05-16-2015, 12:46 AM
I just finished my most recent mini-story to kinda 'shake the dust' off. It took a bit longer than anticipated due to frustration with myself for not meeting my own 'standards' of writing. I'm somewhat happy with parts of it but it could definitely be improved, I'm just not sure how. So, I was wondering if anyone had skimmed it and had any comments/criticism. Even if you've just read a post or two, I'd love you hear your input. With DA coming up I definitely need to hone my skills and get some confidence in my wordplay.
TL;DR: C&C?
Thanks!
TL;DR: C&C?
Thanks!
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Dante's Abyss '15
Participant
Vincent Valentine
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Dante's Abyss '16
Grand Champion
Nanaki/Red XIII
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Dante's Abyss '15
Participant
Vincent Valentine
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Dante's Abyss '16
Grand Champion
Nanaki/Red XIII
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(07-16-2018, 06:14 PM)Lord Zedd Wrote: I'm here to kick ass and write compelling stories with Vincent Valentine.
And baby, we're all out of Vincent Valentine.