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Wish Granted
#1
Floating. It felt like the darkness was a cloud. A big, dark, empty cloud of nothingness. Neal's eyes open, groggily looking around the area, but nothing appears to him. Nothing, at least, until he spies the grinning silhouette smiling back at him. It felt like a dream, so vivid yet all a blur. In his mind, he considered reaching out, but feared breaking the veil and waking up.

Quote:“My name is Omni. This is not the world you know. This is the Omniverse. You interest me, so I have made you part of it. The Omniverse is a place that reflects the wishes of those who are part of it. But! There are rules. I will explain them only once, so listen carefully.”

Rules? Neal thought. It was strange this "thing" found him interesting, but stranger still that he apparently pulled him into a strange new dimension. At first, Neal felt he was about to become the toy of a cosmic quasi-deity, forced to dance with the tug of his strings. His worries were washed away come this being's explanation ,along with a shimmering sphere of some sort of energy-matter.

Quote:“This is Omnilium. It’s what ties the Omniverse together. Without it, you are nothing. With it, anything you desire can be yours. But you will need more than this. If you desire it enough, you will find it. You will find that using it comes naturally. Just think of what you desire most.

The orb sank into his skin before Neal could stop it. He shook his hands, trying to see if any residue would return to the surface. None did. Anything I desire? He considered the implications. He considered the similarities. This Omnilium felt familiar. The moment he thought about it, the moment he placed it - Omnilium was basically experience! More specifically, Omnilium was EXP, the metaphysical points that fueled a game character's power.

Quote:“You will not be alone in the Omniverse. There are others. Of course, they, too desire Omnilium. Do not fear death. For as long as you interest me, you will be reborn.

“That’s all you need to know right now. You’ll figure out the rest soon enough. I’ll be watching … and waiting.”

That was incredibly dark. "For as long as you interest me..." Did that mean that as soon as Neal were to become boring, he'd lose the immortality this being seemed to place upon him? And how would he know? Even with these questions burning into his mind, the darkness fades - and along with it, Omni.

He was left there, in a realm of white, alone. There was just a single fountain, which he stares at for a long, hard moment. What now? Neal questions himself. Suddenly aware of a solid ground beneath him, he stood. He looks around once more and spots no one... so to sort things out, he turns and sits himself upon the edge of the fountain.

"Alright," he spoke aloud, to reassure himself. "Pros and Cons. Pro: I'm in a fantasy world with levels." That's a good one, he thought. "Con: I'm subject to the whim of an almighty being and in a dimension that is apparently governed by him..." Omniphysics? He had trouble getting over that one, especially considering his attachment to the physical laws of Earth. "Pro: I can level up... and apparently have powers... Con: I'm currently level one, and there are others. ... Pro: I don't have to go to work tomorrow... or ever..." And silence befalls his mind.

He slaps his knees as he rises to his feet. "I was already whims to an almighty being, I just called him boss. Level one is only temporary, and this is fucking awesome. Yup." He figured normal people would be freaking out at this point. Not him, though. Neal had practically prayed for such a cosmic interjection in his otherwise boring life. First thing's first. I need a power. Somehting small, something basic...

What was simple and basic, yet adaptable and multinational? A smirk curls the young man's lips. His hands rose to his head in praise to his genius brain. He'd had this argument so many times before. He doesn't even the notice his favorite hat dropping to the white floor as he brings his hands down from his crown to focus more around his temples. Telekinesis!

Immediately, he focused around the power, and all the things he'd need to go with it. At first, it felt like an energy was being pulled from his body, not unpleasant but strange as if he could actually feel the motion of omnilium. Maybe that was his imagination. The pain though, that was not so much imagined. It started as a heavy pulsating as if his brain were swelling within his skull. Then sharp pains jab at every angle. His scalp burns and his eyes ache.

