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Mami Tomoe - Mami Tomoe - 12-14-2014 Character Name: Mami Tomoe (巴 マミ - Tomoe Mami) Character Source: Puella Madoka Magica (Iffy on the anime, loved most of the characters) Character History: Mami Tomoe is, in her Universe, a Senior in Middle School (This might be difficult...) that signed up as a Magical Girl to avoid death in a car accident. In exchange for a wish (Namely, "Save me"), she put her life into hunting Witches and Familiars, both of which are deadly magical creatures that cannot be stopped by normal human beings. She lives alone in an apartment, as her parents passed away in the car accident she was saved from (She neglected to mention saving her parents in her wish due to her desperation). Despite this, she is very kind and often appears to be quite calm and in control of her emotions. She often appears to be quite confident and brave, but in reality she is very insecure on the inside, which is something she rarely if ever shows. Because of this, she has trouble making friends or getting close to anyone. She is experienced in hunting Witches and Familiars, compared to most Magical Girls, and has done much of her work alone. However, she is not adverse to working with others - She received help from some others, such as Homura Akemi, Madoka Kaname and Sayaka Miki, depending on the timeline. Speaking of timelines, she has participated in almost 100, without knowledge of the former timelines in each one. In each timeline, she performs different actions, but dies each time despite great efforts otherwise - If all timelines are to be considered canon (And they are, though they have no influence over her personality currently), she has killed two of her friends by her own hands, has been beheaded, and has never survived past less experienced Magical Girls despite greater amounts of skill - Likely due to her tendency to mistake bravado for true bravery and her tendency to assume the safety of others is her responsibility alone. As a result of these, she often has gotten herself killed trying to protect others. However... She has proven she can be unstable when the truth is too much, too cruel, to bear. So unstable that she can lose her mind. She was removed from her Universe seconds before her hundredth death in a time-loop caused by Homura Akemi, at the point where her head would be removed. Physical Description: Mami has a mesomorphic build - She's of about average height and weight. Her shoulders are far from broad, her waist is rather thin, her hips are slightly broad and her legs are close to equal in width through their entire length. She stands at about 5'4. Her face is very soft in appearance, often displaying gentle, golden eyes and a warm smile - Unless she's fighting, where her smile will fade and her eyes will inch closer to slits. She has a soft, small nose and thin eyebrows. Her hair nearly matches her eyes in colour, but is slightly darker. It is straight and falls just below her ears, at which point two large curls extend out to her sides, with the curls growing smaller and smaller until they reach midway down her shoulders. As for her dress sense, Mami is rather feminine. She takes kindly to putting flowers in her hair and bows on her shoes, and isn't afraid of making herself stand out visually. Her regular outfit consists of a white, slightly puffy top that reaches midway to her elbows and a corset that wraps around her lower torso. A yellow band stretches down the front of the outfit on her torso, which is adorned with brown straps. Two white stripes nearly rim the corset. An olive-brown slightly loose-fitting skirt reaches nearly to her knees, which is rimmed with dark brown. She wears a pair of dark brown thigh-high socks with very thin vertical silver stripes, and a pair of lighter brown boots with some dark yellow, similar in colour to her hair. The boots reach just below her knees and have small heels, increasing her height by 1". (Pictures, because I probably did a poor job of explaining things. Tell me if I shouldn't have this.) Stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 1 SPD: 3 TEC: 3 Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM), Remote Control Proficiency (1000 OM) Starting Powers: Master Acrobat (400 OM), Super Jumping - Basic (300 OM), Life Detect (800 OM) NOTE: The momentary summoning of weapons, which is a trait that Mami holds from her respective Universe, is mentioned in many if not all of these Moves. If this must be changed, please tell me. Starting Moves: Multiple Unnamed Muskets - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency (Weapon[s] - 300 OM) Mami can summon a number of percussion-lock rifles with minimal effort - Typically by pulling them from the underside of her skirt in larger numbers, though she can summon one or two by simply holding her hands out. She can comfortably summon up to a dozen and fire them by pointing at a target, though these weapons cannot be re-fired and must be discarded after use unless they are necessary to block an attack or two (They can handle one or two attacks before snapping in half). As they are muskets, they are less accurate than modern rifles, and thus are most effective in larger numbers, where missing is less of a problem. They can be fired, as previously mentioned, by pointing at a target to be fired remotely or by using the trigger. Bullets are relatively standard. The muskets are uniform, with a light brown wooden stock, a steel barrel and ornate golden loops and laces along it. Tiro - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency (300 OM) Mami can summon a large percussion-lock rifle named Tiro - Which is about fifteen by five feet in size. However, it weighs very little and can be used very easily, though it has no trigger, and is simply fired within three seconds of being summoned (It is summoned similarly to how Mami summons her other muskets). It's essentially a cannon with two barrels - It fires two large, round, dark iron cannonballs at its target that disappear on impact. Tiro can only be fired once before the need to reload arises, and while it's possible to do in battle, it's difficult without her opponent being distracted, so she typically avoids using Tiro unless she's sure her shot will count. As soon as Tiro is summoned, it begins charging for a shot, which it fires in the specified time above. Remaining OM = 900 - Decided to remove Tiro Finale and Tiro Volley for Super Moves later. While they'd be nice to have early on, it might not be the best idea. I can confirm that I read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. Re: Mami Tomoe - Proto Man - 12-14-2014 Everything looks all right from my end. My advice would be to hold off on your last two moves and save those for Super Moves, where I think they'd make a much better fit as 'Finishing Moves.' If you'd want to keep them, I think they're both fine at 300, since everything boils down to 'Shoot person with muskets.' I'll let you get back to me with your final opinion, but you may consider yourself approved in the interim. Re: Mami Tomoe - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-14-2014 Slight Addendum: In your history please include exactly when she is taken from her source canon. And since Proto didn't mention it, yeah the 'summoning' fluff is just fine. Once you have the equipment/weapons as Moves they are considered accessible to your character. How you represent that is entirely up to you. Edit: Also, you don't need to worry so much. No one expects you to be perfect; your profile is great, and we won't bite (usually)~ Re: Mami Tomoe - Mami Tomoe - 12-14-2014 Added when Mami was taken from her Universe, then removed Tiro Finale and Tiro Volley. I'll likely add them later as Super Moves, as recommended. Does anything else need fixing/editing/additions? Or am I cleared to start a full character profile? Re: Mami Tomoe - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-14-2014 You're good to go. Post this in a new topic in the roster section. In a reply you can create a more in depth character profile. For an example of this, see the other active rosters. Name: Mami Tomoe Level: 1 Spent OM: 4,100 Proficiencies: (2000); Ranged (1000), Remote Control (1000) Powers: (1500); Master Acrobat (400), Basic Super Jumping (300), Life Detect (800) Moves: (600); Multiple Unnamed Muskets (300), Tiro (300) Super Moves: Transformations: Summons: Items: Bases: Unlocks: Base stats: ATK: 3 DEF: 1 SPD: 3 TEC: 3 I'll post up your log page which you may utilize to make purchases at a later time. Remember your first IC post should be in the Nexus. Please see the introduction page in the Rules for further details. Afterwards, your free to head to any of the other verses that can be reached from the Nexus.