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Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-01-2018

CHARACTER NAME:

Vash the Stampede

CHARACTER SOURCE:

Trigun (manga, film, and television)

CHARACTER HISTORY:

Vash the stampede grew up on a colony ship sent by mankind to repopulate on another planet, due to a series of events the entire fleet went off-course, eventually crashing into a wasteland planet where civilization as we know it was turned on it's head for the purposes of surviving on this barren planet. he spent all his days paying for the mistakes he's made and the sins of his brother up until the moment he finally confronted him.finally achieving peace.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Vash the Stampede is a 5'10" humanoid with excessively spiky blonde hair. His skin color is pale with a mole just under the corner of his left eye. He wears a studded red coat and a pair of gloves, along with colored shades to surpass Ozzy Ozborne himself. the gloves are belted just below the wrist and have iron bands on the fingers. The coat's collar extends up to Vash's chin.

STATS:
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:

Physical Strength -1000
Ranged Attack Proficiency -1000
Area Attack Proficiency -600

STARTING POWERS:

Master Acrobat -400

STARTING MOVES:

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt -300 (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
A silver, modified .45 Long Colt revolver, its bullets travel moderately faster than that of a standard gun of the model it is based off of. It has a break-top reload system and is accompanied by a couple clips for fast reload. The design doesn't have a rounded body, instead having two columns connected by an indented piece of metal, having the barrel be contained within the lower half rather than the top. The presumably solid portion in the top half instead contains a breakaway facade with a miniature plant.This revolver is never prone to jamming and contains a maximum of 6 bullets in the revolver chamber. The effective range extends to about 40 yards.

Hand-Cannon -300 (Ranged attack Proficiency, Physical Strenght Proficiency)
Vash's left arm is a cybernetic arm with an integrated sub machine gun, fed through tubes under his trademark red coat. It is relatively powerful and fires  around 3 bullets a second.though the entire arm is concealed under his glove and coat until he uses it

The Punisher cross, firing -600 tier 1 supermove (Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash carries the Punisher, a hulking weapon in the shape of a cross, which carries an assortment of 8 pistols (4 on each side) and 3 integrated armaments including 2 machine guns on the long end which totaled about 10 rounds a second. and a rocket launcher on the opposite. The cross is made of extremely sturdy metal which has taken direct fire from high caliber firearms and explosions without breaking. When not being used it is wrapped in an extremely large cloth bound by leather straps.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us?
Googling for PBP forums


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Trixie - 05-01-2018

Hello! Welcome to the Omniverse. Is that second Vash application yours? Also, I see you already have an account with us here. Did you try joining before?


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-01-2018

(05-01-2018, 04:07 PM)Trixie Wrote: Hello! Welcome to the Omniverse. Is that second Vash application yours? Also, I see you already have an account with us here. Did you try joining before?

I accidentally double-posted, yeah. And I did, interesting concept but ultimately I got tired of trying to make the concept work so I thought I'd go back to the character I originally used


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-01-2018

are there any issues or things that I should consider changing or disambiguating (aside from the word strength in the cybernetic arm, I need to start proofreading my work)


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Dane Regan - 05-01-2018

History: Can you elaborate on when he was taken to the Omniverse (you can give an episode number, or reference to an event or season - or just describe when it happens).

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt: Roughly how long does this take to reload? ~0.5 seconds per bullet?

Hand-Cannon: This would cost 600 OM. 300 for being able to punch people with the arm. 300 for the machine gun part. Unless you just intended the cybernetic stuff to be for shooting (when physical strength isn't a requirement). Also, does he need to reload this, or does it have unlimited ammo?


The Punisher cross: Super attacks are attacks, rather than just an individual weapon. So, if you wanted to make this into a super move, you'd need to say something like, "he unleashes a barrage of bullets and rockets from the cross" or something. If you do that, be sure to specify the rough range, the size of the rocket explosions (and how many are fired), and roughly how long the attack lasts.


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-01-2018

(05-01-2018, 09:31 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: History: Can you elaborate on when he was taken to the Omniverse (you can give an episode number, or reference to an event or season - or just describe when it happens).

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt: Roughly how long does this take to reload? ~0.5 seconds per bullet?

Hand-Cannon: This would cost 600 OM. 300 for being able to punch people with the arm. 300 for the machine gun part. Unless you just intended the cybernetic stuff to be for shooting (when physical strength isn't a requirement). Also, does he need to reload this, or does it have unlimited ammo?


The Punisher cross: Super attacks are attacks, rather than just an individual weapon. So, if you wanted to make this into a super move, you'd need to say something like, "he unleashes a barrage of bullets and rockets from the cross" or something. If you do that, be sure to specify the rough range, the size of the rocket explosions (and how many are fired), and roughly how long the attack lasts.

