The Green Gunsmith vs A Familiar, yet Strangely Alien Foe {IC Fight}

[Corporal Light]

Here it is! The fight we've all been waiting for! Ballad v Renji begins here and now!

Here is the template we are using.

Word Limit: 1200
Posts Per Player: 1 per round
Random Elements: on
Damage Meter: on
Round Length: 1 week


The turn order is as follows:

Ballad -> Renji

Renji wants to start with the transformation and his pill thing eaten. Here are his current stats:

ATK; 6
DEF; 1
SPD; 3
TEC; 2

Here are Ballad's stats as of right now:

ATK; 4
DEF; 3
SPD; 1
TEC; 5

I hope to have a fight post out by tonight or tommorrow night! Let the best fighter win!

[Corporal Light]

Posted the First Post of Round 1! It is now Renji's turn!

[Corporal Light]

Posted the Second Round!

Using the Gun Bomb Tier 2 Super Attack on Renji, costing me 2 SP, leaving me with 4 SP left to use!

(Also, if you're wondering why this is late, I got an extension due to illness. Sorry for the wait )

It is now Renji's turn once more!

[Mark]

I see you two are done. I'll get a judgement up as soon as I can.

[Mark]

Alrighty guys, sorry about the wait. Results are in the spoiler below. The grading system I used is based on Sinestro's score sheet, so please give that a look over before the numbers catch you off-guard. In short, I consider 0 to be the lowest  (not listed on Thaal's sheet, but that's a personal preference for me) and 5 to be the best possible. 2 is site average.

[spoiler]
Round I
Ballad
Description and Clarity: 2.25
Voice: 2.25
Characterization: 2.5
Story: 2
Technical: 2.5
Total: 11.5

Renji
Description and Clarity: 3.25
Voice: 3
Characterization: 3.25
Story: 3
Technical: 2.25
Total: 14.75

Round II
Ballad
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 2.5
Characterization: 3
Story: 3
Technical: 2.5
Total: 14.0 + 2 (Super Move) = 16

Renji
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 3
Characterization: 3.5
Story: 3
Technical: 2.5
Total: 15.0 + 1 (Super Move) = 16

SP/Artefacts Used
Ballad: 2 SP (Round II)
Renji: 1 SP (Round II)

Other
Renji's Moogle Pill contributed to Ballad taking slightly more damage than he'd have taken otherwise (not the same weight as SP usage, but it was considered in calculations).

HP Totals
Ballad: 6/20
Renji: 8/20

Ballad Score Total: 27.5
Renji Score Total: 30.75

The winner is: Renji. You may kill, banish, or incapacitate your foe in preparation for the next fight.

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[Kuzuru]

Aight, I'll kill him and collect the bounty. Though before I do that I think Koal wanted to talk with Ballad. So I'll make the conclusion post for the fight and then they can hash it out using the same thread. Once everyone is satisfied I'll kill him and we'll be all set.