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Negi Springfield - Negi Springfield - 02-05-2015
Character name:
Negi Springfield
Character source:
Mahou Sensei Negima!
Character history:
Ever since Negi was born, he was an orphan. Or so he thought. When he was six years old, the demons attacked his village and killed almost everyone. It would have been everyone, if not for the intervention of his father, Nagi, who left soon afterwards. The only thing Nagi left him was his staff. That was the first time he saw his father. Ever since then, Negi's goal was to find his father.
After the demons attack, Negi moved and went to magic school. At age ten, he graduated and became a homeroom teacher in Japan. Unbeknownst to him, this was the start of a grand adventure that would bring him into conflict with Cosmo Entelecheia, the same enemy his father fought 20 years ago. He meets his father's old allies, makes new allies of his own, and finds out the truth behind the magic world. Much like his father, Negi defeats Cosmo Entelecheia and saves the world. He also mysteriously disappears ten years after saving the world and is presumed to be dead. However, Negi was only taken by Omni. Traveling to the Omniverse severely weakened Negi, so he can no longer use many of his old abilities.
Physical Description:
Negi is fairly tall with red hair and brown eyes. However, when he uses Raiten Taisou (Super move/transformation), his hair becomes white and his body glows with white light.
Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 3
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength (1000 OM)
Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM)
Homing Proficiency (600 OM)
Starting Powers:
Instant Movement (Burst Movement - 800 OM)
By concentrating his magic power into his feet, Negi can move faster than the eye can follow for short distances. However, once Negi enters this move, he cannot change directions.
Basic Super Jumping (300 OM)
Starting Moves:
Ensis Exsequens (300 OM - Requires Physical Proficiency)
Negi gathers mana in his hand, forming a sword. The sword can be maintained as long as mana is supplied. Whenever the sword touches a solid object, it attempt to force the object to undergo a phase change, vaporizing the object. If this fails, the sword behaves like a normal sword. However, if the vaporization succeeds, it also creates a cold wave, as some of the energy for the vaporization is taken from the surroundings.
Sagitta Magica (900 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Homing Proficiency)
Negi creates a number of elemental magical missiles and fires them at the enemy. Each missile is weak and can be easily deflected, but this attack can be dangerous when a large number of missiles is used. Firing more missiles takes more time and mana. One missile can be created almost instantaneously, but summoning 17 missiles takes around 3 seconds. Negi's current maximum of 197 missiles takes around 30 seconds to create. If he is interrupted before the missiles are launched, all of the missiles dissipate. These missiles are homing and usually attack from multiple angles, but the missiles can be combined into a stronger, but slower missile. While various elements can be used for different effects. Currently, Negi can only use light. Light missiles deal slightly more damage, but have no special effects.
Chinese Martial Arts (flavor)
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Spent - 4900 OM
Remaining - 100 OM
Edited: Changed Sagitta Magica and Ensis Exsequens
Re: Negi Springfield - Omni - 02-05-2015
Most everything looks good here. Just a couple things.
Ensis Exsequens: attack power for any move is based on your ATK stat. So it wouldn't be able to vaporise most things.
Sagitta Magica: this looks good but some detail on how long it takes to activate would be good. A second? Two seconds?
Just repost the moves when you've edited the description and we'll look over them.
Re: Negi Springfield - Negi Springfield - 02-05-2015
Updated moves.
Ensis Exsequens (300 OM - Requires Physical Proficiency)
Negi gathers mana in his hand, forming a sword. The sword can be maintained as long as mana is supplied. Whenever the sword touches a solid object, it attempt to force the object to undergo a phase change, vaporizing the object. If this fails, the sword behaves like a normal sword. However, if the vaporization succeeds, it also creates a cold wave, as some of the energy for the vaporization is taken from the surroundings.
Sagitta Magica (900 OM - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Homing Proficiency)
Negi creates a number of elemental magical missiles and fires them at the enemy. Each missile is weak and can be easily deflected, but this attack can be dangerous when a large number of missiles is used. Firing more missiles takes more time and mana. One missile can be created almost instantaneously, but summoning 17 missiles takes around 3 seconds. Negi's current maximum of 197 missiles takes around 30 seconds to create. If he is interrupted before the missiles are launched, all of the missiles dissipate. These missiles are homing and usually attack from multiple angles, but the missiles can be combined into a stronger, but slower missile. While various elements can be used for different effects. Currently, Negi can only use light. Light missiles deal slightly more damage, but have no special effects.
Re: Negi Springfield - Atelos - 02-06-2015
Since we don't have a mana system here at the Omniverse "requires more mana" is a very vague term. Does it tire you out or does it mean it takes more time. And also like Omni said the vaporization will be mostly RP flavor because you don't have enough attack to actually do that AND it would be unfair to others to be that strong.
Re: Negi Springfield - Negi Springfield - 02-06-2015
Mana would just correspond to energy.
The description of the sword is mostly just RP flavor.
Re: Negi Springfield - Omni - 02-06-2015
Everything here's fine, I'll let a mod set you up.
Re: Negi Springfield - Atelos - 02-07-2015
Name: Negi Springfield
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies:Ranged Proficiency(1000),Physical Strength (1000), Homing Proficiency (600)
Powers: Burst Movement(800) Basic Super Jumping (300)
Moves:Ensis Exsequens (300), Sagitta Magica (900)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 3
Make a roster in the Roster Forum, copy and paste the above and make that the first post of your roster. The second reply should contain all the core information of your character(Look at the profile of an active member to see what I'm talking about)
Here's a topic to help you along: What to Do Once You've Been Approved
Remember that your first post should be in the Nexus after you've been taken by Omni, and all future purchases should go here.
You're good to go! Enjoy the Omniverse!