Let's say just after he *******************************SPOILER ALERT*************************************** kills knives and leaves
as that leaves the most room for writing outside how he would typically act


as I said vash uses fast-reload clips with the breaktop so it actually only takes about 1 second for a full reload with them, if he didn't have one that would probably be about right.

as for the cybernetic arm, it doesn't technically have unlimited bullets but it is fed through a tube under the coat to an external source of ammunition, which may come from his plant powers or he may just stock up on a lot of bullets that's up to interpretation but it has continuously fired for quite some time before. I'd have to rewatch the episodes after the upgrade for a benchmark on that.

as for the cross, I'll go ahead and write that up now.


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-01-2018

CHARACTER NAME:

Vash the Stampede

CHARACTER SOURCE:

Trigun (manga, film, and television)

CHARACTER HISTORY:

Vash the stampede grew up on a colony ship sent by mankind to repopulate on another planet, due to a series of events the entire fleet went off-course, eventually crashing into a wasteland planet where civilization as we know it was turned on it's head for the purposes of surviving on this barren planet. he spent all his days paying for the mistakes he's made and the sins of his brother up until the moment he finally confronted him. finally achieving peace. (

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Vash the Stampede is a 5'10" humanoid with excessively spiky blonde hair. His skin color is pale with a mole just under the corner of his left eye. He wears a studded red coat and a pair of gloves, along with colored shades to surpass Ozzy Ozborne himself. the gloves are belted just below the wrist and have iron bands on the fingers. The coat's collar extends up to Vash's chin.

STATS:
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:

Physical Strength -1000
Ranged Attack Proficiency -1000
Area Attack Proficiency -600

STARTING POWERS:

Master Acrobat -400

STARTING MOVES:

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt -300 (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
A silver, modified .45 Long Colt revolver, its bullets travel moderately faster than that of a standard gun of the model it is based off of. It has a break-top reload system and is accompanied by a couple clips for fast reload. The design doesn't have a rounded body, instead having two columns connected by an indented piece of metal, having the barrel be contained within the lower half rather than the top. The presumably solid portion in the top half instead contains a breakaway facade with a miniature plant.This revolver is never prone to jamming and contains a maximum of 6 bullets in the revolver chamber. The effective range extends to about 80 yards.

Hand-Cannon -600 (Ranged attack Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency)
Vash's left arm is a cybernetic arm with an integrated sub machine gun, fed through tubes under his trademark red coat. It is relatively powerful and fires around 3 bullets a second.though the entire arm is concealed under his glove and coat until he uses it.

Ode to a priest -600 tier 1 supermove (Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash uses the Punisher, a hulking weapon in the shape of a cross, which carries an assortment of 8 pistols (4 on each side) and 3 integrated armaments including 2 machine guns on the long end which totaled about 10 rounds a second. and a rocket launcher on the opposite. The cross is made of extremely sturdy metal which has taken direct fire from high caliber firearms and explosions without breaking. When not being used it is wrapped in an extremely large cloth bound by leather straps.

He fires a continuous battery of bullets out of the machine gun end of the cross, letting lose half a minute of continuous fire until releasing a rocket projectile out of the launcher end which travels up to 30 yards at around 9 miles/hour exploding in a radius of around 4 yards wide and 5 yards high. Thereafter he slams the cross into the ground presenting 8 preloaded pistols out of the sides (70 yard effective range, 7 round mag, double action) which he then
uses one by one into the smoke.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us?
Googling for PBP forums


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-02-2018

wtf is with the 10 years buffer between posts


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Dane Regan - 05-02-2018

(05-01-2018, 10:15 PM)Vash Wrote: AGL Arms .45 Long Colt -300 (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
A silver, modified .45 Long Colt revolver, its bullets travel moderately faster than that of a standard gun of the model it is based off of. It has a break-top reload system and is accompanied by a couple clips for fast 1-second reloads. The design doesn't have a rounded body, instead having two columns connected by an indented piece of metal, having the barrel be contained within the lower half rather than the top. The presumably solid portion in the top half instead contains a breakaway facade with a miniature plant. This revolver is never prone to jamming and contains a maximum of 6 bullets in the revolver chamber. The effective range extends to about 80 yards.

Hand-Cannon -600 (Ranged attack Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency)
Vash's left arm is a cybernetic arm with an integrated sub machine gun, fed through tubes under his trademark red coat. It is relatively powerful overall and fires around 3 bullets a second, never running out of ammo. It's made of metal, and can be used to punch with harder than a normal arm, but tends to move a bit slower and is more tiring to hit with due to its weight. The entire arm is concealed under his glove and coat until he uses it.

