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A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

Melk arrived in tier one of Coruscant, immediately taken back. she has never seen a place like this before... people were rushing around, the lights, the colors... instantly feeling like she wont fit in she looks around desperately for a friendly face... instead she just gets pushed out of the way by people, noticing stormtroopers, not recognizing what is in there hands... she was about to break down in panic. there was no place to move around... it wasnt very damp... and the amount of humans... thousands at least.. The filth just rush across the street like there's no tomorrow, cant they just take things slowly? talk to friends? no of course not... they are humans... the worst species to exist...  she then starts to walk across the sidewalks looking for a someone to explain to her just what the hell this place is... keeping her head down as to not draw attention.


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

Melk couldnt feel like she could continue anymore, she found an alleyway and sat down, crying... why was she taken to this horrible world? why do humans have to be such filth? throught her walk in this city, no human had shown her respect, only the need to see new things, to work.... work, a word relatively unknown to melk, most monster girls diddnt have to work, they lived in peaceful communities, even slug girls, who were pretty much the bottom of the food chain diddnt have to work, even though life back at lilas was boring and repetitive, she was used to it, it was home, but no, some godly being thought they could just take that away from her, she clenched her hands as she kept crying...


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

Getting up, she wipes her eyes... this completely foreign world to her already hates her...is there even any slug girls on this world? or is she completely alone, she was going to steal some food, but in an area populated like this, it would be suicide, she starts walking across the streets again, getting pushed, commented on and whatever, humans hated her... like she hated humans... having her rapier by her side diddnt make her feel secure anymore, there were clearly more powerful people here, people that could kill her easily, the trial of slime left behind her diddnt help things, people calling her dirty, disgusting etc.

For all she knew, she could be walking forever, without any guidance, help or sign of a friendly face, its clear she could easily die due to some  random person who had a grudge against her, sometimes people would just stare at her, like she was insane, a beast who should not exist something along the line of that.


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-08-2018

A Twi’lek woman with bright red skin is moving very slowly through downtown Tier-1. She is flanked on either side by a pair of Wookies in black tuxedos, their heads swiveling all around. She wears a long emerald-green petticoat and carries a tiny expensive purse. A careful observer would note a a thin trail of slime following her everywhere she goes.

Tak’iali the Fair, Hutt Mafia Princess, is half Hutt and half Twi’lek.

The posh little princess slugs forward slowly, her bodyguards following her patiently. Tak'iali suddenly stops, and frowns. She looks on the ground behind her, and sees she has crawled over another slug trail. She changes directions ‘suddenly’, following the trail.


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

(07-08-2018, 05:12 PM)Luci Wrote: A Twi’lek woman with bright red skin is moving very slowly through downtown Tier-1. She is flanked on either side by a pair of Wookies in black tuxedos, their heads swiveling all around. She wears a long emerald-green petticoat and carries a tiny expensive purse. A careful observer would note a a thin trail of slime following her everywhere she goes.

Tak’iali the Fair, Hutt Mafia Princess, is half Hutt and half Twi’lek.

The posh little princess slugs forward slowly, her bodyguards following her patiently. Tak'iali suddenly stops, and frowns. She looks on the ground behind her, and sees she has crawled over another slug trail. She changes directions ‘suddenly’, following the trail.
melk is walking through the streets still, untill she takes some time to rest, she sits down on a cafe chair, getting shouted at in the process, not even caring at this point, she needed a sit down, not daring to steal anything, fearing what law enforcement here could be like she just sits, looking into the sky.

"Am i the only slug here?" she mutters to herself, its possible, and to be honest she cant tell if its a good or a bad thing, the good is that she wont have to deal with overly religious slug nuns, devoted to ilias but the bad is... she wont be able to see her "big sisters" the ones that always helped her and comforted her, and now shes here, alone in a human settlement...


