Officially Switching Doom

[Beta Ray Bill]

Character Name: Hellboy AKA ( Anung Un Rama translated to "and upon his brow is set a crown of flame")  

Character Source: Dark Horse comics

Character history: Hellboy was born in 1617 by his mother Sarah Hughes, which was a witch at the time period. Hellboy's father was a demon known as  Azzael. On Sarah Huges death bed she tried to repent for her sins, Angered Azzael took her to Hell and burned her taking Hellboyand chopping his right hand off and replacing it with the Right Hand of Doom the key to freeing the Ogdru Jahad known as the Seven gods of destruction. eventually, Hellboy was summoned to Earth during the end of World War 2 by Grigori Rasputin on Tarmagant Island, off the coast of Scottland for the Nazi project Ragna Rok. Hellboy appears at the ruins of the Bromwich Church where the Allies were held up in the response of the Nazis. After finding that Hellboy was of no malevolence  Professor Trevor Bruttenholm takes him as his son transporting him to New Mexico where he would be raised. Hellboy joined the organization his adopted father was part of called the B.P.R.D  where he would go on numerous times to save the world from the occult and evil. During the events of the story the storm and the fury, Hellboy goes one on one with a witch by the name of Nimue. When defeating the Witch she rips Hellboy's heart there Omni takes him    

Any further information on Hellboy will be here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hellboy

Physical appearance  


Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF:3
SPD:2
TEC:2

Starting Proficiencies:

Physical Strenght-1000 OM

Ranged-1000 OM 

Starting Powers: Super Jumping Basic-300 OM, Advanced Regeneration-1300 OM Burst Movement-800 OM

Moves: 

Right Hand of Doom-300 OM: The Right Hand of Doom is literally Hellboy's right hand, It's a large stone hand and forearm it approximately 4x's larger then an average human hand. His hand is made of a nearly indestructible stone and is said to be the key to the end of days. its takes a second for Hellboy to use his hand. The Right Hand of Doom is a melee based weapon that does medium damage. Extended use can fatigue Hellboy. The Right Hand of Doom can also be used to smash open doors or objects. 

The Good Samaritan-300 OM: The Good Samaritan is an over sized revolver with a uniquely large caliber and can carry four rounds. The gun has unearthly resistance to damage. It takes Hellboy 3 seconds to pull out the weapon from his chest holster under his large coat. The revolver is good for short to medium range. Due to Hellboy's large right arm, he can not reload the weapon during a fight. Hellboy uses the revolver with his left hand. The Good Samaritan causes a large amount of damage and takes a second to pull back the hammer. The Good Samaritan fires one round per second and only carries 4 large bullets per clip.          

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Where did you find us I was already here Koal introduced me to the site when I was Nihilus.

[Moon Knight]

Sorry about this but I had some time to think and I have an idea for a character that I want to try out. I just need a day or two to write out all the character history and information.

[Beta Ray Bill]

Alright, after taking about a week I have this character ready. 

Character Name: Kolvo Galvus

Character Source: Elder Scrolls OC

Character History: A Dark Elf Kolvo was born in the city Ald’rhun during the 244th year of the Third Era, his life was a rough start. His mother, Almay Galvus , died due to complications with birth and his father Ralael Galvus, a captain in the Redoran guard was always strict and kept a militant discipline around Kolvo. Shorty, around the time Kolvo was seven his father was slain in battle trying to handle a dispute with the competing Great House of Morrowind, Hlaalu. Being orphaned at such a young age Ald’rhun’s Redoran council officials decided that the best choice for Kolvo was to be brought and raised by the Tribunal Temple. 

Being raised by the Temple, they gave him a proper education teaching him how to read, write, recognize and understand forms a of math, most history of Morrowind and the Empire ruling over the country, and some concepts in the schools of magic. Getting older the temple decided to indoctrinated him officially into the Great House Indoril and from there taken to the city of Mournhold to be trained into the order of soldiers known as The Ordinators. 

Becoming an Ordinator took Kolvo several long and laborious years. Many countless days were spent training him to be disciplined and to master the use of weapons such as short and long blades and spears, and as well trained in the use of a tower shield. By the wisdom of the Ordinators he was taught the four orders of the Ordinators in which all to serve the Tribunal Temple and house Indoril, the Order of Watch, th Order of War, the Order of the Inquisition, and the Order of Doctrine. Being brought in to the sub-group the Order of the Watch, Kolvo was trained in the laws of both Tribunal Temple and the laws given to everyone by the Empire to become a guardsmen Tribunal’s temples. Completing his studies Kolvo was moved to the great city of Vivec. There he performed his duties to the letter becoming respected by his fellow peers and being regarded as someone honorable in combat. Eventually Kolvo married a fellow Dunmer by the name of Solvaliah and soon after had a son whom they named Toriran. 