Neal sinks to his knees, his hands going from directing the flow to simply cradling his skull. He gasps for breath, hoping the intake of oxygen would help the roaring in his cranium. Eventually, it did. The roar lessened slowly, leaving behind a numbness. There was no reason why it hurt. He had no explanation anymore, except that he had just attained the superhuman status he had always desired.

As his vision cleared, he spotted a drop of blood on the white ground. He almost immediately knew what it was from. Lifting his hand to his nose, he found a thick wetness. He checked his ears too, and then his eyes. Small trails of blood. Brain Hemorrhaging was often a common side effect of extensive psionic use. It replaced muscle damage for those overusing a super-physical stat. It meant that there would be limitations. Ergo the tidbit about needing more Omnilium.

It would be good to keep that in mind, but for now Neal wanted to try out his new found power. He rises to his feet slowly, his head swirling slightly from the change in position. That would pass soon enough, allowing Neal to peer around for a potential target. He then noted his hat upside down on the ground. Glancing down, he noted his long coat still in place. He must have been heading to or coming from a gathering of his nerdy friends when he was nabbed. Neal suddenly smirks. If only they could see me now.

Back on topic, he holds his hand out to the hat. Even though his power was telekinesis, he felt using his body would help focus... and with a twinge in the back of his mind, the hat drifted from the ground towards his hand rather quickly. He could feel he'd just spent Omnilium. To do the opposite, Neal held up his hand, letting the hat rest upside down in his palm. Another twinge, and the hat rises, tossed into the air without physical force.

Alright, focused is easy... time for another approach. Neal slid off his jacket and tossed it on the ground. His hat fell just a ways behind him, adding another target. This time he resisted using his hands. Instead, he simply focused on pushing all around him. After a moment, he heard the telltale skidding of his hat and coat across the ground. "Oh yea! Who's the man? I'm the man!" More Omnilium spent, but it was worth it. He focused again and in another loss of Omnilium, the items soon tap against his feet, pulled from both directions simultaniusly.

He noticed the pull didn't feel as strong and the items weren't as fast. He assumed the mechanics behind the Focused and Radial abilities were going to have downsides, just like anything in a game. A longsword is slow but stronger than a dagger, which is faster and usually more precise...

On another note, he felt that his pool of Omnilium was dangerously low. He had spent a great deal of his energy on the first day. He ran a hand through his long, brown hair and sighed. Deciding his expenditures would play well when he needed an upper hand, he decided not to fret over his compulsive spending. Instead, he bends over to pick up his pinstriped fedora and the knee-length duster and head on his way... It was time to explore, and he was ready to get out of this place. He felt like he'd go nuts from all that white.
#2
It was not long into the walk when Neal realized that walking sucked. He sat down, thirty minutes after he started and sighed. There's got to be a better way to get around. He thought to himself. His eyes roamed the expansive white of the Nexus, the fountain was just barely still in view. Omni was an ass, building this place so freaking large without a shuttle or at least a rent-a-bike.

Switching his train of thought from the blame-game and moving on to figuring out a new mode of transportation. He considered the applications of his Telekinesis for motion. Idly, he holds his hand up, palm over the ground. Exerting his will and attempting to push the ground, his hand rose instead. The force faded before his arm reaches overhead, but it yielded all he needed to know.

I bet I could jump and glide... he considers. Using the Focused Repulsion to jolt upright, he then took an Ironman stance."Easy does it," he states. Knees bending and muscles coiling, he prepares for what promises to be a pathetic jump, leading into an epic flight. With a few deep breaths, he leaps into the air.

His hands flex instinctively as he exerts his force on the ground. For a moment, he propels himself straight up. Success! But it seems he claimed it all too early. After about ten feet he lost control and suddenly, Neal is upside down and slamming into the ground. If he hadn't ducked his head, he surely wouldn't have walked away without a good wobble. Even then, landing on his shoulders and upper back left his arms throbbing from the jarring impact. His head rang and his body felt numb. What spewed from his mouth was a string of curses, a great many he reserved for just such occasions. A few were even in other fantastic languages, including Elvish and Goa'uld.

