Stuart Gillman-Street

[Stuart Gillman-Street]

Character name:
Stuart Gillman-Street

Character source:
The Fegensulans (Original)

Character history:
Born to a housewife and scientist in Aweriton, Stu lived his life as a middle-of-the-middle-classman in the country of Fegensula, attending Cicardi University where he met his girlfriend, Christine, and moved in with her at 27 Chapman Road where his friends soon move in as well. In a supernatural twist, Stu uncovers the existence of vampires when he spots the since-befriended Bradd [sic] Sage, and even learns what happens when you die after his life is spared by an ex-Angel of Death, Amadeus Bidus. Stu, while not particularly physically strong before he arrived in the Omniverse, more than makes up for it by being rather intelligent, though only used his intellect when necessary, but what it this that prompted Omni to send him, in 2021, to the Omniverse?
Physical Description:
Stu, aged 26, is physically average, being of a small-to-medium build, being 5’11” and weighing in at 10st 9lb. A caucasian, Stu is always clean-shaven and his spiked blue hair (think bit.ly/1MIggOQ, only straighter). (originals only)

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies:
Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
Burst Movement (800 OM)

Starting Moves:
Red Revolver (300 OM)
A steady revolver with a rate of fire of about one bullet per second. It is powerful but difficult to aim at long distances, and has a range of around 50-75 yards for any accuracy. It also takes around 3-5 seconds to swap its six-bullet magazine.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Yu Kanda]

Hey ! Welcome to the Omniverse.

I am not a staff member but i can already give you a couple of pointers. First of all you have 10 stat points to distribute; not sure if you only spend 3 on purpose or not.

Second, your starting move "Red Revolver" has no discription. Please discribe what it does, what effects it has, what the range is in as much detail as possible. Also you will have to price this move. The cost will depend on your discription of it.

Might i suggest taking another look at the rules ? If you have any more questions feel free to ask.

Yu

[Mickey Mouse]

Yu Kanda is correct, you must distribute all ten stat points.

Red Revolver: The rate of fire is fine, but can you give a more exact range for it? Like, I'd like to know what distance it becomes difficult for him to aim at, rather than just "long distances." How many bullets does it hold before you have to reload? How long does it take to reload?

History: your history looks fine, but can you specify the point at which he was abducted into the Omniverse?

Lookin' good so far, buddy! Sorry for the wait. If you have any questions post in this thread and I'll get 'em! Thanks!

[Stuart Gillman-Street]

Thanks- I took your advice as well as Yu's

[Mickey Mouse]

Everything checks out! Good job, man.

Go ahead and copy the following:

Name: Stuart Gillman-Street
Level: 1
Spent OM: 2100
Proficiencies: (1000); Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers: (800); Burst Movement (800)
Moves: (300); Red Revolver (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Then make a new thread in the Roster forum and paste the form into the first post. I highly encourage you to make additional posts in that thread that provide further details about your character. Before you do anything else, make sure to read this thread as it will give you helpful tips as to how to proceed.

Once you've done all that, then post here to have your account activated. For any future purchases, use this thread.

Welcome to the Omniverse, and have lots of fun, buddy!

[Stuart Gillman-Street]

Thanks, man