As they found her, she put on chase and kept running away, knew by fighting the CCG she would just cause more trouble and hurt innocent people by accident. As she ran, she slipped and fell down a long drop, what she thought her final thoughts would be would soon to her just being knocked unconscious from the impact and waking up again to a dark void around her, and a single smiling face.
#4
As Mark said, your move looks fine at 300. Punching and grappling is a feature of Physical Strength, we can just consider this move a literal extension of that by giving her giant arms. I will say that for the first application, it shouldn't allow her to actually exceed her SPD stat (ie, with 2 SPD, you're going to be moving as fast as a trained runner, regardless of moves) - you could give it as the reason for her being able to move as fast as she does, though, if you want.

Anyway, here's your roster. Please copy and paste the below sheet into a new topic entiteled 'Kimiko' in the rosters forum. Please also make sure to read all of this before you do any IC posting, it protects you from bad stuff. Other than that, welcome to the Omniverse and have fun!

(p.s. I noticed you registered as Ellie Cliche, if you want to have an exclusively OOC account feel free to register another as that name, some people do it to have a 'master' account under which all their IC accounts get organised, or whatever)

Name: Kimiko
Spent OM: 4200
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (2600); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000), Remote Control (600)
Powers (1300/8000); Basic Regeneration (1300)
Moves (300); Rinkaku Kagune (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 4
SPD: 2
TEC: 2
Curious about me and the characters I play? See the 'Staff' page! See also the rosters for my characters Samus Aran or Enel if you'd like to see examples of well-formatted rosters. Hope you enjoy the Omniverse!


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