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Character Switch - Veritas Night
#1
As this is a switch from Sombra to Veritas Night, yet another OC of mine I have done the mathematical calculations. I would have 10,000 OM to spend instead of the 5000 normally associated with a character. If this is a few days early, I apologize. I wished to get it up as soon as I could close to time so I didn't end up forgetting the idea. 

Character name:  Veritas Night

Character source:   Power Rangers - OC 

Character history:

Veritas Night was one of the students at the Wind Ninja Academy when Lothar was still a threat. Blamed about what Lothar had done Veritas was kicked out of the academy and given the boot by some of the rangers there. From there he started to travel the world, and he learned. Going to the school of Pai Zhua he learned about the animal spirits they could summon and learned how to manifest each one of them as armor on his body. Traveling to the world of Aquitar it was there he learned about their telepathically controlled Zords and studied the technology so he could build his own. Upon returning to Earth he even spent some time in the Shiba House attempting to learn the power of the Samurai Rangers for himself. Yet none of those skills made him any happier than he was. They made him more miserable because he couldn't succeed at them. 

It wasn't until he turned twenty one that he learned of a greater power that could allow him to succeed where he wanted. The power of the Heylin Dragon Seal. Seeking out the power on Earth he eventually found it in the ruins of an old temple. The seal when touched by him became a cellphone capable of summoning an enchanted suit of Heylin Armor onto his body for his own personal use. Still, it wasn't enough because even with that power he knew he could be defeated far too easily by anyone with half a mind to do so. Seeking out the power of many enchanted items, and also augmenting his body with state of the art bionic technology and cybernetics he knew it still wasn't enough for him. 

What was missing was the power of a ranger. So Veritas spent time toiling and working to give himself the powers of an actual ranger at his disposal. Eventually he nearly succeeded, but his death in the process is what brought him to the Omniverse. 


Physical Description: 

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Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD:2
TEC:4

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength Proficiency  - 1000
Ranged Proficiency - 1000 OM 
Ranged Materialize Proficiency  - 600 
Remote Control Proficiency - 600
Area Attack Proficiency  - 600
Area Defense Proficiency - 400 
Debuff Proficiency - 1000

Starting Powers:
Flight - 1800 OM 

Starting Moves:  

Dark Magic Blast Ball: (300,Area Attack, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff, Remote Control.) A purplish crimson orb the size of a fully inflated beach ball that has the explosive power of a Landmine. As he lacks the ability of Telekinesis this must simply be thrown by him at his opponent. It travels at the speed of 15 MPH. Its damage it does would be rather high when it hits an opponent as it explodes and fills the area with flame. The flames also will set an opponent on fire for about 5 seconds. Takes Veritas seven seconds to charge up. This cannot be done while he is moving unfortunately because it takes both of his hands and his full concentration. 

 





I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.  - Yes. 

Where did you find us?   I'm a member and I'm switching from Sombra to this char. 

Total Spent OM:  7400
#2
Just a note before another staffer looks your app over for you:
You will have just over 10.000 OM to spend post-switch, so that calculation is correct. However there are a few other errors that you'd need to take care of:

Your new character's Spent OM would go over the 10.000 mark, unfortunately:
-5200 for Profs (Debuff costs 1.000, not 10.000 by the way Tongue)
-1800 for Powers
-1200 for moves
= 8200

Your stats also add up to 12, but you don't have enough OM to purchase 2x Stat-Ups (they cost 3.000).
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#3
Edits done.
#4
You're missing 2 stats

Dark Magic Blast Ball - Can he move around and attack while charging this?

Scorpion Sabre - "This sword can deliver a poison on contact that lasts for 7 seconds that locks a single over 300 OM move so long as the individual has more moves than that at their disposal" No, Too gamey. Also, half a foot in length is 15cm are you referring to the entire weapon or just the blade? Does he have to summon it or does he keep it on him at all times?

Dark Mage Staff - "prevent the use of weapons that cost less than 600 OM if the person has more moves than one" Again, no. If it were just "This causes muscle spasms that make it harder for the person to move around" it'd be fine. As for the energy blast, How fast does it travel? what does it look like? Can he move around and do other things while charging the blast? How draining is it? does he have to summon the staff or does he keep it on him at all times?

Dark Bolt - "When this hits an opponent any moves that they have excluding Supermoves that are above 900 OM or more are blocked off for 21 seconds." Again, no. How fast does it travel? What does it look like (in terms of colour). Can he do anything else while charging the move?
#5
Is that better Daniel, or do you need further edits on it?
#6
Name: Veritas Night
Spent OM: 7300
Proficiencies (5200); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000) Ranged Materialize (600), Remote Control (600), Area Attack (600), Area Defense (400), Debuff (1000)
Powers (1800/8000); Flight (1800)
Moves (300); Dark Magic Blast Ball (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts: None
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4


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