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Peter Quill - Peter Quill - 12-08-2014

Character name: Peter Quill

Character source: Marvel Universe (Earth-199999)

Character history: The story is the same as the one from the Marvel Film, Guardians of the Galaxy. He is brought into the Omniverse directly after stealing the Orb from Morag.

Physical Description: Not needed

Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
∆ Basic Super Jump (300 OM)
∆ Master Acrobat (400 OM)
∆ Life Detect (800 OM)

Starting Moves:
∆ Element Gun - 600 OM (Variable)
Found on one of Quills many adventures before coming to the Omniverse, it is his most trusted weapons. It is always on his person even when he sleeps. Shaped as a usual blaster that also curves around the handle, making a U shape, the Element gun is made from a silver color alien metal. On the left side is the toggle switch to switch between the two different modes.
"The Element Gun is a special weapon which conjures each of the four elements."
Can be set to two different modes, these being rapid fire and charge. When it fires rapidly it loses strength but when charged and held for a few seconds it deals a more intense blow. Fires pure energy.

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Re: Peter Quill - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-08-2014

Just one thing: Element Gun should cost 600 OM as it is a variable move with two functions. The first function is rapid fire, with the second being a charged blast. Everything else appears to be in order. A brief description of the gun's appearance would be nice as well. Lastly, if you would please include the prices of your starting powers and proficiency - that would be appreciated.


Re: Peter Quill - Peter Quill - 12-08-2014

I shall do so! Would a picture be a good description or would a written description be better? Also I have edited the Move and prices


Re: Peter Quill - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-08-2014

Written. Move descriptions are more for other people than yourself as I am sure you know what your gun looks like and does, but other people in competitive play need to know as well.


Re: Peter Quill - Peter Quill - 12-08-2014

Edited! ^.^


Re: Peter Quill - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-08-2014

Ah, sorry one more clarification thing. It firing out the elements is just fluff right? As long as they don't add to the strength in any way the Move is good and approved.


Re: Peter Quill - Peter Quill - 12-08-2014

Yes it is.


Re: Peter Quill - Sarah_Kerrigan - 12-08-2014

With that settled, here you go. Just post this in the roster section with an additional reply that at least describes your moves, but preferably becomes an entire character profile. For an example of one check any of the active members' rosters:

Name: Peter Quill
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3,100
Proficiencies: (1000); Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers: (1500); Basic Super Jumping (300), Master Acrobat (400), Life Detect (800)
Moves: (600); Element Gun (600)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

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