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Homura Akemi - Medusa - 02-07-2015
Hello! It's me, Eudocia
Character name: Homura Akemi
Character source: Puella Magi Madoka Magica
Character history: Mitakihara Town, a city that has recently started to modernize itself. The city seemed to be your average city, hosting various sights. However, within this city that was a fight between Wraiths and Magical Girls. There were five girls to combat these Wraiths. Lady luck had seemed to follow these girls wherever they went, never getting any serious injuries when fighting Wraiths. Some would say it was thanks to their extraordinary teamwork, some would say that it was because of their experience fighting Wraiths, others would say it was because of their magical power. Nevertheless their battle record was flawless. These girls were: Mami Tomoe, Kyoko Sakura, Sayaka Miki, Nagisa Momoe, Madoka Kaname.
They all met up on top of their school for lunch, another person would often join them, her name was Homura Akemi. Some would call Homura Akemi as odd, however the girls knew that she wasn't a bad person. The girls were happy to have a friend like Homura, somebody who didn't question them about where they went or why they had to leave at random times. Homura didn't hold any suspicion towards the girls neither did she try to pry into their business. The Magical Girls needed somebody to remind them that their life wasn't always filled with fighting Wraiths, to remind them that they too had a life outside of fighting.
Within these group of friends, there was a oddity. The girls never did question their flawless battle record nor did they ever wonder why they seemed so bless at the time. The oddity was manipulating everything in the world, making sure these girls were happy. More so, making sure that one girl was happy. The oddity's name was Homura Akemi, she was in control of everything within the world. She let the girls do the fighting for her, to get rid of all the wraiths. In return she made sure nothing did harm to them, nothing bad could touch them as long as Homura Akemi was around.
It was midnight, the girls were off fighting another wraith that had emerged. Homura Akemi was watching the battle from afar, she didn't need to have her eyes on them however she wanted to watch them. She really only watched one person throughout the fight, she had her eyes on Madoka. The girls had easily destroyed the Wraith as they did with all the other Wraiths. Homura deciding it was time to go stood up and decided to go have another talk with the Incubator. That night, the Incubator never got the chance to met with Homura.
Physical Description: Homura stands at 160 Cm(5'2) and has a dainty physique. She has pale skin with black hair that reaches down to her waist. She has violet eyes and usually wears a red ribbon. She typically wears her hair down, bangs coming down from her red ribbon. Her choice of attire is usually her dark violet dress. The dress covers her breast and goes down to cover her stomach. The dress continues down to her legs, partly going down her thighs in the front and continuing to go down past her knees in the back. She wears a black earring that looks as if a snake was wrapping around her ear, on the snake's tail a purple jewel hangs from it. She wears silky, dark violet elbow-length gloves and mid-thigh stockings for her legs. The inside of her dress has a odd purplish-blue texture to it. She wears a odd necklace made from dark violet material. On her back she has wings coming from her shoulder blades. A black lining is the base of the wings. A white lining comes from her shoulder blades as well, going in a pattern with the black lining. Black feathers hang from the white lining as well.
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![[Image: akuma_homura_by_tenmuki-d8enro3.jpg]](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2015/020/a/4/akuma_homura_by_tenmuki-d8enro3.jpg)
[/spoiler]Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 3
Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency(1,000), Ranged Materialization Proficiency(600), Area Shield Proficiency(600)
Starting Powers: Time Manipulation(1,800)
Starting Moves:
Nadel(Requires Ranged Materialization Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency-300 OM): This move allows Homura to summon up to five needles to throw at her target. The needles are slim and have a ball at the end of it. The needles are four feet tall, and are completely black. Homura uses the needles to sling them at her target. Repeated usage of the move, back to back would give Homura a headache and make her feel lightheaded.
Kopie(Requires Time Manipulation, Area Shield Proficiency-300 OM): A black disc appears floating above Homura's palm. The disc is five feet across and completely black. The disk acts as a portal letting weapons and incoming moves to come inside it. Once something has entered the portal, say a barrage of bullets, then Homura can spend the barrage of bullets out of the disk back at a target. Once the barrage of bullets is used she cannot reuse it. For a move to be able to go inside the portal it must enter the portal from the front. Say if a sword swipe along the sides of the portal cutting it horizontally then the portal couldn't copy the sword swipe, thus destroying the portal. If a super move were to come into contact with the shield it would break the shield ending the move. She can only take in moves that will fit inside the portal or else they would not register, thus destroying the portal and damaging Homura. The portal cannot move from Homura's hand, nor can it be summoned more than a few inches away from Homura's body. If a weapon or beam attack would enter the portal then it would come out the same it looked. If a person's limb entered the portal, say a arm for instance, than the portal would copy the punch. The arm would be able to come out of the portal taking no damage from it. The arm would punch with the same strength it was going to punch with.
I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. Yes.
Homura Akemi - Guu - 02-07-2015
Goddess' Strength: I suggest revising the wording of this move. At no point in the description that you mention that the move is meant to be dropped on other people, or even that it's even an attack like you mentioned in the chat. I thought this was a utility power the first time I read it.
Quote:However once the ball spawns it cannot be movedDoes this mean it remains in one place and the target could just run out of the way, or does this mean it's attached to a person's head and can't be removed?
Nadels looks good, but that last move... hmmm. It's looks good to me, but I should play this one safe.
Re: Homura Akemi - Medusa - 02-07-2015
Updated.
Re: Homura Akemi - Guu - 02-10-2015
Well, here's the deal. As far as I could tell, your move is the first Time Manipulation move to ever exist in the Omniverse. It will be the precedence for every Time Manipulation move to come in the future. This is why I want Omni to look at it so it's entirely certain that this is the route he wants to go with it. However, he's going to be gone for a little while longer (he said Wednesday.)
So, you have two options: I could approve you now without the move and you can just buy Kopie when he approves it, or you can wait until he's back and I'll approve your character then. It's up to you.
Re: Homura Akemi - Medusa - 02-10-2015
I will take the character approval without the move, I'll just move Kopie into the move approval section for Omni to give his say later. Updated.
Edit: Omni said that he would give his thumbs up if I added that a super move could break the shield which I did. Adding back Kopie.
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Re: Homura Akemi - Guu - 02-10-2015
Alright! Awesome!
One thing to note: you can't use your Nadels for close range combat until you get Physical Strength. Just saying that here since you have a line in the move about that.
But with that mentioned, you are approved!
Name: Homura Akemi
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4600
Proficiencies (2200): Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialization Profienciency (600), Area Shield Profieciency (600)
Powers (1800): Time Manipulation (1800)
Moves 600: Nadel (300), Kopie (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 3
I think you know the drill!
Here's your purchases!
Have fun Miss Akemi! ^^