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-08-2018

Tak'iali scoots forward, a delicate little scowl on her posh face as she follows the trail, her bodyguards in tow. The Princess suffers no disgusted glances or comments, as her cloud of superiority and glaring bodyguards follow her everywhere.

At the end of the trail she finds herself standing above a pretty girl in a large petticoat. The girl seems crestfallen and nervous.

"Excuse me," says Tak'iali, staring down at the girl. "I have never found a trail like yours before. Are you new here?"


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

(07-08-2018, 05:33 PM)Luci Wrote: Tak'iali scoots forward, a delicate little scowl on her posh face as she follows the trail, her bodyguards in tow. The Princess suffers no disgusted glances or comments, as her cloud of superiority and glaring bodyguards follow her everywhere.

At the end of the trail she finds herself standing above a pretty girl in a large petticoat. The girl seems crestfallen and nervous.

"Excuse me," says Tak'iali, staring down at the girl. "I have never found a trail like yours before. Are you new here?"

"h-huh?" she was surprised to hear and see someone actually talking to her "y-yes i am new, j-just g-got h-here...  i dont know anything about this place, i-its so different from ilias..." she realised she was rambling on a bit and therefore stops talking, she notices that she has bodygaurds a rich outfit and purse, not being able to tell if she will be insulted, helped or maybe even injured,

"my trial? well i am a slug girl miss, helps me move around..." shes panicking a bit, not being able to tell if the woman is friendly or not is terrifying, moments like these make her just want to run away screaming... although having someone to talk to did comfort her a bit


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-08-2018

Tak'iali nods nobly. The girl is a Prime, that much she could tell by her Trail. A new one, fresh from the fountain. She seems scared, lonely, isolated, as many Primes are when they are first abducted. Tak'iali is nervous, though she refuses to show it. She is scared of Primes, with their fantastical powers and their immortality. She wonders what her father, the crime boss Jorax the Hutt would do.

Tak'iali smiles warmly down at the girl, but her eyes glint with evil intentions.

"Yes, the Omniverse is very strange. That's why we stick together," she say kindly. She lifts her petticoat just an inch or two, showing her gastropod poking out where her ankles should be. "The uh," Tak'iali fumbles over the word; 'Slug' is something of a racial slur to her. "Slug-people, we stick together. We have a lot of enemies here in this world. They would kill us if they could," she warns.

"Do you have someplace to stay?"


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

(07-08-2018, 05:52 PM)Luci Wrote: Tak'iali nods nobly. The girl is a Prime, that much she could tell by her Trail. A new one, fresh from the fountain. She seems scared, lonely, isolated, as many Primes are when they are first abducted. Tak'iali is nervous, though she refuses to show it. She is scared of Primes, with their fantastical powers and their immortality. She wonders what her father, the crime boss Jorax the Hutt would do.

Tak'iali smiles warmly down at the girl, but her eyes glint with evil intentions.

"Yes, the Omniverse is very strange. That's why we stick together," she say kindly. She lifts her petticoat just an inch or two, showing her gastropod poking out where her ankles should be. "The uh," Tak'iali fumbles over the word; 'Slug' is something of a racial slur to her. "Slug-people, we stick together. We have a lot of enemies here in this world. They would kill us if they could," she warns.

"Do you have someplace to stay?"

at the opportunity to get some answers, a place to stay, a rebellion, her eyes light  "i-i d-dont have a place to stay" the warning was perfectly understandable to her, being a slug girl she was used to being hunted down by humans, attacked and all sorts, but now she was happy, the gastropod that Tak'iali had gave her hope, maybe there was a bunch of slug girls here after all, just not like the ones back at home.

if this woman could provide her a place to sleep and answers melk would probably do anything she requested, not really ever being independent, relying on others was what she did best, it wasnt like she was incapable or anything, more like she needed a push in the right direction to help her get on her way


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-08-2018

The wealthy alien princess grins, perhaps a little maliciously. She watches the little slug-girl's eye widen, the fear of humans clearly still fresh to her.