Neal laid where he landed, spread eagle in hopes the throbbing in his arms would go away quickly. For a moment, he wandered why that failed - or at least, why had it failed so badly? Damn Omniphysics. That was the only explanation. All was fine, but as soon as it looked like he could actually cheat the system, he Bitchslapped me right out of the freaking air! Neal rationalized.

The pain in his arms slowly started to ease, but his shoulders still felt bruised. They'd probably remain like that for a day or so, all things considered. Neal eventually sat up again. Somewhere during the fall or flight, he'd dropped his hat, which now sat a few feet to his right. A quick pull of his palm and it slides right over.

"Alright, new plan. Can't use powers to move without movement powers." In retrospect, that should have been logical. As he combs his hand through his hair to fix the long, wavy locks before placing the hat back on his crown, a new idea flickers through his mind. "A bike..." He had thought of the Nexus' need for a Rent-A-Bike, but maybe it didn't need it. Anything I desire... Omni had indeed said he could achieve anything with Omnilium.

Neal crosses his legs and placed his palms on his knees. Closing his murky blue peepers to stare into the darkness, he filled the blankness of the back of his eyelids with a concept. He needed a bike, so he imagined a bike... A simple bike, nothing with fancy gears or shocks. He focused on an image of a bike he had when he was fifteen, a great bike till a friend of his father's accidentally ran it over in the driveway.

He remembered every detail, from the red flames he'd spraypainted on the aluminum body. He remembered the handlebars, and how he'd spent a whole week getting them to just the right position. His seat which he'd duck-taped a towel onto for maximum comfort... He even remembers the little caution flag his father made him add when riding at night.

His meditative state lasted for longer than he could count. Five, six minutes at least, but it could have been half an hour. When he opened his eyes though, there was his bike... laying on the ground. He always meant to ask his father for a new kickstand. But that was years ago. Back on earth, he'd traded in his bike for a fancy new mountain bike.. which he then added a paper mache horse's head and tassles to - as a horse's tail - for his "Trusty Stead" during LARP's.

A massive grin split Neal's face, wrinkling his cheeks and flashing his molars. He hops to his feet and pulls the bike to its tires. He'd grown since he was fifteen, but thankfully the bike had always been a bit big for him. Now it was just a little too small, but nothing a bit of adult ingenuity couldn't fix. Neal raises the seat and tilts the handlebars forward just slightly. He mounts his new ride, and finds it just as comfortable as he remembers.

He puts petal to the metal and hits the road. Not that there was actually a road, just a white floor indistinguishable from the white sky. Though he had chosen the near medieval stone gateway, he had noticed all the others, but from the fountain they had been but specks on the horizon. With his journey much easier on wheels, he could stop dreading the walk and consider what was going on.

First off: there was an absolute darkness prior to his arrival, where that Omni-being resides. That must be where he watches us from. And then there was this place with eight gates but nothing inside. He started putting the puzzle together in his head. Alright, so if Omni sees everywhere at once, and this place is apparently the center... then... maybe this place is like a doughnut... Omni being the surface, this being the hole and all these gates leading to sections of the doughnut... He feels like that would be a very awkward design for a dimension.

Yet it feels incredibly accurate. There was nothing in this place, it was like a hole. He assumed there'd be something more corporeal behind any of the gates. And that Omni-space was complete darkness... inexplicable in and of itself. He considered getting a piece of paper and drawing it out, eager to learn the inner workings of this new game-like reality. If he knew the mechanics, he could use them to his advantage.

But that was for later discovery. For now, he arrives at the gate. "Dare I step through?" Neal asks himself aloud, using his most philosophical voice... Stepping from his bike and lifting it over his shoulders, he smirks at his own question. "I couldn't stop myself even if I wanted to." The step through the portal was the last step to officially accepting his new life in this strange universe. Neal accepted his new life not only with dignity, but the idea sent a jubilant vibration to his very core.


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