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Gin Yatreg - Gin Yatreg - 01-29-2015
Character name: Gin Yatreg
Character source: Original
Character history: While originally born on Earth, for most of Gin's life he has lived on the space colony KINGDOM-R53. A fun and adventure loving boy, Gin dreamt of leaving his station to explore the galaxy when he was old enough. However, on August 17th 2177, an incident aboard KINGDOM-R53's science wing stopped his dreams from becoming a reality. This incident caused the residents of the colony to mutate in various ways. Some retained their original forms (Nōmas) and gained powers such as flight and speed. While others became horrible bug-like monstrosities (Monsus), losing their minds in the process. War broke out between the Monsus and the Nōmas, with both factions occupying different sections of the ship. Unfortunately for Gin and the rest of the Nōmas, the Monsus had gained control of the hanger area trapping them on the colony.
2 Years later in 2179, the Nōmas have managed to seal off their parts of the colony from the hordes of Monsus. Unsure of how long their blockades will hold, the Nōmas begin sending six-man squads into the Monsus infested parts of the station to reclaim their home. Not being one to just sit on the sidelines, Gin joins the 20th Reclamation Squad. During his fifth mission, he gets separated from his squad and falls into a Monsus nest. Just as a Monsus Guard is about to kill him, he finds himself whisked away to another place. The Omniverse.
Physical Description: Gin is 5'10 in height and has a unique combination of red hair and yellow eyes. Gin is 17 years old, however due to his small height he has sometimes been mistaken to be younger than he actually is.
Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 3
TEC: 2
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength - 1000 OM
Area Shield - 400 OM
Debuff - 1000 OM
[Total OM: 2400]
Starting Powers:
Burst Movement - 800 OM
Super Jump (Basic) - 300 OM
Life Detect - 800 OM
[Total OM: 1900]
Starting Moves:
Shield Fist (Requires Physical Strength) - 300 OM
Enshrouds fists in an Ellipsoidal green shield. Lessens the force against the users fists, allowing them to throw more powerful punches without harming themselves in the process (similar to a boxing glove, only much harder on the receiver). User expends energy while using this move, prolonged use will lead to the user over-exerting themselves. The move is activated at the behest of the user, meaning it can be turned on and off at will.
Bubble Shield (Requires Area Shield) - 300 OM
Creates a green dome-shaped shield 4 feet in diameter around the user, protecting them from most physical and energy based attacks. However, magical attacks can still penetrate the shield. The shield will only last for 1 attack, during which the user is immobile. After it dissipates, the user may not use it again until 1 turn has passed.
(The shield does NOT extend underground.)
[Total OM: 600]
[Total OM Overall: 4900]
I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
Re: Gin Yatreg - Guu - 01-29-2015
My only concern with this submission is that you've made no moves for you weapons or any means of attack. This means that you are only proficient at hand-to-hand combat as a form of offense. Not that it's the end of the world, you can still get by with that and improvised weapons for now and just buy more moves later when you have more OM from posting.
edit: Or you can stick with fisticuffs if that was the intention of your character. Nothing wrong with that, I have two characters who fight bare handed. xD
So with that in mind, you're approved.
Name: Gin Yatreg
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies (2400): Physical Strength (1,000), Area Shield (400), Debuff (1000)
Powers (1900): Burst Movement (800), Super Jump; Basic (300), Life Detect (800)
Moves (600): Shield Fist (300), Bubble Shield (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 3
TEC: 2
Make a roster in the Roster Forum, copy and paste the above and make that the first post of your roster, then make all subsequent posts information about your character.
Here's a topic to help you along: What to Do Once You've Been Approved
Any future purchases (moves, powers, ect.) should go here.
Anyways, congrats and welcome to the Omniverse!