 In the year 344 the Emperor Uriel Septim VII was assassinated by the cult of Mythic Dawn. The Emperor’s death left the Empire in disarray and due to the dragon fires no longer being lit, the separation of realms ceased to exist allowing  Oblivion gates to open all across the continent of Tamriel. With Oblivion gates opening all across the continent hordes, of demonic and cruel creatures known as Daedra poured out waging war upon all of Tamriel in an attempt to conquer  in the name of their lord Mehrunes Dagon. In an attempt take keep the city of Vivec from being overrun Kolvo with and several other Ordinators and House guards set out into Vivec’s own Oblivion gate. Upon entering hellish landscape of the Badlands Kolvo and the others valiantly fought the Dremora that prepared to seage the city. They fought hard but were ultimately defeated from the sheer numbers of lesser Daedra. From there Omni took Kolvo to the Omniverse.           


Physical Description:

                  

(Big thanks to Centurion for this drawing.)

                                                               

Due to being a Dunmer or what the other races call Dark Elves Kolvo’s skin color is dark grey with an almost purple shade. With a slightly angular face, pointy elven ears, a trimmed almost black beard with white shoulder length that is braided in strands, and sharp eyebrows. His eyes are blood red with the exception of his pupils and a long scar goes down across his right eye stopping at his cheek. He has a lean build standing at around 5'9", he wears the armor and mask of the Ordinators. The armor upon his chest, shoulders, boots, gauntlets, and mask are golden in design and heavily polished. The shoulder pieces have a somewhat outwards wave to them. His greaves are almost skirt like appearance with a purple coloring and have bits of gold bands circling its mid and bottom half. Under Kolvo’s greaves he wears a pair fine pants that have a purple tint to them as well. His boots come up covering the mid portion of his ankles and are pointed at the ends of his toes. His mask is completely covered with a golden coloring and covers all of his face and the back of his neck. The mask’s shape is supposed to resemble the face of the Dunmer saint and hero Nerevar and it has open eye slits followed by a golden metallic-like plume at the top of the head.           

Stats- 
ATK: 3 
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

Proficiencies: Physical Proficiency 1000 OM, Ranged Proficiency 1000 OM 

Powers: Burst moment 800 OM

Moves- 

Ebony Spear 600 OM : 
A spear that reaches out six feet and is made purely of ebony metal. The spear is black with intricate carvings of Daedric letters etched into the upper shaft close to the blade. In use the spear does moderate but highly efficient damage to its targets. Weighing at nearly twenty eight pounds a trained soldier two seconds to pull back and then  thrust at their enemies. Using the spear like a bladed quarterstaff would take either or a trained or untrained soldier four seconds to perform its various slashes. If need be without uninterrupted focus the spear can be thrown up to ninety eight feet.     

Indoril Shield 300 OM: A shield only given to those who are a part of the Tribunal Temples Ordinators. The Indoril shield is roughly a foot in width and three feet by length. The shield is colored gold-bronze with a the triangle covering the base of the shield followed by the Tribunal symbol of a hand in the center of the triangle. Although it can be beaten down the shield is highly effective at blocking most attacks such as most forms melee attacks and basic forms of elemental magic. The shield normally takes an Ordinator a second to left up to their guard and block incoming attacks.    

Steel Short sword 300 OM: Made purely of steel the blade reaches up twenty four inches. The blade’s hilt has a swirl design that loops to the hilt guard and has a circular pommel with a ball like shape in its center. Used for quick slashes and stabs the blade takes a second to be pulled out of it sheath and a second as well to be used in an attack. The short sword is highly efficient when used by someone trained to use it in dealing quick light damage.

[Dane Regan]

Firstly, roughly how tall is he? You can finalise it later, I'd just like a rough height.

Now, for your moves:

Ebony Spear 600 OM : 
A spear that reaches out six feet and is made purely of ebony metal. The spear is black with intricate carvings of Daedric letters etched into the upper shaft close to the blade. In use the spear does moderate but highly efficient damage to its targets. Weighing at nearly twenty eight pounds it would only take a trained soldier two seconds to pull back and then  thrust at their enemies. Using the spear like a bladed quarterstaff would take either or a trained or untrained soldier four seconds to perform its various slashes. If need be without uninterrupted focus the spear can be thrown up to ninety eight feet.     