Ode to a priest -600 tier 1 supermove (Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash uses the Punisher, a hulking weapon in the shape of a cross, which carries an assortment of 8 pistols (4 on each side) and 3 integrated armaments including 2 machine guns on the long end which totaled about 10 rounds a second. and a rocket launcher on the opposite. The cross is made of extremely sturdy metal which has taken direct fire from high caliber firearms and explosions without breaking. When not being used it is wrapped in an extremely large cloth bound by leather straps. The cross is about as big as he is.

He fires a continuous battery of bullets out of the machine gun end of the cross, letting lose 10 seconds of continuous fire until releasing a rocket projectile out of the launcher end which travels up to 30 yards at around 300 miles/hour exploding in a radius of around 4 yards wide and 5 yards high. Thereafter he slams the cross into the ground presenting 8 preloaded pistols out of the sides (70 yard effective range, 7 round mag, double action) which he then
uses one by one into the smoke, firing only one shot from each.

I've added/changed the bolded words in your moves here. Either to add in details (like the cross size and reload time, and how his arm can be used for melee), or to change some parts.

Your super attack fired too much for a T1. Also, your rocket projectile was really slow. 9 mph is like... jogging speed. Somewhere between 300 and 600 mph is probably more accurate. At least more than about 250 miles/hour. If you want a slow rocket, I won't stop ya. It just seemed like a mistake.

Anyway, if you're okay with these changes, just say so. If not, go ahead and reply with corrections.

Lastly:
You can add spoiler tags by typing:
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RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-02-2018

Yeah, that all sounds good!


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-02-2018

and the rocket moves really slowly, it's more like a grenade launcher but the payload is pretty heavy for the size which I assume is the reason for it's speed, I just approximated since that was about the time between firing and hitting a target during wolfwood's first all out fight scene


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-02-2018

CHARACTER NAME:

Vash the Stampede

CHARACTER SOURCE:

Trigun (manga, film, and television)

CHARACTER HISTORY:

Vash the stampede grew up on a colony ship sent by mankind to repopulate on another planet, due to a series of events the entire fleet went off-course, eventually crashing into a wasteland planet where civilization as we know it was turned on it's head for the purposes of surviving on this barren planet. he spent all his days paying for the mistakes he's made and the sins of his brother up until the moment he finally confronted him. finally achieving peace. (

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Vash the Stampede is a 5'10" humanoid with excessively spiky blonde hair. His skin color is pale with a mole just under the corner of his left eye. He wears a studded red coat and a pair of gloves, along with colored shades to surpass Ozzy Ozborne himself. the gloves are belted just below the wrist and have iron bands on the fingers. The coat's collar extends up to Vash's chin.

STATS:
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:

Physical Strength -1000
Ranged Attack Proficiency -1000
Area Attack Proficiency -600

STARTING POWERS:

Master Acrobat -400

STARTING MOVES:

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt -300 (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
A silver, modified .45 Long Colt revolver, its bullets travel moderately faster than that of a standard gun of the model it is based off of. It has a break-top reload system and is accompanied by a couple clips for fast 1-second reloads. The design doesn't have a rounded body, instead having two columns connected by an indented piece of metal, having the barrel be contained within the lower half rather than the top. The presumably solid portion in the top half instead contains a breakaway facade with a miniature plant. This revolver is never prone to jamming and contains a maximum of 6 bullets in the revolver chamber. The effective range extends to about 80 yards.

Hand-Cannon -600 (Ranged attack Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency)
Vash's left arm is a cybernetic arm with an integrated sub machine gun, fed through tubes under his trademark red coat. It is relatively powerful overall and fires around 3 bullets a second, never running out of ammo. It's made of metal, and can be used to punch with harder than a normal arm, but tends to move a bit slower and is more tiring to hit with due to its weight. The entire arm is concealed under his glove and coat until he uses it.

Ode to a priest -600 tier 1 supermove (Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash uses the Punisher, a hulking weapon in the shape of a cross, which carries an assortment of 8 pistols (4 on each side) and 3 integrated armaments including 2 machine guns on the long end which totaled about 10 rounds a second. and a rocket launcher on the opposite. The cross is made of extremely sturdy metal which has taken direct fire from high caliber firearms and explosions without breaking. When not being used it is wrapped in an extremely large cloth bound by leather straps. The cross is about as big as he is.

