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Gilgamesh - Gilgamesh - 01-10-2015
Hi!! This is Atelos
Gilgamesh:
Fate Series(End of Fate/Zero):
Character history:
Gilgamesh is the first Original King of the world and ruled over Babylon for many years. He is the basis of all myths and has owned every single treasure in the world before he had died. He had undergone many trials with his best friend Enkidu, even as to retrieve the flower of immortality just to have it eaten by a snake. Gilgamesh is two-thirds God and one-third human bringing him to believe he is much better than everyone else.
Fast-foward to modern day. There are Magi that spend their entire lives preparing for The Holy Grail War. Every Ten years an Item called the Holy Grail comes down from the Heavens and will grant one wish to the person who wields it. The grail chooses seven worthy Magi to become Masters, those who own servants. These Magi then undergo certain rituals to summon the Earth's Oldest heroes, who become servants. The Magi lend the Heroes their Mana in order to sustain their bodies, while the Heroes fight for the Master's in order to get the Holy Grail. The master receives Three Command Spells that FORCE the servant to comply to whatever the Master had ordered. There are seven types of servants that participate in the Holy War: Archer, Beserker, Saber, Lancer, Rider, Caster, and Assassin. These servants have special abilities called "Noble Phantasms" that are their signature move of ultimate power. The last pair standing gets their wish granted by the Holy Grail.
Gilgamesh is summoned during The Fourth Holy Grail war by a powerful mage known as Tokiomi. Gilgamesh is known as the "Archer" class due to his Gates Of Babylon. Gilgamesh knows the Grail was once in his large inventory of Treasures and will use the wish to punish all those who had dared to rob his grave. He serves Tokiomi, reluctantly, due to Tokiomi's daring and bossy nature that clashed hardly with Gilgamesh's. Gil resented Tokiomi and found the Master of Assassin, Kirei, to be much more fun.
Gil managed to convince Kirei to kill his mentor, Tokiomi, and then form a new pact with Gil allowing him to become Gil's new master. Kirei does this and takes "control" of Gilgamesh, allowing him to do what he pleased.
Toward's the end of the war only Saber, King Arthur, who is actually a female, and Gilgamesh are alive. The Holy Grail had descended from the Heavens waiting to be held by a servant. Gilgamesh and Saber are alone in the room and Gilgamesh does something absurd. Gilgamesh proposes to Arthur and promises to give her all the pleasures she could dream of in the world. Arthur does not accept and Gilgamesh does not take that too kindly. He fires a sword at Arthur impaling her in the leg. He says, "You may answer incorrectly to your heart's content. Before you can understand the joy of devotion to me."
Saber's master then comes in and uses two command spells to order Saber to user her Noble Phantasm, a giant beam that emanates from her sword, to DESTROY the Holy Grail. While she tries to refuse, her body moves against her, forcing her to destroy the Holy Grail. It works and out from the Holy Grail pours the Sins of Mankind, which serves as a black tar that would taint and make any normal being go insane. However, Gilgamesh is able to withstand this with ease. It is then when Omni took Gilgamesh from the black tar into his world.
Physical Description:
Gilgamesh is a tall and dignified young man with golden hair standing up like a blazing flame. He is described as handsome with an elegant face, and his eyes, crimson like blood, are visibly not those of a human and give off a mysterious radiance that makes people wither. He has a "perfect, Golden-proportioned body" described as emanating majesty that makes flames surrounding him afraid to come close, and his very soul glows golden.
Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:5
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength(1000)
Ranged Proficiency(1000)
Ranged Materialize Proficiency(600)
Starting Powers:
Starting Moves:
Gates of Babylon-Treasures(Requires Melee Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens up a portal to his great treasure room of babylon when he was a king. The Golden Portal he summons allows him to take out the wealth he obtained from his lifetime, such as wine, gold, and other expensive details. The Golden Portal is one sided and is aesthetic only, it serves no purpose other than to bring out the items. The size of this portal is no larger than the size of a wine glass. This cannot be used to bring out any items that require OM to purchase. (For RP fodder only) 300 OM.
Gates of Babylon-Golden Swords(Requires Melee Proficiency):Gilgamesh opens a large golden portal behind him. The Portal is about twice his size length and width. However, instead of treasure two longswords come out, with only their hilts sticking out of the portal. If the swords are knocked away from Gilgamesh's hands he must draw two more swords out from the portal, which takes approximately two seconds. When these swords are knocked out of his hand they dissipate into a golden dust returning back into the portal, he retrieves them because he doesn't want to taint his treasures.
