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Crona // Ragnarok - Crona - 02-17-2015 Character name: Crona // Ragnarok Character source: Soul Eater Character history: Crona always had a difficult life. He was the son of the malicious and terrifying witch Medusa, who mostly used him as a cruel lab experiment in an attempt to have a powerful minion at her disposal. While Crona was still a child, his natural blood was replaced by Medusa's invention of Black Blood, which caused him to become immensely resistant to harm and a gifted fighter, but caused him an array of mental problems. Once infested with the Black Blood, he was also cursed with Ragnarok, a creature that lives through and controls the Black Blood within Crona. With his new found abilities, Medusa constantly brought small animals and forced Crona to mutilate them in an effort to make him stronger, but it also caused him to lose more of his sanity. Eventually, animals weren't enough, and Medusa began to send Crona out to fight and kill humans in order to devour their souls and gain even more power. This would have likely continued for some time if not for Maka, who saved Crona from a lifetime of unhappiness and insanity by giving him the option to betray his abusive and manipulative mother. With Maka as his one and only friend, he began to wane off using the Black Blood and regain a normal mental state, but it is still very much a part of him, and he can call upon it at any given time. Just before he was about to venture to destroy his own mother after Maka convinces him she needs to be killed, he suddenly finds that he has been taken to the Omniverse. (More on Crona: <!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://souleater.wikia.com/wiki/Crona">http://souleater.wikia.com/wiki/Crona</a><!-- m --> ) (More on Ragnarok: <!-- m --><a class="postlink" href="http://souleater.wikia.com/wiki/Ragnarok">http://souleater.wikia.com/wiki/Ragnarok</a><!-- m --> ) Physical Description: Crona is almost skin and bones, he is extremely scrawny and somewhat short, which makes him look like a measly and useless warrior at a glance. He wears a black frock-like robe, has purplish hair with blank white eyes, and near constantly looks afraid or worried. Ragnarok stretches out of Crona's back, as he is physically merged with Crona's blood. Ragnarok has a very muscular body, large gloved hands, and spikes on several parts of his body, but no legs. His face consists of a large egg shape, with no visible mouth and a giant white X on his face where his nose should be, with large ping-pong ball-like eyes with Xs for pupils. Stats: ATK: 2 DEF: 5 SPD: 2 TEC: 1 Starting Proficiencies: Physical Strength - 1000 Ranged Proficiency - 1000 Remote Control Proficiency - 600 Starting Powers: Hive Mind - 400 Basic Regeneration - 1300 Starting Moves: Black Blood - 300 Ragnarok's Edge - 300 I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. Move descriptions Black Blood (Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency) Crona can only use Black Blood when his blood has been spilled through wounds or otherwise. Crona manipulates droplets of his blood, forming them into small piercing needles that fly in any direction he desires. Currently he can only form the fixed amount of needles in this manner at any one time. He can manipulate the blood in his general vicinity, and can fling the needles at any target within range. The needles only take a few seconds to form from the blood, and are roughly the size of a normal human finger. Ragnarok's Edge (Physical Strength) A long, dark sword, roughly 55cm in length and 60mm in width. Despite the blade being larger then Crona's arms, he is still able to swing with ease as quickly as he would swing his arm with no sword. Using the blade takes all of Crona's concentration, however. Re: Crona // Ragnarok - Omni - 02-17-2015 Hi there! While I can approve Ragnarok's Edge at 300 no problem, Black Blood will be a no-go for several reasons. Firstly, it includes a powered up version of the regeneration power. As it says in the how to join topic, "There's no changing the way a power works to suit your character better - you need to adapt them to our system. That means Wolverine can't boost his Regeneration power". You'd need to buy the actual regeneration power, and you would be limited to how it works in this game. We're fairly restrictive on regeneration because it has the potential to be really overpowered. Making your blood into weapons is a possibility, but you will need to separate out and explain the different forms (spikes, needles, et cetera) and it will cost 300 OM per variety, as explained in Move Pricing. By explain, I mainly mean how long it takes to form the blood into a weapon. Additionally, you may need extra proficiencies. For example, if you want to hit someone further than 5 feet away with a spike or needles you will need the ranged proficiency. If you want to manually control the blood further than 5 feet away from yourself, you will need the remote control proficiency. If there is any downside to using his own blood as a weapon, please include this as well. Moves with greater downsides are assumed to be more powerful, so that may be something you want to do to take advantage of your character's flavour of using his own blood. Being able to block with your limbs will be entirely dependent on your DEF stat. Yours is high, so that's good, but it's not going to be invulnerable. Re: Crona // Ragnarok - Crona - 02-17-2015 Edited: Changed Black Blood to be an offensive-only ability. Removed Survival, replaced with Basic Regeneration. Added Ranged Proficiency and Remote control Proficiency for Black Blood. Current OM cost is 4, 900. Also Hi! Re: Crona // Ragnarok - Monkey D. Luffy - 02-17-2015 Everything else looks good I just need to note that altering the amount of needles you can produce via blood will make the move versatile, therefore costing an additional 300 OM. For now you can leave it at a static amount each time, then once you can afford it, pump 300 more OM into it to make it variable. So just adjust the description for now. Also if you plan to use Ragnorok in actual combat as a separate entity he'll need to be purchased as an Asset once you unlock them at Level 2. However, if you just want to use him for roleplay flavor that won't be necessary. Re: Crona // Ragnarok - Crona - 02-18-2015 Ragnarok is simply there for roleplay, hes pretty much an embodiment of Crona's powers anyway, so I wont be using him as a separate entity for combat. Also I edited to make Black Blood a static amount of needles until I can afford the OM to make it a variable amount. Re: Crona // Ragnarok - Monkey D. Luffy - 02-18-2015 Name: Crona Level: 1 Spent OM: 4900 Proficiencies: (2600); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Remote Control Proficiency (600) Powers: (1700); Hive Mind (400), Basic Regeneration (1300) Moves: (600); Black Blood (300), Ragnarok's Edge (300) Super Moves: Transformations: Assists: Items: Bases: Unlocks: Base stats: ATK: 2 DEF: 5 SPD: 2 TEC: 1 Create a topic titled Crona or Crona Demon Sword in the Roster Forum. Make certain you copy and past the above information exactly and make that the first post of your new Roster. 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