Five Faces of Retane....

[Retane]

We'll im on a journey to get 4k OM

Afterwards I'm writing a five round Gauntlet fight.

Retane vs Retane

This means I have to write Retane, and Retane

It's been a point I wanted to do, and is actually happeneing faster then I thought.

Means Omni Retane will 5 five versions of Chubbs Retane

I'm doing this mostly to test myself but, some that I have explained it to, have been excited.

The Final Fight and everything up to it, will be judged by Alex(Cuz he never said no and he knows more about Retane in this era then anyone and hardly any about the old one)


I will have Fusion AKA the 4k OM and a few other tricks to try, but some fights will be 1v1, the others will be mutiple people in it.

Thoughts?

Nothing is set in Stone, and only a few know exactly what I'm planning, though I wing alot of it lol.

Again thoughts?

PS, Yes IM going to do nearly 30k words worth of fighting.

[Yu Kanda]

A very ambitious project ! I like this idea allot....the plot aeem very interresting and i think it would be a challenge for you as a writer. You asked for ideas and you probably thought about these already yourself but i thought i'd pitch in.

1) does every retane have their own personality or exact copy ? Would be nice if each of them have a little thing that they can call their own.

2) have the fight take place in different locations to keep things interesting.

3) battle royal maybe?

Like i said you probably thought of these already .

Looking forward reading about it !

[Retane]

1.Each Retane will be from a diffferent point in Retane's life;
Retane- The Exiled
Tag Team: Retane-The SNS/ Horsemen
Retane-The God of Death
Tag Team: Special. I even have someone special coming to help with this one.
Retane- The Seasoned Ultimate Namek

Something like that.

2. RIght now the Ninja are going to help me make a small pocket verse or some shit. Their reasons is because they also will be intrigued to learn even more about the Namekian

3.No. THat would be way to confusing. For two of the fights, Retane will be teaming up with some fellow Horsemen.

Old vs the New...

[Retane]

So, I did some thinking and I have to reach Level 6 to makehtis work. Lol So that it essentailly 6k OM

[Yu Kanda]

Time for a "filler" arc ?:p

[Retane]

You don't know me really do you?

[Retane]

Nothing I do is "filler". Everything I do can and will have an effect on Retane.I've got like 700 OM coming to me already, plus maybe some more, plus I write 600-2k posts, sometimes more. By the time I am done with our current Horsemen thread that will be 10k words minimum from just me alone. thats 1k OM Min. plus an addidtional 500 OM min. from Bonus.

So yeah.... that halfway or nearly half way there>_>

[Yu Kanda]

Iy actually as ment as a joke becausr no one likes filler arcs. I've seen your ppsts they are good and usually very long

[Retane]

Hmmm FIller arcs... are fun if you make them cannon