Indoril Shield 300 OM: A shield only given to those who are a part of the Tribunal Temples Ordinators. The Indoril shield is roughly a foot in width and three feet by length. The shield is colored gold-bronze with a the triangle covering the base of the shield followed by the Tribunal symbol of a hand in the center of the triangle. Although it can be beaten down the shield is highly effective at blocking most attacks such as most forms melee attacks and basic forms of elemental magic. The shield normally takes an Ordinator a second to left up to their guard and block incoming attacks.    

Steel Short sword 300 OM: Made purely of steel the blade reaches up twenty four inches. The blade’s hilt has a swirl design that loops to the hilt guard and has a circular pommel with a ball like shape in its center. Used for quick slashes and stabs the blade takes a second to be pulled out of it sheath and a second as well to be used in an attack. The short sword is highly efficient when used by someone trained to use it in dealing quick light damage.

I've bolded a few sections here. Since these are all physical objects, you don't need to add in times. Someone can swing a sword as fast as they can swing a sword. Also, I'm fairly sure someone could swing a spear much faster than once every 4 seconds, even if it's big. What happens if you get a boost to SPD later? That would let you swing weapons faster and block faster. It's better to just describe it as being "slow and heavy" or "light and quick" or "as heavy as a normal steel sword", etc.. They're actual objects, so people will know what you mean.

[Beta Ray Bill]

Edited

Ebony Spear 600 OM : 
A spear that reaches out six feet and is made purely of ebony metal. The spear is black with intricate carvings of Daedric letters etched into the upper shaft close to the blade. In use the spear does moderate but highly efficient damage to its targets. Weighing at nearly twenty eight pounds it would only take a trained soldier could quickly  pull back and thrust at their enemies. Using the spear like a bladed quarterstaff would take either or a trained or untrained soldier perform its various slashes but it's speed is a bit slower then just normally thrusting at any enemies. If need be without uninterrupted focus the spear can be thrown up to ninety eight feet.     

Indoril Shield 300 OM: A shield only given to those who are a part of the Tribunal Temples Ordinators. The Indoril shield is roughly a foot in width and three feet by length. The shield is colored gold-bronze with a the triangle covering the base of the shield followed by the Tribunal symbol of a hand in the center of the triangle. Although it can be beaten down the shield is highly effective at blocking most attacks such as most forms melee attacks and basic forms of elemental magic. Normally an Ordinator can quickly left up the shield to guard and block incoming attacks.    

Steel Short sword 300 OM: Made purely of steel the blade reaches up twenty four inches. The blade’s hilt has a swirl design that loops to the hilt guard and has a circular pommel with a ball like shape in its center. Used for quick slashes and stabs the blade can quickly be pulled out of it's sheath and be used. The short sword is highly efficient when used by someone trained to use it in dealing quick light damage.

[Dane Regan]

@Dr. Doom: Your moves are good to go. (but you might wanna reread the spear one a bit since there's some words left in from edits that don't make sense: "at nearly twenty eight pounds it would only take a trained soldier could quickly pull back and thrust at their enemies.")

For the record, not that you asked, allowing you to bash someone with your shield won't cost an extra 300 OM (I asked Omni about this a while back during my join app). So you could totally add in a bit to your shield move saying Kolvo can bash people with it (if you plan to do that) to make obvious to anyone fighting him. Just a suggestion.

Outside of that, your app is sorted. I can't fix your OM or name or properly approve you though.

[Beta Ray Bill]

@Dr. Doom: Your moves are good to go. (but you might wanna reread the spear one a bit since there's some words left in from edits that don't make sense: "at nearly twenty eight pounds it would only take a trained soldier could quickly  pull back and thrust at their enemies.")

For the record, not that you asked, allowing you to bash someone with your shield won't cost an extra 300 OM (I asked Omni about this a while back during my join app). So you could totally add in a bit to your shield move saying Kolvo can bash people with it (if you plan to do that) to make obvious to anyone fighting him. Just a suggestion.

Outside of that, your app is sorted. I can't fix your OM or name or properly approve you though.

Yeah, I don't think I'm going to give him the ability to hit with the shield, also by the time you see this those words should be removed.

[Dane Regan]

Alright. You're all sorted. A higherup will sort out your OM in a bit, as well as your name.

Your roster is below, which you can go ahead and post. I moved your old roster to the archives. Don't forget to link your new roster on your postbit once you make it!

Name: Kolvo Galvus
Spent OM: 4000
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers (800/8000): Burst Movement (800)
Moves (1200): Ebony Spear (600), Indoril Shield (300), Steel Short Sword (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

[Trixie]

Good to go!