"Then you shall stay with me and daddy," Tak'iali decides, not asking for the other slug girls opinion. She snaps her fingers, and one of the hulking Wookie bodyguards approaches.

"Yes, Princess Tak'iali," he says in a booming voice as he bends down to attend the young Twi'lek-Hutt.

"Courdory, bring around the hovercar," she says haughtily. She unfurls a delicate green fan and starts to fan herself. "It is far to hot today for such delicate... slugmaidens such as ourselves to walk."

"Yes, Princess Tak'iali," the Wookie says as he hurries off. The Princess grins as if to show the girl that here, the slugs have power. The Wookie returns momentarily with a sleek, top-of-the-line hovercar and touches down gently in the street by the cafe.

"Would you like to come home, or do you want to see the city?" Tak'iali asks.


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-08-2018

This place was way too busy for her, interested to meet Tak'iali's father she replies "H-home" the hovercar confused her "what kind of magic does that thing use? i never seem magic like that before..." feeling a bit relaxed, from being some sort of social drop out to going to a new home with some sort of princess, seeing a "slug girl" have power over another race also relaxed her as she smiles.

although she was curious about how the other "slug" was so rich she chose not to mention it, probably some family that dug up some gold or something and sold it for millions, its not that uncommon, atleast back in ilias it wasnt..


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-08-2018

Princess Tak'iali giggles, putting her fan over her face as she does.

"Why, the very best kind of magic money can buy," she says as she slugs into the hovercar. "Here in the Coruscant, we have a magic called Tech. And if you are rich enough, Tech can let you can do anything you want."

The interior of the car is incredibly roomy, and it is built to contain the large bulk of a Hutt. Several wide leather couches line the car, and there are little hoses hanging down from the ceiling. They smell like sugary sweet water. The vehicle is clearly opulent and luxurious, with a strange kind of space hookah in the center of the car. In the back of the car, two Twi'leks are chained by their necks to the ceiling. The green-skinned alien women look like Tak'iali from the waist up, but they lack the gastropods, and instead have spindly humanoid legs. They do not seem nervous, but smile and giggle at the girls appearance.

The hovercar rises into the air, the shimmering city of Teir-1 Coruscant twinkling below them. Great skyscrapers and floating buildings and stranger, more incomprehensible things dot the skyline. A man with a an octopus for a head riding a hoverboard swerves out their way, cursing and shaking his fist at them. A pair of thai-fighters are drag racing around a mobius strip suspended high the air. A massive space ship the size of a city looms off in the west.

The princess sighs and relaxes on a couch, reaching up to grab one of the little hoses hanging from the ceiling and starts to sip from it.

"I am Princess Tak'iali," she says finally. "If you have not heard by now. Are you hungry?" she asks, gesturing towards one of the tubes.


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-09-2018

"y-yes i am hungry p-princess tak'iali..." seeing the twi'leks and how they giggled at her took away most of the confidence she had just a few minutes ago.... she sat down on a couch, looking around, the magic here was amazing though... she might be able to fit in, maybe in a few days she can go on her own and live in a nice house? the thoughts rush to her head, too many for such a slow monster to comprehend...


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-09-2018

Princess Tak'iali offered one of tube filled with sweet sugar water to the nervous Prime.

"Don't worry about them," the princess says, gesturing toward the chained up aliens and giving them a scowl. The Twi'leks hush instantly.

The hovercar touches down in the driveway to an opulent floating palace, looking vaguely Arabian but incredibly high tech. The palace floats on an island hundred of feet above the city.

The Princess slugs out of the car and begins the long, slow walk up to her house, through a gigantic rose garden.

"Tell me about you world, miss..." Tak'iali pauses. "What is your name, anyways?"


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-09-2018

"m-my world? its populated by "monster girls" combinations of animals and humans, the goddess there hates monsters though, infact its one of her commandments “Thou shalt not have intercourse with monsters.” therefore we had to force humans to ya know.... breed...slug girls used to have a village where humans and slug girls were peaceful, but of course ilias had to interfere, kicking us out due to human rebellion" she drinks some water smiling. 

