cronos

[Marisa Kirisame]

Character name: Cronos
level:1
Character source: original

Character history: Cronos is the last of his kind,he was a commander of the 105th space brigade, he had 5 years in the most prestigious academy. while spending time in the engineering division, he also had a year to train his ability to fight fist to fist and ranged as of the basic training he got  a blaster rifle and a combat knife. his main fault is that if he is dishonored he will go into a rage losing all control but after an hour he will calm down. his home planet was a earth like planet, 25% of the land is lakes, oceans, and seas while the other 75% is mountain ranges, jungles. he had just escaped his ship exploding before this all happened.


Physical Description: 5'4 in height has a elongated head like a shark has tiger stripes on head and arms, stands on two legs and has a basic blaster rifle (its a sniper/assault rifle as it has a scope, he puts it on his back to carry it. and a combat knife. (the combat knife is 10 inches long and is like a trident knife).

Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:1
SPD:3
TEC:4

Starting Proficiencies: (2000) Physical Strength and Ranged Proficiency

Starting Powers: (400) master acrobat.
(800) master super jumping

 Starting Moves:Blaster (900)

 It has the ability to change from an assault rifle to a sniper rifle. The blaster shoots 10 plasma shots in a 3 inch diameter at 25 mph before overheating and requiring 30 seconds to cool down, and it takes 10 seconds to change modes. The sniper mode shoots 1 plasma shot up to ten times at 50 mph, and it takes 5 seconds between each shot to fire again. This can also be used in melee as a bludgeoning tool. (cant use the sniper mode while moving)



Combat Knife (600)
10 inch, trident knife can be thrown at 10 mph for a max distance of 15 feet before it hits the ground.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. yes

Where did you find us? I was looking for a rpg crossover site to play.

[Omni]

Hi there. In our system, personal weapons such as blasters and combat knives are moves in of themselves. Therefore, you want something like this:

Blaster (600)
(description of blaster). This blaster shoots 10 plasma shots in 3 inch diameter at 25 mph before overheating and requiring 30 seconds to cool down. This can also be used in melee as a bludgeoning tool.

Combat Knife (300)
(description of combat knife)

Sorry for the time you've had to wait — I'll get a mod on this app ASAP!

[Marisa Kirisame]

changed so it should be good

[Omni]

Some of the grammar/formatting is a bit bad there so I would appreciate it if you took a quick look over to try and improve that. Making the meaning is clear as possible is quite important with moves.

The blaster would cost 900 as it has two shooting modes and can also be used as a bludgeoning tool.

The combat knife would cost 600 as it can be used as a melee tool or throwing tool.

Incidentally, do you have a picture for your character?

[Marisa Kirisame]

I have fixed it, but I don't have the pic besides what I have on now.

[Marisa Kirisame]

so I will wait for 48 hours for a moderator again to see if I have any changes to make

[Omni]

You need to clean up the grammar on that blaster move. Run it through a spell check.

[Marisa Kirisame]

You need to clean up the grammar on that blaster move. Run it through a spell check.

I did it pls respond