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Saint Walker, Leader of the Blue Lanterns
#1
Character name: Saint Walker

Character source: DC Comics

Character history: 
Bro'Dee Walker was a strong, faithful believer in his planet's version of an all-powerful deity. He had a father as well as a wife and children. His life on Astonia succumbed to turmoil due to the sun dying and the planet along with it. He had a plan to find God's "Messiah" at the top of Mount Helious. Saint Walker left with his family to reach the top of Mount Helious. It was a hard and scorching trip and while on the journey each member of his family perished due to various causes. After nine days of pain and dehydration, Saint Walker finally reached the top to find no one there - only a slab of stone. He screamed at God, close to losing all hope. At that moment, a storm broke out and the water sliding off the monolith gave off his reflection. Realizing this meant he was to be the one to save his people, Walker descended from Mount Helious and started preaching to the Astonians, eventually calming them and leading them with his hope for a future for Astonia. After he made it, the sun spontaneously grew younger and a Blue Power Ring found him. It chose Saint Walker as the first of the Blue Lantern Corps member, given his ability to instil great hope in others. 

After this life changing moment, Walker vowed to bring hope to all those that needed it most. He soon led the Blue Lanterns in assisting against the Black Lanterns during the Blackest Night incident. Soon after, Walker found himself in a mysterious land. His ring no longer had the same powers as it did before, and a man like creature there explained it. He was told he must collect a substance known as Omnilium to gain these back. So, invigored with his hope, Walker set out, to explore this unfamiliar land.

Stats:
Atk1
DEF:2
SPD:2
TEC:5

Starting Proficiencies:
Buffing, Ranged Attacking

Starting Powers:
Master acrobat, Healing

Starting Moves:
(300 Omnilium, Ranged Proficiency required) Feel the power of Hope!: Through the power of his ring, Saint Walker can shoot a basic blue beam of energy at his opponents, shaped like a kunai, moving as fast as a bullet. It is stronger than a basic blast, like one that would be acquired without a move, but weaker than other moves of the same omnium price that do not have the extra speed. This move takes only about 2 seconds to charge, due to it's weaker power. This blast will only work in the range of about 50 metres before slowing down and falling.
(300 Omnilium, Buff Proficiency required) Invigored by Hope!: Walker shines his ring in the air, making all his allies that see it invigored with hope (Those who see it means all those in the same thread.) This makes them able to have hope that they will be ok, thus making them shrug off any wounds that they have for about 30 seconds. This move however takes a lengthy 25 seconds to charge, so it is mostly used when in a safe location. Only 3 people can be under this affect at once however, as this technique must draw upon the rings strongest storage of hope.

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Where did you find us?
Browsing rp sites
#2
Hello there, and welcome to the Omniverse. Let's have us a look-see here and get you on your way to the approval process.


Right, so as things stand, your current OM expenditure is more than the 5000 you get to start with. Since such things are easy to miss (I math wrong all the time), let's have a breakdown of spending right quick:
-- Ranged Proficiency (1000)
-- Buff Proficiency (400)
-- Master Acrobat (400)
-- Healing (2500)
-- Moves, as they stand (600)
-- 11th stat point (1000)
All total: 5900

Should be an easy enough thing to fix. Take off an extra stat point somewhere, or cut back on something like Healing -- it's an expensive power.


That aside, let's move on to your Moves here.

Invigored with Hope!: Generally speaking, regular moves can't actually boost stats of other characters -- especially not multiple ones -- without some pretty serious downsides. You could provide a minor boost to allies, but it wouldn't actually boost numerical stat values. More specifics necessary, regardless, along the following lines:
-- How close is 'nearby' in this instance? A few feet, few meters?
-- How long does it take to prep the move and activate it?
-- How long does it last once activated, since one post could be only a few seconds or several minutes with the way time can work in combat situations?
-- How many allies can be under this effect at once? Does said effect grow stronger/weaker with less/more under its effect?

Feel the power of Hope!: Fairly basic move, all in all. Just a few clarifications, though...
-- You mention its both stronger than a basic blast, but weak compared to other blasts of its rank. Clarify?
-- What's the effective range on this?
-- How quickly can you fire this, or, what's the rate of fire?
-- What's the speed of the blast once it's fired? Thrown projectile? Arrow? Bullet? Even faster?


And as a general note for the future, make sure to note what sort pf powers/proficiencies are required for a move, and how much the move costs -- or how much you believe it to cost.
If you see me around and you got questions, just give a shout. I'm happy to assist.

Mark Wrote:[9:32:26 PM] Mark I.: Nuggets are serious McBusiness, Jade

Quote:[9:08:31 AM] Zack Fair: We have an OM addict on our hands, clearly.
[9:08:45 AM] Alexander Seifert (Proto Man/Shang Tsung): OM does sparkle like cocaine
[9:10:00 AM] Zack Fair: Yea totally. We have a horse snorting sparkling white orbs.
[9:10:22 AM] Zack Fair: Our world of limitless possibilities
#3
- That extra stat point was a simple error, fixed so now I should be good.

- Added info on Feel the Power of Hope, revamped Invigored by Hope

Bump, I hope that it's all okay! (Hope pun very much intended)
#4
Not sure if it's been long enough but might as well, BUMP OF HOPE!
#5
Alrighty, apologies for the delay. Got unexpectedly busy for a bit there. Let's see here what's what.


Feel the power of Hope!: Alrighty, this one is now looking good. The only thing to point out is that, for such a basic attack, such a lengthy charge time isn't really necessary. A second or two, at most, would more than suffice, if you'd like to change that.

Invigored by Hope: Looking good. Should be good to roll out.
If you see me around and you got questions, just give a shout. I'm happy to assist.

Mark Wrote:[9:32:26 PM] Mark I.: Nuggets are serious McBusiness, Jade

Quote:[9:08:31 AM] Zack Fair: We have an OM addict on our hands, clearly.
[9:08:45 AM] Alexander Seifert (Proto Man/Shang Tsung): OM does sparkle like cocaine
[9:10:00 AM] Zack Fair: Yea totally. We have a horse snorting sparkling white orbs.
[9:10:22 AM] Zack Fair: Our world of limitless possibilities
#6
So I just start rping?
#7
Name: Saint Walker
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies: (1400); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Buff Proficiency (400)
Powers: (2900/8000); Master Acrobat (400), Healing (2500)
Moves: (600); Feel the power of Hope! (300), Invigored by Hope! (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 1
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 5

Make a new thread in the Roster section and copy and paste the above into the first post. It is also highly recommended that you make more posts within your own roster that details any extra information about your character that you wish to include. Any future purchases can be made here.

You should also visit this, as it will help you with proceeding after getting your character approved.

Welcome to the Omniverse, we hope you enjoy it here!
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