"my name, oh my name is melk..." she offers out her hand nervously smiling a bit. "t-the water is g-great..."  with a few days she could get used to this form of life, life where slug girls have more power over other species... it felt so enticing to her


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-09-2018

Princess Tak'iali smiled daintily as she shook Melk's hand, enjoying the pleasant stroll through the rose garden, sipping the sugar-water from wine glasses.

"I am sorry to say that it sounds dreadful," Princess Tak'iali declares. "Though it is true, the slug people here likewise breed by force, or wealth, with humanoids. I am such an offspring, of a Hutt and a Twi'lek, like the girls you saw in the car."

The slug girls ascend a very tall white staircase. At the top, there is another Twi'lek in a long petticoat.

She look's much like Princess Tak'iali, except her skin is blue, and she is slightly taller. Tak'iali glares at the woman, who wears a polite smile.

"Hello Taki," the blue skinned woman says. "Who is your friend?"

"Not of your buisness, Day'iisey," the Princess spits back. "She's staying with us for a while."

Day'iisey just smiles welcomingly as they walk past.

"That's my stupid sister Day," says the Princess as they enter the giant palace. "She's not as annoying as my little sister though. Anyway, do you want to come play in the pool? Oh, but you must be exhausted. Would you rather just lie down?"


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-09-2018

This anger was not felt amongst the slug girl community, slug girls normally have nothing but passion and affection for each other... "i-i would like to have a lie down...." she looks down a bit "sorry..." she waited for what Tak'iali had to say but the scolding she just gave a sister did make her nervous again, she wanted to shout at her host for being so rude, but knowing if she did she would probably be dead within minutes...


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-09-2018

Princess Tak'iali notices her new Prime friend's discomfort.

"I love my sisters," she says suddenly, in a heartfelt voice. "But they are a pain in my gastropod. Come, let's get you too room."

Princess Tak'iali snaps her fingers, and as if my magic several human men in tuxedos and shortshorts appear. They proceed to escort the slug girls up a winding ramp; Hutts don't use stairs.

"Here we are," Princess Tak'iali says brightly as one of the men opens the door.

The room is luxurious. The floor is a pool a few inches high with warm water. There are leaves as several misters going at full blast. In the middle of the room, where there would normally be a bed, is a giant toadstools.

"Feel free to ring the boys if you need anything," Princess Tak'iali says. "And see you in the morning, Melk!"


RE: A city of filth - Melk - 07-09-2018

"t-thank you" she smiles as the door cloeses, now this was a room alright, not some  human room, but a room for slugs, for the first time in hours she finally felt at home, laying down on some toadstools sadly she diddnt have a book to read  but she diddnt care about that right now, all she cared about is getting comfy and finding  out a purpose in this world. getting to know her sisters here and enjoying life


RE: A city of filth - Luci - 07-09-2018

Four slug girls recline on toadstools and sip tea in the shade of a massive alien tree sprouting enormous multicolored flowers the size of a beach umbrella.

One of them is Princess Tak'iali, the red skinned and haughty eldest sister. She likes to talk of complex politics and laws of Coruscant.

On her left is Princess Day'iisey, called Day, the blue skinned and welcoming middle sister. She likes to talk of the fun things to do in the city.

To Day's right sits the youngest sister Princess Kas'iobo, called Cas. Cas has magenta skin and is very shy. When she talks, it is simply to ask questions.

To Princess Tak'iali's right is Melk.

The slug girls prattle on about Coruscant and Ilias for some time in their humongous garden. Eventually the topic turns to their plans for the day.

"I thought we were going shopping?" Princess Tak'iali says.

"Oh, but I wanted to see the new exhibit at the art gallery!" Princess Day says wistfully.

"What do you want to do, Melk?" asks Princess Kas.