He fires a continuous battery of bullets out of the machine gun end of the cross, letting lose 10 seconds of continuous fire until releasing a rocket projectile out of the launcher end which travels up to 30 yards at around 15 miles/hour exploding in a radius of around 4 yards wide and 5 yards high. Thereafter he slams the cross into the ground presenting 8 preloaded pistols out of the sides (70 yard effective range, 7 round mag, double action) which he then
uses one by one into the smoke, firing only one shot from each.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us?
Googling for PBP forums


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-03-2018

Friendly reminder I have 2 posts backlogged


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Dane Regan - 05-04-2018

(05-02-2018, 09:35 PM)Vash Wrote: [spoiler]CHARACTER NAME:

Vash the Stampede

CHARACTER SOURCE:

Trigun (manga, film, and television)

CHARACTER HISTORY:

Vash the stampede grew up on a colony ship sent by mankind to repopulate on another planet, due to a series of events the entire fleet went off-course, eventually crashing into a wasteland planet where civilization as we know it was turned on it's head for the purposes of surviving on this barren planet. he spent all his days paying for the mistakes he's made and the sins of his brother up until the moment he finally confronted him. finally achieving peace. (

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

Vash the Stampede is a 5'10" humanoid with excessively spiky blonde hair. His skin color is pale with a mole just under the corner of his left eye. He wears a studded red coat and a pair of gloves, along with colored shades to surpass Ozzy Ozborne himself. the gloves are belted just below the wrist and have iron bands on the fingers. The coat's collar extends up to Vash's chin.

STATS:
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:

Physical Strength -1000
Ranged Attack Proficiency -1000
Area Attack Proficiency -600

STARTING POWERS:

Master Acrobat -400

STARTING MOVES:

AGL Arms .45 Long Colt -300 (Ranged Attack Proficiency)
A silver, modified .45 Long Colt revolver, its bullets travel moderately faster than that of a standard gun of the model it is based off of. It has a break-top reload system and is accompanied by a couple clips for fast 1-second reloads. The design doesn't have a rounded body, instead having two columns connected by an indented piece of metal, having the barrel be contained within the lower half rather than the top. The presumably solid portion in the top half instead contains a breakaway facade with a miniature plant. This revolver is never prone to jamming and contains a maximum of 6 bullets in the revolver chamber. The effective range extends to about 80 yards.

Hand-Cannon -600 (Ranged attack Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency)
Vash's left arm is a cybernetic arm with an integrated sub machine gun, fed through tubes under his trademark red coat. It is relatively powerful overall and fires around 3 bullets a second, never running out of ammo. It's made of metal, and can be used to punch with harder than a normal arm, but tends to move a bit slower and is more tiring to hit with due to its weight. The entire arm is concealed under his glove and coat until he uses it.

Ode to a priest -600 tier 1 supermove (Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Attack Proficiency)
Vash uses the Punisher, a hulking weapon in the shape of a cross, which carries an assortment of 8 pistols (4 on each side) and 3 integrated armaments including 2 machine guns on the long end which totaled about 10 rounds a second. and a rocket launcher on the opposite. The cross is made of extremely sturdy metal which has taken direct fire from high caliber firearms and explosions without breaking. When not being used it is wrapped in an extremely large cloth bound by leather straps. The cross is about as big as he is.

He fires a continuous battery of bullets out of the machine gun end of the cross, letting lose 10 seconds of continuous fire until releasing a rocket projectile out of the launcher end which travels up to 30 yards at around 15 miles/hour exploding in a radius of around 4 yards wide and 5 yards high. Thereafter he slams the cross into the ground presenting 8 preloaded pistols out of the sides (70 yard effective range, 7 round mag, double action) which he then
uses one by one into the smoke, firing only one shot from each.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us?
Googling for PBP forums[/spoiler]

Awesome. This looks good to me. Sorry for being a bit slow here. Anyway, remember, if you want to upgrade and change your moves at a later date you can do so by resubmitting for approval (see the move approval thread). I can't activate your account, but I'm pinging another staffer to do that for you. After that, you should be able to post as usual and use the chatbox.

Here is your roster:

Name: Vash the Stampede
Spent OM: 4200
Consumed OM (0): (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Proficiencies (2600): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Attack Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers (400/8000): Master Acrobat (400)
Moves (600): AGL Arms .45 Long Colt (300), Hand-Cannon (600), 
Super Moves (600): Ode to a priest (600)
Transformations (0): 
Assists (0):
Items (0):
Artefacts: None
Bases (0): 
Unlocks (0): 
Base stats: 
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:2
TEC:4

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Thank you for joining the Omniverse, we hope you enjoy your stay!


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Vash - 05-04-2018

Oh no, I thought you might've missed it since there was a bunch of other posts so I thought it might've gotten buried under the others


RE: Joining: Vash the Stampede - Dane Regan - 05-04-2018

(05-04-2018, 03:06 PM)Vash Wrote: Oh no, I thought you might've missed it since there was a bunch of other posts so I thought it might've gotten buried under the others

Nah. It was nagging in the back of my mind. Only just got around to it.