The second function is that three swords come out, by themselves, into a triangular formation in order to block a blow. Once they have taken a hit, they dissipate instantaneously. This part takes more effort from Gilgamesh, the harder the blow means the more fatigued he is. 600 OM
Gates of Babylon-Reaper(Requires Melee Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens up a golden portal behind him where he draws out a giant scythe. The Portal is about twice his size length and width. The Scythe is very fast and very strong, however Gilgamesh must take five seconds to recover from the strike. Using this weapon is more taxing on Gilgamesh, limiting the use of this weapon and tiring him out for later parts of the fight. The reaper is difficult to move with and limits Gilgamesh's movement. 300 OM
Gates of Babylon(Requires Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens a golden portal behind him where many weapons, ranging from spears to axes to swords, appear ready for Gilgamesh to use as if they were arrows. The weapons propel themselves out of the portal to hit their target. The portal is above Gilgamesh and is the size of a car. Gilgamesh can fire up to ten weapons with respective accuracy. When the weapons hit they ground they dissipate back into the portal in a golden dust. It takes 3 seconds for Gilgamesh to be able to reuse this move. Gilgamesh cannot move or use melee moves while using this move. 600 OM
Spent OM: 4400
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Re: Gilgamesh - Gilgamesh - 01-19-2015
Tried to make moves less complex.
Re: Gilgamesh - Guu - 01-20-2015
Somebody Wrote:Gates of Babylon-Treasures(Requires Melee Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens up a portal to his great treasure room of babylon when he was a king. The Golden Portal he summons allows him to take out the wealth he obtained from his lifetime, such as wine, gold, and other expensive details. The Golden Portal is one sided and is aesthetic only, it serves no purpose other than to bring out the items.(For RP fodder only) 300 OM.
You need to describe the size and shape of the portal. The main concern is that Gilgamesh might use this ability to smuggle panzers into Camelot or something (hence the height restriction on Guu's "Stomach of Holding" move.)
Also, cite specifically that items that require OM to summon (Dataverse Device, Communicator, Banishing Circle, ect) still cost you, so you don't leave that possible loophole open. However, as long as you still pay for that stuff, you can role play it as getting it from you horde, which could be fun.
Also, you need some way for others to forcibly gain access to this room so people can possibly get items back if you steal any. (I have caveats for this in my ability too.) You don't want this to turn into a 300 OM vault for Gilgamesh. especially considering you can hide artifacts in there.
Oh, one more thing. Add a caveat that you can't hide people in this room. Something like "the doors won't close until all living beings have left." Trust me, that's not a can of worms you want to open at level 1.
Quote:Gates of Babylon-Golden Swords(Requires Melee Proficiency):Gilgamesh opens a large golden portal behind him. However, instead of treasure two longswords come out, with only their hilts sticking out of the portal. If the swords are knocked away from Gilgamesh's hands he must draw two more swords out from the portal, which takes approximately two seconds.
The second function is that three swords come out, by themselves, into a triangular formation in order to block a blow. Once they have taken a hit, they disappear instantaneously. This part takes more effort from Gilgamesh, the harder the blow means the more fatigued he is. 600 OM
What happens to the swords you drop? They probably should disappear so you don't get to summon an endless amount of swords. Not to mention, having to replace your weapon every time you lose them would be a really good caveat.
How big is the portal exactly? Just asking for RP sake.
Otherwise, looking good so far.
Quote:Gates of Babylon-Reaper(Requires Melee Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens up a golden portal behind him where he draws out a giant scythe. The Scythe is very fast and very strong, however Gilgamesh must take five seconds to recover from the strike. Using this weapon is more taxing on Gilgamesh, limiting the use of this weapon and tiring him out for later parts of the fight. The reaper is difficult to move with and limits Gilgamesh's movement. 300 OM
This looks pretty good! Just size description of the portal and you're golden!
Quote:Gates of Babylon(Requires Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency): Gilgamesh opens a golden portal behind him where many weapons, ranging from spears to axes to swords, appear ready for Gilgamesh to use as if they were arrows. Gilgamesh can fire up to ten weapons with respective accuracy. It takes 3 seconds for Gilgamesh to be able to reuse this move. Gilgamesh cannot move or use melee moves while using this move. 600 OM.
Does he launch them in a bow? How is he tossing these? Again, when do these weapons disappear?
Re: Gilgamesh - Gilgamesh - 01-20-2015
Quote:Also, you need some way for others to forcibly gain access to this room so people can possibly get items back if you steal any. (I have caveats for this in my ability too.) You don't want this to turn into a 300 OM vault for Gilgamesh. especially considering you can hide artifacts in there.
Oh, one more thing. Add a caveat that you can't hide people in this room. Something like "the doors won't close until all living beings have left." Trust me, that's not a can of worms you want to open at level 1.
I said it was a one way portal, if that isn't enough I'll add more.
To everything else I fixed. Thanks for looking this over Guu!
Re: Gilgamesh - Omni - 01-20-2015
Everything looks good here. Thanks Guu for looking over everything ^^
Re: Gilgamesh - Guu - 01-20-2015
Name: Gilgamesh
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4400
Proficiencies: (2600); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600)
Powers: None
Moves: (1800); Gates of Babylon-Treasures(300), Gates of Babylon-Golden Swords(600), Gates of Babylon-Reaper(300), Gates of Babylon(600)
Transformations: None.
Summons: None.
Items: None
Bases: None.
Unlocks: None.
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 1
SPD: 2
TEC: 5
You're golden! I'm guessing you know the ropes, so head on over and make your Roster!